2025年英语九年级上册英语试卷分类汇编英语书面表达及答案含解析2.doc

【英语】九年级上册英语试卷分类汇编英语书面体现(及答案)含解析

一、英语书面体现
1．今天手机在我们平常生活中已广泛使用。但中学生在学校与否应当持有手机，某些学生和老师有不一样观点。你们学校校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提醒内容，用英语写一篇征文。

观点
理由
某些学生
赞成拥有
以便与家长联络；
某些老师
反对拥有
有学生用手机玩游戏；有学生用手机作弊；
你观点

1. 2.

规定：
1. 体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；`
2. 必须包含表格所给提醒信息，并作合适发挥；
3. 词数：80-100词左右（征文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.
Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily.
Some teachers are against it．They think that some students can't control themselves and often play games. What's worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students' eyes.
In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作需注意规定中所提供要点，不可遗漏。需在平时积累有关词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以合适使用高分句型。
【点睛】
高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我认为对方式使用手机对学生是有协助。
I think+宾语从句。
It is+形容词 for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是…。

2．（B）根据规定完毕大作文,词数:80-100
体育运动是中学生共同爱好.请根据下面提醒写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 短文,应当包含如下要点:
1,学生参与体育运动爱好不一样,理由各异.
2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自已.
3.男孩参与各项体育运动,但愿运动能使自已更强健.
4.女孩也喜欢运动，但愿运动使自已减肥和保持健康,苗条.
5.你对运动观点.
6.注意:文中不得出现自已名字和学校名字
7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数.
8.参照词语:keep slim （保持苗条）
What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.
In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作重要是谈论自已对运动观点和见解，应当用一般目前时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动不一样见解及原因。2.详细分析（多数学生观点、男生观点、女生观点）。3.提出自已对运动观点。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好地完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，尤其使用某些亮点词句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

3．环境保护话题是人们最关怀话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自已家乡变化写一篇英语短文。
注意事项：
1.短文应包括表格中所有提醒内容，条理清晰，作合适发挥。
2.短文中不能出现真实人名和地名,词数不少于80。
状况
水污染，大气污染......
应对措施
立即制止此类活动,治理环境（至少两条）......
感想提议
环境可以变得更好......

Change for a better China
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【答案】We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.
I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.
【解析】
【详解】
环境保护话题是人们最关怀话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自已家乡变化写一篇英语短文。规定中已经给出了部分提醒，动笔先应先认真阅读提醒，确定写作内容。写作中注意体现观点时常用句式，注意在体现不一样观点时，连词使用。内容上应注意描述全面性；语言表述应当符合语法构造，造句应当符合英语体现习惯。
【点睛】
本文紧紧围绕规定对家乡做了简单简介，内容完整，用了表格中信息。2. 句式丰富。表述灵活。衔接自然，顺畅。文中用到了某些好句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy.给文中增色不少。

4．书面体现
每个人均有自已心爱物品，相信你也拥有一种自已心爱物品吧！请以“A（n） _____ I have”为题，描述一种或一件你心爱物品，并谈谈你是怎样得到它，以及它存在意义。
规定：1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品名字；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 语言体现精确，短文连贯穿顺，80词左右。
A（n） _________ I have
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【答案】A（n） toy gun I have
Everyone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.
In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.
When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.
Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!
【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自已最喜欢物品展开描述，规定是进行描述，并谈谈你是怎样得到它，以及它存在意义。写作难度是逐渐加深，在讨论其怎样获得时候要注意对使用时态，在谈论意义时候要注意体现精确性，避免不熟悉体现。
写作亮点：
这篇文章讲了自已最喜欢玩具枪，描述玩具枪时候有合适细节补充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黄布包着玩具枪），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪功能（small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自已小时候玩枪经历，精确使用了时态。在描述得到经历时候不落俗套，讲到了自已家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我盈利买枪，写作是富有感情，也通过这段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一定意义。最终玩具意义得到了升华，体现了作者期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家卫国层面，这样一篇作文是有深度，可以让人感动，是一篇优秀范文。

5．书面体现（原创）
今年春节，诸多人加入了抢红包游戏，但也有人表达担忧。学校英语校刊《英语天地》对此进行调查，假如你是一名校刊小记者，请你就本次调查成果进行总结，并谈谈你自已观点。

Grabbing red packets on line
Agreement
（75%）
1.a popular form of entertainment, bring more fun
2.bring people closer, make more friends
Disagreement
（25%）
spend too much time.
not have enough communication with family members, feel lonely

Your opinion
1.
2.

