浙江3套新高考英语试题读后续写部分及参考答案.docx

2016年10月：
读后续写（满分25分）阅读短文，根据所给情节续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
　　One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, "I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.
　　With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
　　"Tom!" she cried. "Help!"
　　No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
　　Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
　　As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；
3. 续写部分分为两段,段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane…
Paragraph 2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
2016年10月 浙江高考 续写答案
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But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. Although she felt a little sad, she didn’t get fearful. She thought about Tom. “He must have called for those helicopters. Maybe he was in one of them and will come back again! I have to guide him tomorrow.” She fell asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.
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 It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. Fortunately, she saw a huge flat rock in an open area at a distance. She rushed to the rock, climbed onto it and waited. To her great joy, the helicopter appeared again. The nearer it got, the more she flagged the yellow blouse. Luckily, the helicopter didn’t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and ran towards Jane. She broke down and burst into tears.   (续写词数：154)
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But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane tried to find shelter from the night cold. But unfortunately, she slipped over and broke her leg. With the extreme pain, Jane managed to make her way to a rock for shelter. Under the rock, Jane stayed wide awake, knowing she might not be able to get to the lake with a broken leg. “Don’t be afraid. Tom must be searching for me. And the helicopter will come back tomorrow,” she thought to herself. After quite a while, Jane fell asleep.
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It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She struggled to her feet and headed for the stream. After having some berries and stream water, Jane walked slowly to an open area to wait for her rescue. To her great joy, she soon heard the helicopter. Jane madly waved her yellow blouse when it came into sight. Sadly, the helicopter flied away again. However, soon came the rescue team, together with Tom, who had found Jane’s location from the helicopter. Jane was saved.  (续写词数：163)

2017年6月浙江卷
读后续写（满25 分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节续写，使之构成一个完整故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled ( 骑行 ) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “ Man, that’s a big dog! ” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf : quickly catching up with him. Mac’ s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase.（追赶）
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’ d be easy caught up and the wolf would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2017年6月 续写答案
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The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Seeing the car stop, Mac jumped off his bicycle immediately and rushed to the door of the car. So frightened was he that he hardly said a whole sentence, but stammered, “the wolf ……, please let me in.” Seeing the wolf running towards the car, Paul opened the door without any hesitation, pulling Mac into the car. Three men in the car were staring out of the window and saw the wolf standing there, thinking how to fight back the wolf.
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A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. About a hundred meters away, the two men stopped and realized what had happened to their friend. Being aware of the wolf’s cruelty and not to startle the wolf, they were determined to stay where they were and attempted to think out an idea. Suddenly, one of the cyclists touched the food bad which they brought. A good idea occurred to him that they could lead the wolf to the forest by throwing their beef and pock away. Smelling the flavor of the meat, the wolf turned around and ran alongside the meat. The two cyclists u-turned in a crossroads. What comforted the two cyclists was that Mac did not get injured. “Thank you for stopping to save me, said Mac to Paul and Becky. Mac and his two friends decided to go back home in case they would run into the wolf again.

2017.11月 读后续写
   阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprises and amusements,  all because of my mother — loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip  we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. 
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents 
decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the 
way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I 
unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? 
Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games,
camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off 
again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten. 
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if  Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while 
I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about  to take any chances. 
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous
To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our
 objections. If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been 
delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a 
vacancy in the next town.  
注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.___
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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.______
解析1：题型解读 
原题大意： 我的母亲和健忘（absent-minded and forgetful）,一家四口去祖父母在的省自驾旅游，途中发生了有趣的事情，比如爸爸叫我盯住妈妈，以防她开车的时候睡着： 第一段开头句：我们拿出来新买的帐篷 第二段开头句：我们愉快地欣赏路边的景色 关键词： mom dad David (弟弟) tent camping nice trouble forgetful absent-minded 浙江省在新高考改革后的第三次的英语高考中，又又又一次考了续写！（说好的概要和续写交替出现呢？）但是这次的续写话题和之前两次又不太一样，（2016年10月：森林迷路；2017年6月：路上遇狼；）之前两次的话题都有着明确的主线和情节发展方向，但是这次的话题非常开放，主线非常不明确，进而导致的问题是同学们不知道该怎么展开处理了 。
实战解析 首先，根据文章当中第二段内容比较开心的基调，第一段的故事情节应该比较偏向正面感情色彩，例如：我们在露营过程中一起搭建帐篷的开心时光或露营过程中的趣事（尤其是前文有铺垫妈妈是个forgetful的人，这一点也可以埋下伏笔来表达后面过程中由于妈妈健忘而带来的趣事）（也有同学在此处描述了露营过程中对其他陌生人提供帮助，来集中体现nice这一个点）； 其次，第二段开头说来描述欣赏风景： 此处可以用一些描述景色环境的表达来烘托下氛围，但是第二段不能仅仅只能有景色描述； 例如：这里可以实写和虚写结合的方式，看到景色（同时回忆往事），最终把故事的落脚点放在“家人的感情”“亲情”“生活的乐趣”“与妈妈一起的趣事”等等角度都可以的；当然也有同学描述与陌生人的相遇，引出了陌生人的善意这个主题；总之这次的话题比较开放，情节可以写的角度比较多； 再次，除了情节方面的内容以外，以下几个方面是考生需要着重关注的得分点：字迹清晰程度，语法多样性和句式丰富性，衔接成分的使用，语言的场景恰当程度；高考英语写作中，考生所采用的句型结构一定程度上影响了老师对考生写作水平的判断；说到语法丰富性方面，例如在作文中用到从句结构、强调句、非谓语结构等。尤其应该注意的是：避免句型单一化，如通篇使用定语从句，这样反而使阅卷老师觉得该考生对句型掌握的不够充分。应该在文章写作中有意识地多使用不同的句型结构。例如： They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. （such...that结构）。 由于阅卷老师在评卷时的时间十分有限，在作文中放入显耀的连接词可以帮助老师快速抓住文章结构，促使老师更好地理解文章主旨，同时清晰的连接词可以显示作者写作时严谨的逻辑。例如：upon one's arrival, then, however, besides, while等。

