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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。谢谢,第1页,Task 1 G-letter writing,This task assesses the candidates ability to follow English letter writing conventions(i.e.,what order to put information in,what style to use,how to start and finish a letter,),to use language accurately and appropriately and to organize and link information coherently and cohesively,第2页,The situations they are asked to write about are common,everyday topics.,such as,writing to a college accommodation officer about problems with accommodation,writing to a new employer about time management problems they are having,writing to a local newspaper about a plan to develop a local airport,writing to a renting agency to sort out problems with the heating system in their house,第3页,The style of writing that candidates use depends who they are asked to write to.,Candidates need to write in a style that is appropriate for their audience and that will help them to achieve their purpose for writing,e.g.,writing to a friend(informal),writing to a manager(semi-formal or formal).,第4页,All the information from the bullet points,must be,included.,Candidates should note that they will be penalized for irrelevance if the response is off-topic or is not written as full,connected text,e.g.,using bullet points in any part of the response,or note form etc.,They will be severely penalized if their writing is plagiarized(i.e.copied from another source).,Candidates do not need to include any addresses at the head of their letters.,第5页,Candidates may be required to request or give information and/or explain a situation.To do this,they may need to do some of the following:,ask for general factual information,provide general factual information,express needs,wants,express likes or dislikes,express opinions/feeling,express complaints,make requests,make suggestions/recommendations,第6页,剑,6 P113-,FORMAL,You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country.You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.,Write a letter to,the landlord,.In your letter,Introduce yourself,Explain what is wrong with the furniture,Say what action you would like the landlord to take,第7页,正式信函格式,信头,Dear,Mr/Mrs+Sir name/Sir or Madam/officer/professor:,开头段,参考模板句型+写信目标,正文段,1,每段围绕一个点展开,:,要求,1+,自编信息,正文段,2,每段围绕一个点展开,:,要求,2+,自编信息,正文段,3,每段围绕一个点展开,:,要求,3+,自编信息,结尾段,参考模板句型+重申写信目标,信尾,Best regards/Best wishes,，,署名,full name:Jason Yin/Yi Yin,注,:,不用写地址,使用齐头式,顶格靠左,段和段之间空一行。,第8页,Dear Mr Smith,I am your tenant from Flat 3 on Riverside Street.We met each other when I signed the rental agreement in your office.,I have lived here for months now and,I am writing to complain about,some of the furniture.As you may remember,the dining table is in very poor condition and has uneven legs.It also does not match the dining chairs as there are too low to be comfortable for a table of that height.,When I first pointed this out to you,you agreed to provide a brand new dining set.However,you have not done so and,I would really like to resolve this matter as soon as possible.,If it is more convenient for you,perhaps you could simply replace the table by finding one of a suitable height for the chairs.This would solve the problems without too much cost,so I hope you agree to this proposed solution.,Looking forward to hearing from you,Yours sincerely,M.M.Egil,第9页,剑桥真题,8 P116-,INFORMAL,You have recently moved to a different house.,Write a letter to,an English-speaking friend,.,In your letter,Explain why you have moved,Describe the new house,Invite your friend to come and visit,Begin your letter as follows:,Dear.,第10页,半正式信函格式,信头,Dear,+given name,开头段,参考模板句型(或自己措辞)+写信目标,正文段,1,每段围绕一个点展开,:,要求,1+,自编信息,正文段,2,每段围绕一个点展开,:,要求,2+,自编信息,正文段,3,每段围绕一个点展开,:,要求,3+,自编信息,结尾段,参考模板句型(或自己措辞)+重申写信目标,信尾,Fondly/Love/Lots of love/XX:kiss&hug,署名,given name:Jason,注,:,不用写地址,使用齐头式,信尾开始靠右顶格,第11页,Dear Dave,I am writing to let you know that,at last we have moved to a bigger house,！,We just couldnt go on living in the two-bedroom bungalow now that the twins are growing up and the new baby has arrived.So we started looking-and one thing led to another and finally here we are in our new home.,Im sure youll like it.We have three bedrooms now,and a very modern bathroom and kitchen.The kids are happy because there is much more space with the big living room and the garden outside.But Michel is the happiest of all because he doesnt need to do much decorating.,Why dont you come round this weekend and see what you think of our new place?,We would all love to see you,and if the weather is good we can have a barbecue in the garden.,Our new address and phone number are below,so give us a call and,let us know when to expect you.,Lots of