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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Writing,(CET-4),Guo Jia,第1页,历年真题范文观赏,习作基础技能,模拟话题&范文,经典句型摘抄,Introduction,第2页,Creating a Green Campus,In the last few years,environmental pollution has become,the,focus of public attention,.Many universities have,taken,effective measures,to build green campuses.Obviously,it has,Been realized that creating a green campus is,extremely,important.,Actually,creating a green campus contains not only building a,Beautiful campus environment,but also,fostering,a strong sense,of environmental protection.Young people are the,backbone,of,nation-building.Thus,only if,they develop the sense of,environmental protection,can they,build a green country in the,future and contribute their knowledge and energy to the society.,Models to share,第3页,Therefore,as university students,we should,play an,active role,in the actions of building a green homeland.,First,we should always,bear,saving resources,in mind,.,For example,turn off the water tap after using it.,Second,we should,assume our responsibilities,to,spread the spirit so as to,call upon,more people to join,in this,promising,project.,注意闪光词汇,第4页,Basic writing skills,Writing failures,1,Checking standard,2,words&phrases,3,Writing models,4,第5页,学生作文中经常出现错误：,标题,单词拼写、大小写、标点符号随心所欲,词语搭配张冠李戴,句子时态混乱，主谓不一致,非谓语动词,从句滥用,第6页,分数等级,评分标准,2分,条理不清，思绪混乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子都有错误，且多为严重错误。,5分,基本切题，表示思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重语言错误。,8分,基本切题，有些地方表示思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误较多，其中一些是严重错误。,11分,切题，表示思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少许语言错误。,14分,切题，表示思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性很好，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。,第7页,英语写作高分秘诀:,主题切题段落连贯语言生动,1,句式要有改变,复合句、并列句,倒装句,（,1,）虚拟语气中,if,省略 （,2,）,only+,状语置于句首 （,3,）否定词置于句首 （,4,）地点副词置于句首,强调句型,It is that(who),非谓语动词。,虚拟语气,固定句型结构,tooto sothat such athat not onlybut also neithernor such as not until so that eitheror,2,用词面广，遣词造句得当,3.,使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，一气呵成,。,第8页,列举：1.for the first point,first,in the first place,firstly,first of all,2.for the second point,second,secondly,again,and then,dddddd,further more,in addition,moreover,3.for the last point,last,finally,lastly,last but not least,并列关系：and,as well as,not onlybut also,likewise,alike,递进关系：also,besides,in addition,furthermore,moreover,whats more,most importantly,转折关系：but,yet,whereas,while,however,although,otherwise,still,in spite of,despite,instead of,nevertheless,nonetheless,时间次序：while,when,soon after,before,afterward,finally,first,then,next,as soon as,at the same time,formerly,immediately,in the meantime,presently,simultaneously,subsequently,比较(相同性)：like,similarly,equally important,likewise,just as,in the same way,对比（不一样点）：unlike,on the contrary,on the other hand,conversely,in contrast(to),举例：for example,for instance,such as,to illustrate,take as an example,like,深入阐述：in other words,that is to say,in simpler words,to put it another way,因果关系：for,because,as,since,so,as a result,thus,hence,therefore,accordingly,consequently,总结 in a word,in general,in short,in conclusion,in summary,indeed,above all,after all,on the whole,all in all,generally speaking,第9页,准备项目：,对于社会热点问题和热议现象，四六级作文也希望大学生有自己看法和主张，比如盗版现象，电子书，以及一次性塑料袋等。,准备重点：,对于这一命题，我们主要以两种模板来应对两种写作模式。一个以社会热点引出问题开头，着重于现象背后缘由以及其处理方案（,现象分析型,）。另一个以分析可争议问题两面性为主体（,利弊型,）。,第10页,(1)模板一,With the development of modern industry,more and more people,are concerned about the problem that _(主题问题).,Accordingly,_(伴随主题问题,出现新问题)is becoming more and more serious。,Confronted with _(主题问题)，,we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the,situation.For one thing,_(处理方法1).,For another,_(处理方法2).,Finally,_(处理方法3)。,As far as I am concerned,the best way out is,_(处理方法3).Consequently,Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because _(处理方法3优点和好处)。,现象分析型,第11页,(2)模板二,With the development of the society,with the advent,of _(相关事物或现象)，we have to face,a problem that _(主题问题)。,What are the reasons for it?In the following,paragraphs,Ill venture to explore the reasons.To start,with,_(阐述原因1).Moreover,_(阐述原因2).In addition,_(阐述原因3)。,In view of the seriousness of the problem,effective,measures should be taken.For one thing,it is high time,that people all over China realized the importance of,_(处理主题问题).For another,the,government should issue strict laws and regulations in,order to put the situation under control。,第12页,Model writing:Drunk Driving,1.酒后驾车增多原因；2.酒后驾车危害；3.怎样降低酒后驾车,。,第13页,Drunk Driving,There has been a rise recently,in the number of drunk driving incidents.There are,in my opinion,a number of reasons for this increase.For one thing,more cars are on the road than in the past.For another thing,a general increase in income and in social activities,leads people to,drinking and then driving.,All of these factors,make it more likely that,drunk driving incidents will increase.,Some drunk drivers may fortunately harm no one.However,many of them end up in minor to serious road accidents,at least,damaging their or others property,and,at worst,injuring or killing someone.,To help reduce drunk driving,stiffer penalties,should be imposed.Even if there is no accident,the drivers license of a driver who is caught should be,revoked,forever.Restaurants and bars should also help by,monitoring,their drinking customers.If customers are drunk when they leave,the restaurant or bar employees should help them to get a taxi.If the customers,insist on,driving,the employees should call the police.,第14页,1)模板一,Nowadays many people prefer _(主题),because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows.On one hand,_(主题优点1).On the other hand,_(主题优点2)。