2025年英语中考英语书面表达测试题及答案2.doc

【英语】 中考英语书面体现测试题及答案

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1． 如今，诸多都市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环境保护、便捷而备受青睐，但同步也引起了某些问题。请你根据提醒以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，体现自已见解和提议。
要点提醒：
Advantages
Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力）
Take exercise…
Problems
Throw away, damage（毁损）, be stolen…
Advice
Civilized（文明）, follow the rules, take good care of…

注意：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，可合适发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名及地名；
3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Bike-sharing
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people.
First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（提议）
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文内容丰富，体现了所有要点，语言体现精确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: It's known that it has many advantages.，First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。
【点睛】
本文规定以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格内容提醒，写一篇短文，体现自已对共享单车见解和提议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中三个要点：首先，论述共享单车长处；另一方面，列举共享单车带来问题；最终，根据问题给出个人提议。

2．假如你即将在学校英语爱好小组活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点提醒如下:（1）几种月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞（do square dancing）。（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。（3） 目前，奶奶比此前健康了，有了诸多朋友。（4） 有些邻居故意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。（5） 你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但……
规定：（1）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可合适发挥。
Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.
A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.
In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，根据要点提醒写一篇学校英语爱好小组活动中发言稿。要注意伴随文章推进时态变化，一开始应当选择一般过去时，而背面应当选用一般目前时，最终体现自已观点时候也应当使用一般目前时。人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致关系，构思文章框架，列举出也许会用到好词好句，记住千万不能漏写信息要点。参照词汇就是必用词汇，一定要运用到文章当中。在写作中注意运用恰当连词，使文章愈加顺畅，自然。

3．书面体现
地球是我们家园，我们作为地球主人，就应当好好保护地球。目前正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球环境，不挥霍地球能源，就可以让我们周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应当怎样做呢？谈谈你想法。内容应当包括如下几点：
1. 节省用水、用电；2. 节省纸张，循环使用旧书本，保护森林；3. 节省粮食，在更多土地上种树；4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；
规定：短文中不得出现真实校名和人名；80词左右
提醒词：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式
How does our earth turn better?
The earth is our home. _______________________________________________________
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If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.
【答案】How does our earth turn better?
The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?
I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don't throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.
If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定构造But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

4．你有无由于没能好好管理时间而影响了学习经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你见解。
内容包括：1.你没完毕学习任务经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对怎样管理好时间给出几点提议。
作文规定：1.短文须包括所有提醒内容，可合适发挥。2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.
I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.
How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。而特殊非谓语动词构造Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

5．（题文） 书面体现
在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人新型家用智能机器人，它重要功能有：
1. 定期做饭、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；
3. 处理紧急状况（如：拨打120）
假如你是该机器人发明者，请你简介这个产品，并谈谈你未来设想。
规定：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；
2. 词数80词左右；短文开头已给出（不计入总词数）
3. 参照词汇： at a fixed time 定期
emergency 紧急状况
ccompany sb. 陪伴某人
Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.
I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.
I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.
【解析】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

6．Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，根据下表所列要点写一篇100词左右文章（文章开头已给出）。

学会对自已微笑

1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试败北、被他人误解等）。
2、使你自信，击败你人有时就是你自已。
3、有益于身心健康。

学会对他人微笑

1、便于与他人之间交流。
2、给他人带来快乐,自已也快乐。

微笑是一种语言

人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。

1、参照词汇： 对某人微笑 smile at sb. 误解 misunderstand
2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可合适发挥，使短文连贯穿顺。
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
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【答案】Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”
Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.
Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.
In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.
【解析】
这是一篇表格式作文，要点是一表格形式出现，首先要研究表格，找出需要体现要点，然后加以整合，也可以合适增长使意思更连贯，但要点一定要全，不能遗漏。写作时要注意遣词造句，不能受汉语影响，要用地道英语体现，注意时态，语态，单词拼写，语法等问题，用好简单句，合适用复杂句。可以用某些高级词汇。还要注意句子关联。

7．书面体现
每个人均有自已心爱物品，相信你也拥有一种自已心爱物品吧！请以“A（n） _____ I have”为题，描述一种或一件你心爱物品，并谈谈你是怎样得到它，以及它存在意义。
规定：1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品名字；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 语言体现精确，短文连贯穿顺，80词左右。
A（n） _________ I have
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【答案】A（n） toy gun I have
Everyone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.
In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.
When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.
Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!
【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自已最喜欢物品展开描述，规定是进行描述，并谈谈你是怎样得到它，以及它存在意义。写作难度是逐渐加深，在讨论其怎样获得时候要注意对使用时态，在谈论意义时候要注意体现精确性，避免不熟悉体现。
写作亮点：
这篇文章讲了自已最喜欢玩具枪，描述玩具枪时候有合适细节补充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黄布包着玩具枪），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪功能（small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自已小时候玩枪经历，精确使用了时态。在描述得到经历时候不落俗套，讲到了自已家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我盈利买枪，写作是富有感情，也通过这段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一定意义。最终玩具意义得到了升华，体现了作者期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家卫国层面，这样一篇作文是有深度，可以让人感动，是一篇优秀范文。

8．书面体现
假设你将代表你校毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言
稿，发言稿内容要点如下：
回忆漂亮校园、生动有趣教学、三年来收获；感谢老师培养、父母支持、同
学协助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。
注意：1. 90词左右。发言稿开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可合适发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of .
Thank you for listening!
【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of .
It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learn