解析2：题型解读 
读后续写既考查学生对所学语言知识的运用能力，又考查学生的发散思维能力和创造力。该题型要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络和关系。续写这篇短文时，考生需要明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置变化、人物特征和情感等。在此基础上，考生顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用英语表达出来。同时，在组织语言时，切记使用5个以上给出的提示词。
读后续写表面看来难度不小，但在平时教学过程中，若能抓好词汇教学，注重词汇运用能力的培养，写出好的续写篇章是不成问题的。至于发散思维的培养，在高考备考阶段，如果能按话题进行词汇复习，将孤立的词汇通过话题联系起来，必然能起到事半功倍的效果。
◆ 续写分析 前文提要： 
第一段：童年有趣，总是充满惊喜和欢乐，皆因母亲可爱又迷糊健忘的性格。 
第二段：准备出游，万事俱备，但出发两小时后又返回家中，因为妈妈忘了钱包等。 
第三段：兄弟俩对母亲的粗心大意可谓是心有余悸，生怕妈妈把他们落在加油站的厕所里独自上路，以至于上厕所要轮流“放哨”。 
 第四段：妈妈是善良的，自然认为所有人都和自己一样善良，所以在找不到有空房的酒店时，妈妈才提议去别人的院子里搭帐篷。兄弟俩很紧张，还好爸爸否决了这个提议。最终一家人还是住进了酒店。 
续写线索：            
第一段所给首句：The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with
  us.  本段开头与前文衔接不太自然，却也就给考生提供了更为广阔的想象空间。既然记起了帐篷，那么可以围绕帐篷展开段落，可以体现母亲的“健忘”，也可突出母亲的“善良”，落脚在一些比较有趣的事上，与第一段“surprise and amusements”呼应。 
第二段所给首句：We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along  the
 way.  与前文“意外不断”不同，本段画风突变，转而写风景，续写可往心情愉悦的方面写。此处可以用一些描述景色环境的表达来烘托氛围，最终可把故事的落脚点放在“亲情”“生活的乐趣”“母亲的趣事”等方面。
 ◆续写词汇 
已给提示词汇： 
absent-minded, forgetful, trip, David, camping, tent, Mom, Dad, trouble, nice 
话题激活词汇： 
情感：happy, glad, wonderful, terrific, great 动作：laugh, smile 
交通、旅行：drive, pull over, set the brake, set out, set off, trip, journey 
环境：scenery, mountain, range, valley, river, lake, forest, sun, set, wind, blow 
题型解读3：
本次的为续写的写作，续写的文本内容相对比上次的难， 今年的续写与以前两次不一样，出现了标题，也不是遇险了。初看文章有些地方情节不太顺畅。比如在第五段，作者表明他们不喜欢用帐篷，可是第六段的段首句说：The next day 
we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.我们记起了我们已经带来的帐篷。衔接不太自然啊。但这里也就给考生提供了更为广阔的想象空间。怎样更为合理？ 
本次续写发挥空间比较大。比如续写第一段，说记起了帐篷，那后面我们会围绕帐篷展开一些话题。（当然也可能不这样处理）按照“妈妈”健忘以及好心的性格特点，预测会发生一些有趣的事。估计会产生一些问题，然后这些问题解决了。因为续写第二段段首句表明他们顺利经过几个州，而且沿途欣赏美丽的景色，说明第一段结束的时候，一切进展顺利。 "We drove through  several states and saw  lots of 
great sights along the way." 
续写第二段段首语，明显画风变了，”saw lots of great sights along the way" 有心情欣赏美景了。之前是令人烦恼的，那么之后是令人快乐的。在优美的景色里，上演他们家人之间美妙的事。这里就需要考生发挥足够的想象力。考虑到文章第一句话I had an interesting childhood，最后一段要不要首尾呼应一下，说明会发生怎样interesting。文章最终体现的主题应该是亲情，是爱。 
总体来看，2017年浙江省高考英语试卷难度保持稳定，有较难的部分，但是相对来讲难易结合，较好地考查了考生对基础知识的掌握、语言运用的能力和一定的思维能力。

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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. But then 
we were half an hour away from the hotel, where the tent was left behind. Dad recommended buying a new one, while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it, saying “Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly, so it’s unwise to give up the tent.” Finally, we got back the tent and hit the road again. If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded, it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again. 
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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. One day, towards evening, we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain. David and I helped Dad put up the tent, and Mom was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun  cast anorange light over the mountains, the tent was set up and the meal was ready. Sitting around the camp fire, we talked and laughed.  Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of
 the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom’s face. (续写词数163) 
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. To our 
delight, Mom gave up the idea of camping in some stranger’s backyard. Instead, we found a wonderful camping site in the wild. It was a clearing in the woods by a small lake, where Dad could catch some fish for dinner. We had no trouble setting up our tent, but we were disappointed to find that Mom forgot to pack up pillows. Needless to say, we all woke up with a sore neck the next morning.

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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. It was a 
fantastic trip. We crossed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high mountains, and 
overlooked deep valleys. During the trip, Mom’s beingabsent-minded not only got us into much trouble, but also gave us many funny moments. But luckily, she was not so forgetfulas to leave me and Davidbehind in the gas station bathrooms. We all arrived a