,But everything can be divided into two.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that,_(主题缺点1).To make matters worse,_(主题缺点2)。,Through the above analysis,I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects.Whatever effects it has,one thing is certain,_(主题)itself is neither good nor bad.It is the effects to which it is put that determine its value to our society。,利弊型,第15页,(2)模板二,With the development of science and human civilization,many formerly unimaginable things come into reality.Some of them have positive effects on our life,but some are distasteful.The phenomenon,of _(主题现象)is an example of the former/latter one。,There are many factors that may account for it,and the following,are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with,_,(原因1).Furthermore,_(原因2).Eventually,_(原因3)。,Good as _(主题现象)is,it has,unfortunately,its,disadvantages.The apparent example is that _(缺点例子1).,In addition,_(缺点例子2)。,On the whole,the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress,of the modern society.There is still a long way for us to improve/,eliminate _(主题现象)and make our life more comfortable。,第16页,Model writing:On Earth Hour 1.为了应对世界气候改变，3月27日“地球一小时”活动在全球展开，提倡人们熄灯一小时；2.有些人表示同意，并用实际行动来支持环境保护；有些人则持反对意见，认为这是作秀；3.作为大学生，我看法。,第17页,On Earth Hour,To call attention to the,severity,of climate change,environmental groups are,calling on,people worldwide to support Earth Hour by turning off their lights for one hour on a certain day.The goal is to encourage people to reduce activities in their daily life that produce,carbon emissions,.,Some people are,in favor of,this opinion,and,take practical actions to,support this activity of environmental protection.However,some have,voiced loud opposition to,the Earth Hour,saying it is just for show.They point out that people turning off their lights for the Earth Hour,will neither,lead to a reduction in carbon emissions,nor,make significant changes to their habits and lifestyles.The focus on the Earth Hour will,end up,being a great waste of time and money.,As a college student,I,tend to,agree with the second point of view.Changes of habits and lifestyles,come about,slowly through the improvement of family environment,living standards and education.It is wise for those who support the Earth Hour to,focus their effort on,the above-mentioned areas rather than on the activities for only one hour out of a whole year.,第18页,Practice:,6月四级作文真题:Online Shopping1 现在网上购物已成为一个时尚2 网上购物有很多好处，也有不少问题3 我提议,此次作文考试带给我们依旧是当今社会热点话题即网络购物。这么作文其实对考生本身来说难度并不大，因为这个题目和我们生活息息相关。所以，对于这么文章，考生能够生活实际出发，进行简单构思从而把整篇文章整理出来。此次作文还是一篇小型议论文。按照四级作文格式要求，按照既经典又保守三段式结构来走，第一段我们还是总起引出网络购物作为一个势不可挡购物时尚这个话题;第二段主要从利弊两方面进行叙述，能够与传统购物模式去做一个对比;第三段主要从自己角度出发，谈谈怎样对待网购这个话题。,第19页,对比型议论文模板:,One of the controversial issues today is _.According to a recent survey,_.In this essay,I will discuss the positive and negative effects of this issue and offer my own view on it.On the positive aspect,one of the most significant advantages is that _(优点一).Moreover,_(优点二).Perhaps the primary advantage is that _.(优点三)On the negative aspect,for one thing,_.(缺点一)For another,_.(缺点二)As far as Im concerned,the benefits of _(主题)greatly outweigh its drawbacks.We should make better use of _(主题)and bypass its negative effects.,首段介绍现在社会很多消费者青睐网购，第二段介绍网购好坏，优点一是网购很方便，bring people convenience，星级词汇中高频吐血短语。优点二是消费者有很多项选择择，customers have a variety of choices。缺点是网购存在质量风险，质量是quality。结尾第三段只需把话题online shopping 填进去。,第20页,Online shopping,Recently,we have experienced a flood of online shopping websites in our daily life.The number of people who choose to shop online is on the rise.There is no doubt that shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youths.Obviously,Shopping on the Internet has opened up numerous benefits to us.To begin with,as is known to all,it is more convenient as online shopping offers us an extensive range of selection.Whats more,with online purchasing we can find radically lower prices and cheapest deals.However,on the other hand,the risks of online shopping can never be ignored.Firstly,it goes without saying that given the lack of ability to inspect merchandise before purchase,consumers are at higher risk of fraud.In the second place,merchants also risk fraudulent purchases using stolen credit cards or fraudulent repudiation of the online purchase.In view of current situation,I hold the viewpoint that the government has the responsibility not only to lay down the effective laws and regulations to supervise this new industry,but also to help the public be more sensible.Only by this way,can online shopping make our society much more harmonious.,高分范文,第21页,
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