提醒词：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line抢红包注意：（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文章应包括题中所提所有要点，可合适发挥，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中请勿提及你真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.
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【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.
About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonely
Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it's obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. What's worse, it may lead to the crime.
【解析】这篇作文规定我们对学校进行有关春节抢红包这件事调查成果进行总结，并谈谈自已对这件事情见解。题目中给出了一种表格，里面包括了支持抢红包这个游戏人们观点以及反对这个游戏人们观点和理由，只给了某些短语，我们需要组织语言，将这些要点用对英语体现出来，并使文章内容愈加丰富、完整。最终还要加上自已见解。因此文章内容应重要包括三部分：支持人们理由；反对者们理由；自已见解，可以提成两段或者三段来论述，这样可以使文章构造清晰，有层次。写作时，应注意英语体现习惯和汉语不一样，不要逐词翻译，应从句子整体构造出发，以简单句为主，穿插并列句和复合句。为提高文章档次，还应注意使用高级句型和较复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文章整体意思连贯、体现流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀作文。首先短文内容完整、构造清晰。文章分为三段，第一段是题目中已经给出，因此了文章话题。第二段中作者表述了支持和反对玩这个游戏人们各自理由；第三段中作者刊登了自已见解。另一方面短文中语言得体，句式精确，符合英语体现习惯。文章以一般目前时态为主，尤其注意了谓语动词对形式，语法规范、精确。短文中使用了较丰富句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones.等等。文章中也出现了某些语法上小错误，总来说，不影响整篇文章质量。

6．共享单车自从在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们追捧，变化了人们出行方式，但同步也遇到了某些挑战，是国民素质“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息提醒，给二十一世纪英文报写一篇有关共享单车见解稿件。
社会现实状况
自从出现，饱受赞誉。
诸多优势
随地可见，出行以便
有益健康，减少污染
费用不高，承担得起
存在问题
未及时归还
占道挡路
你观点
我认为------

参照词汇：公共自行车public bicycles
注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提醒内容，规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
2.表格中“你观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做合适发挥。
3.词数在90个左右，文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.
【解析】这是一篇材料作文，规定给英文报社写一篇投稿，简介对共享单车见解。作文应包括4个重要内容，一种是社会现实状况，第二个长处，第三是存在问题，最终刊登个人观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并合适发挥。要注意上下文连贯，将这些内容有机连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用某些好句型和短语，注意对时态和语态以及谓语动词形式，还需要注意英语体现和汉语习惯不一样，让整篇短文体现流畅。

7．书面体现
中考后暑假即将开始，你和某些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。请根据旅行社提供信息，将你选择用英文向同学们简介。
Britain

Australia
Time
July 1 - July 14

Time
August 15 -August 24
Activities
visit the Buckingham Palace （白金汉宫）
visit the British Museum （大
英博物馆）
watch football matches
…

Activities
visit the Sydney Opera House
travel around the Gold Coast （黄金海岸）
have fun with kangaroos and koalas
…

Attention
changeable weather

Attention
winter
Cost
20,000 yuan

Cost
16,000 yuan

规定：
1. 所写内容必须包括某一国家所有信息及选择理由；
2. 结合游玩国家状况，自拟但愿可以安排活动，并提出1-2点出游注意事项；
3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清晰、书写规范；
5. 不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad.

I hope I will have a good time there!
【答案】The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to Britain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.
However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it's expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 0 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.
I hope I will ha