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英文写作英文写作enjoy your writing高分作文的五大特性高分作文的五大特性v1.条理性.段落完整.层次分明v2.准确性.语法准确.用词精当v3.流畅性.层次清晰.行文连贯v4.简洁.多样性.语言简洁.不重复v5.思想性.文章立意高.表达个人观点内容积极向上英语写作方法六大原则v1.高级词汇原则v2.状语提前原则v3.短语优先原则v4.并列句.复合句和特殊句式原则v5.长短句交替原则v6.短文分段分层原则其他注意事项：v（1）字迹清楚，书写流利。v（2）审题认真，符合要求，文章观点明确。v（3）句子既要生动，又要简明扼要。v（4）尽量避免重复使用相同句型，词汇和短语使用分词使用分词Onceitisheld,itwillbringalotofchancestoBeijingandmakeitmoreprosperousandmodern.Once held,it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing,making it more prosperous and modern.学会使用丰富的句式学会使用丰富的句式使用定语从句使用定语从句Many pollution problems can be more serious,and it can eventually do damage to our surroundings.Many pollution problems can be more serious,which can eventually do damage to our surroundings.More visitors from all over the world will flood into China,which financially benefit Beijing.Whats more,more people will be attracted to Beijing,which will contribute to the development of tourism to a great extent.使用使用 with 结构结构When the number of tourists is increasing,traffic will become more crowded.With the number of tourists increasing,traffic will become more crowded.With more and more visitors going to Beijing,tourism will be flourishing.With everyone doing his bit,the game will be a great success.使用被动句使用被动句Measures should be taken to avoid the bad effect mentioned above.Only in this way can we hold a successful Olympic Games.使用倒装结构使用倒装结构二、学会使用较高级词汇二、学会使用较高级词汇用词准确、得体是写作的前提，在此基础上使用高级词汇和短语，既可以体现出作者的语言驾驭能力，又有助于获得高分。HowtouseadvancedexpressionsIn my opinion,it is difficult to hold the Olympics.In my opinion,it is challenging to hold the Olympics.It will have a great effect on the development of Beijing.far-reaching profound significant Tourism is becoming a booming industry with the development of the city.Chinawillenjoyaboomineconomy.促进促进 繁荣经济繁荣经济 旅游发展旅游发展Some students see it as a good opportunity to boost economy and accelerate the pace of the construction of our modern society.Holding the Olympic Games will promote the development of economy,making the city more booming and modern.China,which lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean,is rich in natural resources.It is a great country with a long history,covering an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.China,a large country with a long history,lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean.It is abundant in natural resources,covering an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.Replacetheunderlinedexpressions1.Among all the people going to work,car 2.drivers make up 18%.3.2.The Internet can help us finish many tasks.4.3.The library is important to us.5.4.One can only become a skilled one after many failures.6.5.Last year saw a more and more fierce competition in the job market.7.6.He tried to pass the exam,but plete accomplish fulfillvital essentialendless countless numerous witnessedattempted toamount to account forget through7.Some students dont value their money at all.8.It is also essential that you get some skills for taking exams.treasurecherishacquireobtaingain9.It would take me a great deal of time,which would surely invite numerous inconveniences to me.undoubtedlyunquestionably10.More and more people come to big cities,which causes serious housing problems.flood intocrowd intopour intodefinitelypracticev随着家庭收入的增加，越来越多的人们能买起个人电脑，空调，手提电脑和数码相机等等。