CET-4作文评分标准1.doc

CET-Four 作文评分标准切题思想表达连贯语言错误严重语言错误2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误5分基本不清楚差较多的严重语言错误 （偶尔一个正确的句子）8分基本有些地方不够清楚文字勉强连贯相当多有一些11分切题清楚连贯少量14分切题内容较丰富文字通顺，连贯性好基本上无，仅有个别小错2009年6月Free Admission to Museums?1. 越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是2. 有人认为这样做会带来一些问题3. 在我看来Free Admission to Museums?Nowadays, social appeared more and more free admission to museums. Its in order to people wasted money. In adition, rich in peoples life and increase more knowledge.But some people thought free admission to museums have brought much problems. In hand, a plenty of people visited the museums must have leaved some labage. In another hand, some visitors didnt listen the museums workers. For example, this place was dont photo. However, some people has still took the photo.In my opinion: . (2分)Free Admission to Museums?In order to enrich the culture of people, more and more museums were provided free admission. Somebody thought it would take some problems like that.The first, because of free admission of museums were attracted a large numbers of people who interested in all around the world. And those who take part in effected the traffice crowed around the museums, even though affected people who live in next to museum daily life. Besides, free admissions of museum would attracted thief came in. whats more, it would take oppsite point. Thanks to the museum was free, people would fasinate to part in.In my personal opinion, I think its advisable for us to acquiatant ancient culture, increase our knowledge. Its a chance to see many objects which never seen. And, its convience for us.(5分)Free Admission to Museums?There is an interesting and instractive picture which goes like this: more and moremuseums are for people. They want more people go to museums.But some people argue that it make some trouble for free for people. The reason is the economy of the museums would be worse and before. Worst of all, it may take a mess for more people come to the museums.But I believe that its a good thing for us to go to the museums for free. There are some reasons as follows. Firstly, it can make our culture standard higher than before. Then our country will be more stronger大学英语写作常用句型文章开头句型1. Now in many big cities (countries, colleges), an overwhelming majority of the public .a significant proportion of college population.a sizable percentage of people.What account for (explains, lies behind) the phenomemon (problem)?2. With the rapid (marked, amazing) development (improvement, increase, growth, decline in) Withplaying an increasingly big role in attaching much importance to more and more3. In recent few years, there is a sharp (dramatic, astonishing) increase (growth, rise, decline) in In the past few decades, there has been a increasing number (population, proportion) of who原因结果句型1. Ther are probably many (several, three, a number of , a variety of) reasons for this dramatic (significant, extraordinary) increase (decline, growth, change) in .First, . Second, . Finally.2. Why did (do, have, are)? For one thing, To begin with, One reason isFor another, In the second place, Another reason isPerhaps the main (primary, fundamental, most important) reason is3. The answer to this problem phenomenon involves many complicated factors. as a result of due to 4. One may attribute (owe) the to 5. A number of factors could account for ( contribute to, lead to, result in) the of (in) Difficulty in adapting to life away from homePsychological problems like depression or social anxietyFree time be supplied with free internet access related to schoolworkBe academically dismissed in the danger of developing an addiction to internet gambling