英语写作技巧与写作注意事项样本.doc

第 七 讲：英 语 写 作 （二） 大作文往年试题：Directions: write a composition of no less than 250 words according to the outline given below. Sample 1My View on Playing Computer Games 1. 有些人认为学生打电脑游戏有利于智力开发。2. 有些人认为学生打电脑游戏妨碍学习。3. 我见解。Sample 2：对贫富差距加大现象谈谈见解 评分标准Global scoring a. Contentb. Language 2分: 条理不清， 思绪紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子全部有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分：基础切题。表示思想不清，连贯性差。有较多严重语言错误。8分：有些地方表示思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误较多，其中有部分严重错误。11分：切题。表示思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少许语言错误14分：切题。表示思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性很好，基础上没有语言错误，仅有部分小错。注：白卷，作文和题目毫不相关，或只有多个独立词而无法表示思想，给0分。严重错误语法错误There are many reasons caused the accident. The driver of the car no in. The life is becoming gooder and gooder. That day rain bigly.The man who through the streetThe car which in a fast speed hit him. The car which in a fast speed hit him. I got the place where happened the accident.Our city would happen many traffic. 写作注意事项1. 审好题，想好再写，不要写了又划掉，也不要写完了发觉字数不够有写，这么整篇文章就不联贯了。2. 把握好文章重心，通常“我见解”应该是重心。3. 注意写作格式缩进式或齐头式。4. 拿不准词、短语或使用方法应避免使用。5. 表示要清楚、简练，无须一味追求结构复杂而尽可能多使用从句，这么文章会显得很罗嗦。如：The economy is developing at a speed which is very fast. 6. 注意用词和搭配。7. 检验-s和-ed，尽可能避免严重错误。Choice of Words 1. Three levels of English words English native words (core) informal (oral) French or Spanish words Latin or Greek words (academic words) formal (written)Examples English French or Spanish Latin or Greekask inquire interrogate break sever separate fire flame conflagration house abode residence kingly royal regal manlymale masculine rise mount ascend time age epoch I know that I am aware that I believe that I am convinced that I have a good idea. A good idea occurs to me. Cause give rise to Emphasizelay emphasis onBecause of due to, owing to Stop, end come to a stop/end Suddenly all of a sudden Often more often than not 2. Connotation of Words (English explanation)common, peasant, assassinate, gay, acquire, date, property, enemy, problem, issue 3. General Vs Specific terms (overuse of general terms) beautiful, delicious, famous, Chinas English 小康社会、缘分、丞相、风水、三个代表 孔子、孟子、老子 轻易用错词1. 词性 lack, serve, contact, last, marry, concern, like2. 汉语影响 more perfect, very excellent, return back, repeat again, good memory power, listening ability, high quality goods learn the knowledge 常见错误(1) two predicates in one simple sentenceEvery year lots of familys sit at the front of TV wait this game after have delicious meal. There have many people like SFG.My mother cooks food is very delicious.(2) Omission and overuse of Be Nowday peoples life level is arise. Many person are like watch SFG in the eve. SFG was appeared since 1984. SFG is liked by many people. How fast time was gone! SFG can divide into several parts. We very busy. (3) Comparative degreemore and more betterbecome gooder and gooder, (4) Conjunctionbecause.soalthough.butWhile(5) I very like SFG. Very hate (6) Part of speech most of we Chinese, make me surprise, with the quick development of economic and social, In mys opinion, I advice to keep SFG. eating good, drinking good, playing good; good plays, good look, good use; I think it dues to the development, Lets analysis and discovery the main factors leading the changes.To men, women just liked clothes. they like it like me like it. two weeks past choose, choice, succeed, success, successful, die, dead, death(7) Choice of words The whole family assemble to have a dinner. congratulate Spring Festival, abolish (stop, give up) SFG, sit behind the TV to look SFG, Many people fall in love with watching SFG. We can elect other programs to see. celebrate SFG with bomb, stand in the shadow/shademosquito bite/stingIts a gay meeting/party (8) Phrasesin all in; one hand, another hand, third hand; at one hand, at second hand, at last hand; in one hand, from other hand; last but not the last, last but not most; on my opinion; A coin has two hands (coins). Everything has two hands (coins). (9) Spelling We cant cansle (cancer, cancle) it. SFG is watched by hole word. happyness, include (ing) SF, Every student include me enjoys Poor people maybe very angry (hungry). eat the soap (soup); BenefitialDrivedDispiteI will adopt to the campus life联 贯1. 并列：and, as well as on the one hand on the other hand for one thing. for another firstly.secondly.thirdlyfinallysubsequently, then, thereafter, afterward, in the following at first, initially, originally at last, eventually2. 递进：Moreover, Furthermore,In addition, Additionally What is moreBesidesApart from3. 转折ButYet HoweverNeverthelessWhileWhereasOn the contraryIn contrast4. 结果SoTherefore,ThusHenceAs a result （consequence）Consequently5. 原因Because (of) Due to Owing to On the account of In view of Thanks to On the grounds that6. 假设If.Given that Provided that Unless On the condition of As (so) long as 7. 其它(1) Sentence adverbs: absolutely, alternatively, currently, undoubtedly, certainly, consequently, subsequently , obviously (2) PP: in general, on average, in fact, in effect, in theory, in practice, in reality, in particular, (3) Adv speaking: generally speaking, broadly speaking, strictly speaking, theoretically speaking (4) precisely because, mainly because, merely because, only because段落用语Beginning:With the development of As is well known to We all know that As we all know As a proverb says, As a saying goes As for some people hold the opinion that. While others argue (maintain) that Every coin has two sides. It has merits and demerits.It has pros and cons. Supporters and opponents DevelopmentRecent researches have proven/shown/indicated that My arguments/reasons/ideas will be listed as follows: In the following paragraph, I will Firstly, secondly, and finally Why is it that .EndingAll in allIn a word In conclusionIn shortIn summary To sum upTo summarize In brief 其它用语be deeply rooted in be in favor of be opposed to It goes without saying that The past twenty years saw/witness Chances are No wonder It is likely that As time goes by When it comes to As illustrated/shown in the chart/table面试： 面试教授专业领域涵盖全部现有学科（人文科学、社会科学、技术科学、自然科学、学生德育五大类）,每大类组随机抽取1人,组成一个面试五人小组。面试前,教授们将审阅考生多种资料,包含考生们所提交入学申请材料和水平测试成绩等。面试时,由教授对学生一对一面试,每名学生全部要“连闯五关”,和5位教授面对面交谈,累计面试时间超出1个小时。教授组将从学生博学、社会实践、爱好、创新能力、时政了解、思想性等多方面考察学生综合素质,并依据面试结果作出是否录用提议。英语面试试题复旦：依据男女就业表格，给speaker写一份汇报。复旦：谈谈你所期望大学生活一天交大：依据twins，identical，doctor，fun编一个小说