（新旧变化）vWiththefamilyincomeraised,moreandmorepeoplecanaffordtobuypersonalcomputers,air-conditioners,portablecomputers,digitalcamerasandsoon.v.为了使得生态平衡,我们要保护野生动物.(新旧变化)vInordertokeepbalanceofnature,weshouldprotectwildanimals/wildlife.v多达百分之四十的男孩喜欢在网上打游戏。(观点讨论)vAsmanyas40percentoftheboyslikeplayinggamesonline.v我写这封信,申请你们在报纸广告中招聘的职位。我认为我适合这工作。(求职)vIwritethisletter,applyingforthepostyouoffered(offered)ontheadsinthenewspaper.vIthinkIamfit/suitableforthisposition.v.为了丰富学生的课外生活,学生会将组织一次邮票展览.(格式套用语)vInordertoenrichthestudentsout-of-classlife,thestudentsunionwillheldthisstampshow.vToenrichthestudentssout-of-classlife,thestudentsunionwillheldthestampshow.v如果我被接受,我一定会尽力干好工作.(人物介绍)vIfIamaccepted,Illsurelytrymyeveryefforttodothejobwell.v过去，人们过着贫困而简单的生活。（新旧变化）v4.Inthepast,peopleled/livedapoorandsimplelife.v(Theylivedpoorlyandsimply.)v绝大部分的学生上网只是聊天,打游戏或者看电影。只有少数学生是我为了搜索信息或者国内外新闻.(观点讨论)vMostofthestudentswhoareonnetarejusttohaveachat,playgamesorseefilms.vOnlyafewstudentsonnetarejusttoseekinformationorlearnaboutnewsbothathomeandabroad.v最近，我在200个学生中作了一个关于他们未来工作的调查。其中一半是男生，一半是女生。（观点讨论）vRecently,Ihavemadeasurveyamong200studentsabouttheirfuturejobs.Halfofthemareboysandhalfofthemaregirls.v(Ihavesurveyedamong200studentsaboutHalfofthemandtherest)v随着中国经济的发展和中国的进入WTO，越来越多的轿车将进入普通家庭。vWiththedevelopmentoftheChineseeconomyandChinasentryintoWTO,moreandmorecarswillenter/gointoordinaryfamilies.过渡词的使用v过渡词是一种关系指引词，一般由副词或起副词作用的短语承担。此外，代词、连词、上下文的近义词等也可作过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”，在文章中发挥着连接上下文的作用，学会恰当地运用过渡词会使文章结构紧凑，启、承、转、合，过渡自然，融会贯通，连成一体。v（1）表并列关系的过渡词：and,also，aswell,aswellas，or,too,notonlybutalso,bothand,eitheror,neithernor等。v（2）表递进关系的过渡词：besides,inaddition（加之，除之外）,moreover(此外，而且),whatsmore，whatsworse等。v（3）表转折对比的过渡词：but,however,yet,instead,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,although,differentfrom,despite,inspiteof,whereas,unlike,nevertheless,notonlybutalso,herethere,yearsagotoday,thisthat,theformerthelatter,thennow,thefirstwhereasthesecond,oncenow,ontheonehandontheotherhand,someothers等。v（4）表原因的过渡词：because,becauseof,since,as,for,nowthat,thanksto,dueto（由于）,forthisreason,owingto,asfaras,consideringthat,seeingthat等。v（5）表结果的过渡词：so,thus,therefore,asaresult,sothat,then,thereby,hence,sothat,suchthat,accordingly等。v（6）表条件的过渡词：if,unless,onconditionthat,as/solongas等。v（7）表时间的过渡词：vwhen,while,after,before,until,assoonas,later,afterwards,soon,lately,recently,since,fromthenon,eventually,inthemeantime,then,suddenly,atthesametime,next,earlythismorning/year/century,afterawhile,inafewdays,now,presently,finally,atlast,allofasudden,formnowon,atpresent,immediately,themoment等。v（8）表特定的顺序关系的过渡词：first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,aboveall,firstofall,then,next,finally,intheend,atlast,afterwards（后来）,meanwhile（几乎同时）,thereafter（在那以后）,last,finally,eventually（终于）等。v（9）表换一种方式表达的过渡词：inotherwords,thatistosay,toputitanotherway等。v（10）表进行举例说明的过渡词：forinstance,forexample,takeasanexample,namely,suchas,like,inotherwords,thatistosay,thatis等。v（11）表陈述事实的过渡词：infact,actually,asamatteroffact,totellyouthetruth等。v（12）表强调的过渡词：certainly,indeed,aboveall,surely,mostimportant,infact,nodoubt,withoutanydoubt,truly,obviously,ofcourse,actually,asamatteroffact,chiefly,especially,primarily,inparticular,undoubtedly,absolutely等。