CET-4作文评分标准1.doc

CET-Four 作文评分标准

切题
思想表达
连贯
语言错误
严重语言错误
2分
条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，
大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误
5分
基本
不清楚
差

较多的严重语言错误 （偶尔一个正确的句子）
8分
基本
有些地方不够清楚
文字勉强连贯
相当多
有一些
11分
切题
清楚
连贯
少量

14分
切题
内容较丰富
文字通顺，连贯性好
基本上无，仅有个别小错

2009年6月
Free Admission to Museums?
1. 越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是……
2. 有人认为这样做会带来一些问题
3. 在我看来……
Free Admission to Museums?
Nowadays, social appeared more and more free admission to museums. It’s in order to people wasted money. In adition, rich in people’s life and increase more knowledge.
But some people thought free admission to museums have brought much problems. In hand, a plenty of people visited the museums must have leaved some labage. In another hand, some visitors didn’t listen the museums workers. For example, this place was don’t photo. However, some people has still took the photo…….
In my opinion: …..
(2分)

Free Admission to Museums?
In order to enrich the culture of people, more and more museums were provided free admission. Somebody thought it would take some problems like that.
The first, because of free admission of museums were attracted a large numbers of people who interested in all around the world. And those who take part in effected the traffice crowed around the museums, even though affected people who live in next to museum daily life. Besides, free admissions of museum would attracted thief came in. what’s more, it would take oppsite point. Thanks to the museum was free, people would fasinate to part in.
In my personal opinion, I think it’s advisable for us to acquiatant ancient culture, increase our knowledge. It’s a chance to see many objects which never seen. And, it’s convience for us.
(5分)

Free Admission to Museums?
There is an interesting and instractive picture which goes like this: more and moremuseums are for people. They want more people go to museums.
But some people argue that it make some trouble for free for people. The reason is the economy of the museums would be worse and before. Worst of all, it may take a mess for more people come to the museums.
But I believe that it’s a good thing for us to go to the museums for free. There are some reasons as follows. Firstly, it can make our culture standard higher than before. Then our country will be more stronger

大学英语写作常用句型
文章开头句型
1. Now in many big cities (countries, colleges),
an overwhelming majority of the public ….
a significant proportion of college population….
a sizable percentage of people….
What account for (explains, lies behind) the phenomemon (problem)?
2. With the rapid (marked, amazing) development (improvement, increase, growth, decline in) …
With…playing an increasingly big role in… attaching much importance to…
more and more…
3. In recent few years, there is a sharp (dramatic, astonishing) increase (growth, rise, decline) in …
In the past few decades, there has been a increasing number (population, proportion) of … who…
原因结果句型
1. Ther are probably many (several, three, a number of , a variety of) reasons for this dramatic (significant, extraordinary) increase (decline, growth, change) in ….
First, …. Second, …. Finally….
2. Why did (do, have, are)…?
For one thing, To begin with, One reason is
For another, In the second place, Another reason is
Perhaps the main (primary, fundamental, most important) reason is…
3. The answer to this problem phenomenon involves many complicated factors. ……
as a result of due to
4. One may attribute (owe) the … to …
5. A number of factors could account for ( contribute to, lead to, result in) the …of (in) …

Difficulty in adapting to life away from home
Psychological problems like depression or social anxiety
Free time be supplied with free internet access related to schoolwork
Be academically dismissed in the danger of developing an addiction to internet gambling