love,Francoise,第12页,G,类信函词汇语法注意事项,正式与半正式,informal&semi-formal,Noun,Verb,Phrase Verb,consideration,consider,think about,French/Latin(30%),Germanic(70%),inform,tell,schedule,set the date,礼多人不怪,be polite,apologize,very sorry,sorry,inform:,上级对下级,Id like you to know,下级对上级,第13页,G,类信函词汇语法注意事项,过去时,现在时,进行时 普通时,I was wondering/I am wondering/I wonder,语态,voice:,passive,客观,active,主观,被动语态描述事实,主动语态表述观点,不要用简写,no abbreviation,E.g.ASAP,AAMOF,LOL,第14页,雅思,G,类小作文惯用句型,10,种常考信函,投诉信,/,求职信,/,推荐信,/,道歉信,/,感激信,邀请信,/,问询信,/,请求信,/,失物信,/,提议信,注意正式和半正式句型区分,第15页,1.,投诉信开头惯用句式,I am writing to complain about,I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with sb about sth,I am writing to inform you that I am dissatisfied with your,I regret to have to inform you that,1.,投诉信结尾惯用句式,I would like to have this matter settled by the end of,It would be grateful if you could take this matter into consideration.,I understand you will give immediate attention to this matter.,I hope that the above situation will be improved as soon as possible.,Your effort to will be highly appreciated by all.,We will appreciate your willingness to.,I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.,Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.,第16页,2.,求职信开头惯用句式,I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a,I am very interested in exploring the possibility of obtaining a position as,2.,求职信结尾惯用句式,Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to meeting you.If you need to know more about me,please contact me at,I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.,Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.,第17页,3.,推荐信开头惯用句式,I would like to present for your consideration in your search for a.,With reference to your requirements,I shall,without reservation,recommend as an ideal candidate.,3.,推荐信结尾惯用句式,Therefore,I do not hesitate to recommend as the right person for your consideration.,Any favorable consideration to this letter would be considered a personal favor.,第18页,4.,道歉信开头惯用句式,I am writing to apologize for,I am writing to say sorry for,4.,道歉信结尾惯用句式,I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.,Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology.,I apologize most sincerely for,I am truly sorry to have done,Please forgive me,I owe you an apology,I am so sorry to have put you through so much trouble,第19页,5.,感激信开头惯用句式,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for,I am grateful to you for,I appreciate it more than I can say.,I truly appreciate your kindness.,I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for,I wish there were a better word than“thanks“to express my appreciation for your generous help.,5.,感激信结尾惯用句式,I must thank you again for your generous help.,Many thanks for your kindness and hospitality.,It was kind and generous of you to do this for me,and I appreciate it more than I can say.,Thank you from the bottom of my heart for,Thank you again for your kindness.,Again,I would like to express our warm thanks to you.,第20页,6.,邀请信开头惯用句式,I am writing to invite you to,I wonder if you could come,6.,邀请信结尾惯用句式,I would feel honored if you could come.,We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.,I really hope you can make it.,Its a pleasure for me to invite you to,We sincerely hope that you can make it.,We would be honored to have you there with us.,第21页,7.,问询信开头惯用句式,I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding sth.,I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding,I would like to request some information about,I am greatly concerned about,I would like to obtain some information about,7.,问询信结尾惯用句式,Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.,I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.,Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.,I am looking forward to hearing from you.,第22页,8.,请求信开头惯用句式,I am writing to seek for your assistance in,I am writing to formally request to,8.,请求信结尾惯用句式,I would like to thank you for your generous help in this matter.,I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.,Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.,9.,寻找失物信开头惯用句式,I am writing this letter to see if it is possible for me to have my back.,9.,寻找失物信结尾惯用句式,I would really appreciate it if you could do something about,I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.,Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.,第23页,10.,提议信开头惯用句式,I am writing to express my views concerning,You have asked me for my advice with regard to and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.,10.,表示提议惯用句式,I would like to suggest that,I would recommend that,As you may agree that,If I were you,I would,I feel that it would be beneficial if,It would seem to me that you could,10.,提议信结尾惯用句式,I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.,第24页,