虚拟语气在写作的运用.doc

巧用虚拟语气提高作文档次
一． 用虚拟语气改写以下句子：
1. My teacher advised me to put my heart into my studies.

2. It is time for them to go out for relaxation.

3. I regret wasting so much time on meaningless things.

4. It is necessary for a teacher to have a thorough knowledge of the subject he teaches.

5. My head teacher treats me very well.

6. I really want you to stay a little longer.

7. He had meant to go to the cinema with you, but one of his friends came to visit him then.

8. We didn’t work hard and failed eventually.

9. He came to help me and I fulfilled the new task ahead of schedule.

二． 用虚拟语气拓展要点。
1. 感谢老师对我的无私帮助。

2. 父母对“我”过度严格，导致“我”丧失自由，渴望得到解脱。

3. “我”后悔过去虚度光阴，以至忽略甚至荒废了学业。

三．高考写作中的虚拟语气。
1. 假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应？（2009广东高考）
2. 假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？（2013广东高考）
3. 假设你是学校校长，谈谈你将如何处理违纪学生，并陈述理由。
（2009广州一模）
4. 假如你是父母一方，你会如何磨砺自己的孩子？
参考范文
1. If I were in the same position as the animals in the zoo, I would be strongly against being photographed. Not having peaceful surroundings to sleep in, I would feel rather tired and annoyed.
2. If there were no cleaners in the world, we would undoubtedly live in a messy, dirty and smelly environment, which would badly affect our health.
3. Were I in charge of a school, I would also be very strict with the students who don’t behave well. I would first warn and then suspend the students who disturb the learning of others or disrespect their teachers. Also, it is necessary that I visit the poor students’ home and discuss the problems with their parents so that we could find some solutions.
4. If I were a parent, I would first keep my child well informed that life is never easy and that he should be ready to face any difficulties. Besides, I would expose him to the hardships in life instead of protecting him from difficulties, which would provide him with chances to fight for his bright future by conquering challenges.

一．改写句子参考答案：
1. My teacher advise that I should put my heart into my studies.
2. It is high time that they went out for relaxation.
3. I wish I hadn’t wasted so much time on meaningless things.
(How I wish...!)
4. It is necessary that a teacher should have a thorough knowledge of the subject he teaches.
5. My head teacher treats me so well that it seems as if she were my mother.
6. How I wish you could/would stay a little longer!
7. He would have gone to the cinema with you if one of his friends hadn’t come to visit him.
8. We might have succeeded if we had worked hard.
9. Had it not been for his help, I would not have fulfilled the new task ahead of schedule.
Or: Without his help, I would not have fulfilled the new task ahead of schedule.

二．用虚拟语气拓展要点。
1. 感谢老师对我的无私帮助。
Mr. Zhang treats me so well that it seems as if I were her son. Had it not been for her selfless and generous help, I would have given up my study and dropped out of school. How grateful I am to her for her kindness!
2. 父母对“我”过度严格，导致“我”丧失自由，渴望得到解脱。
My parents are so hard on me that it seems as if I were a bird confined in a cage without freedom. They always put pressure on me and would rather I spent all my time and energy on studies. How I wish my parents could stand in my shoes and come to realize that I should balance study with relaxation.
3. “我”后悔过去虚度光阴，以至忽略甚至荒废了学业。
I used to waste so much time surfing the Internet and watching TV that I neglected my study totally. I wish I hadn’t wasted so much time playing. Instead, I should have devoted my energy to improving my studies. If I had made an effort, I would have made greater progress. Now, I’m well aware that it’s high time I focused on my studies.