v（13）表比较、对比的过渡词：like,unlike,inthesameway,similarly,besimilarto,ratherthan,onthecontrary,bycontrast,oneonehand,ontheotherhand,otherwise等。v（14）表目的的过渡词：forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto等。v（15）表总结的过渡词：inaword(总之，简言之),ingeneral,inshort(总之),aboveall,afterall,generallyspeaking,tosumup,finally,inconclusion,toconclude,atlast,insummary,onthewhole等。v（16）表增补的过渡词：inaddition,furthermore,again,also,besides,moreover,whatsmore,similarly,next,finally等。v2、文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡词来完成，在修辞中称为启、承、转、合。“启”就是开头,“承”是承接，“转”是转折，“合”是综合或总结。（1）“启启”。用于表示。用于表示“启启”的过渡词或过的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落或文章的开头：渡性的语句通常用在段落或文章的开头：v过渡词：first,firstofall,atfirst,inthefirstplace,firstly,tobeingwith,tostartwith,recently,now,atpresent,inrecentyears,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,atpresent,lately,currently,v过渡句：Itisoftensaidthat,Astheproverbsays,Itgoeswithoutsayingthat,Itisclear/obviousthat,Manypeopleoftenaskv过渡词：second,similarly,inaddition,besides,then,furthermore,moreover,whatismore,whatisworse,forexample,forinstance,certainly,surely,obviously,inotherwords,especially,particularly,inparticular,indeed,still,third,truly,infact,atthesametime,nodoubt，（2）“承承”。表示。表示“承承”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第一个句中用在段落中的第一个句中：（2）“承承”。表示。表示“承承”的过渡词或过渡性的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第一个句中：的语句通常用在段落中的第一个句中：v过渡句：Itistruethat,Everybodyknowsthat,Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat,NoonecandenythatThereasonwhyisthat,Thereisnodoubtthat,Totakeforanexample(instance),Weknowthat,Whatismoreseriousisthat（3）“转”。用于“转”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第二个句中：v过渡词：but,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,incontrast,inanycase,atanyrate(无论如何),nevertheless(虽然如此),otherwise,or,orelse,while,whereas,but,despite,inspiteof.,yet,instead,v过渡句：Idonotbelievethat,PerhapsyoullaskwhyThismaybetrue,butwestillhaveaproblemwithregardto,Thoughweareinbasicagreementwith,yetdifferenceswillbefound,Thatswhyifeelthat（4）“合”。用于“合”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中：v过渡词：inaword,ingeneral,inshort,aboveall,afterall,generallyspeaking，tosumup,finally,inconclusion,atlast,insummary,therefore,asaresult,aboveall,thus，afterall(毕竟),eventually,hence,inshort,inconclusion,inaword,insum(总之),onthewhole(就整体而言),tosumupv过渡句：FromthispointofviewOnaccountofthiswecanfindthatTheresultisdependentonThus,thisisthereasonwhywemustAssignment假如你是一名大学生，对近年来大学毕业生假如你是一名大学生，对近年来大学毕业生就业情况颇有己见，请根据下面提供的信息就业情况颇有己见，请根据下面提供的信息向报社写信谈谈你的看法。词数向报社写信谈谈你的看法。词数120-150。学生心态向往城市，不愿下乡就业现状城市人才过剩，农村渴望人才就业前景农村天地广阔，可施展才华Deareditor,Imwritingtoyoutotalkabouttakingupoccupationsforcollegegraduates.Nowadaysmanygraduatesarelookingforwardtoobtainingemploymentinbigcities,notwillingtoworkinthecountryside.Asamatteroffact,therearenotenoughopportunitiestosatisfymostofthehuntersinbigcitieswhileinthecountryside,talentedpeoplearebadlyneededandalotofpostsarewaitingforus.Ruralareasareavastworld,youcanputyourabilitiestogooduseandyoullbeabletomakegreatercontributionstothebuildingofnewcountryside.Therefore,Ibelievewecanhaveasbrightafutureinthecountryaswehaveinthecity.