英语英语中考英语书面表达100及答案.doc

【英语】英语中考英语书面体现100及答案(1)

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1． 写作
假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom学生家长博客上，你看到如下内容。 请你根据博客内容，写作要点和规定，给这位家长答复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点：1. 表明自已见解。
2. 陈说自已理由。
3. 提出至少2条提议。
【答案】Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite
right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university
admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are
many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in
society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up
mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let her
have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长博客进行答复。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some all-A students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头表明自已见解，接下来陈说自已理由，最终简介自已提议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

2．安全对每个人都很重要。请根据如下信息内容提醒，写一篇有关校园安全英语小短文。
提醒：1. 体育锻炼
2. 上下楼梯
3. 交朋结友
4. 食品卫生
规定： 1. 语句通顺，体现精确，内容连贯；
2．短文可以合适发挥；但要包含以上要点。
3．词数：80—100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.___________ _____________________________________________
【答案】Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.
In a word, it's important to remember these for us all.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提醒，可知本文重要从三个方面进行论述，注意围绕要点组织材料，合适发挥。根据材料内容确定重要句子时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。

3． 诚信是中华民族老式美德，也是社会主义关键价值观内容之一。而你朋友Daming近来却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，不过他却由于在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming道歉。
请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：
1、简述事件；2、谈谈自已见解，并给Daming某些提议。
注意：
1、词数80—100；
2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；
3、文中不能出现真实校名和人名；
4、文章开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony
【答案】The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.
Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.
Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony
【解析】
【分析】
本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺事情，谈自已见解。信守承诺是中华民族老式美德，在写作过程中，注意文章构造，先写出大明和玲玲之间事情，然后再说自已对此见解。
【详解】
首先，第一句话直接点明作者观点，大明是出错了。然后仔细论述了事情发生通过。接下来说出自已对此事件见解，不信守承诺会导致失去他人信任，对大明提议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。
【点睛】
文章构造清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自已观点，然后论述事情，提出自已观点和提议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了某些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章愈加通顺。

4．今天手机在我们平常生活中已广泛使用。但中学生在学校与否应当持有手机，某些学生和老师有不一样观点。你们学校校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提醒内容，用英语写一篇征文。

观点
理由
某些学生
赞成拥有
以便与家长联络；
某些老师
反对拥有
有学生用手机玩游戏；有学生用手机作弊；
你观点

1. 2.

规定：
1. 体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；`
2. 必须包含表格所给提醒信息，并作合适发挥；
3. 词数：80-100词左右（征文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.
Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily.
Some teachers are against it．They think that some students can't control themselves and often play games. What's worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students' eyes.
In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作需注意规定中所提供要点，不可遗漏。需在平时积累有关词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以合适使用高分句型。
【点睛】
高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我认为对方式使用手机对学生是有协助。
I think+宾语从句。
It is+形容词 for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是…。

5．人们对于学生网上交友持不一样意见。请你用英语写一篇有关学生网上交友短文，简介人们不一样观点，并体现自已见解。
赞成理由
反对理由
你见解
1. 广交朋友
2. 可自由体现思想
3. 有助于外语学习
1. 挥霍时间
2. 影响学习
3. 也许上当受骗（be cheated）
1. ...
2. ...

注意：1. 所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。
2. 词数80词左右，短文开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。是一篇议论文，第一段要写赞同学生网上交友人观点，第二段要写反对学生网上交友观点，第三段要表述作者自已观点。
【详解】
本篇作文规定作者就上网交友刊登意见，写作之前要认真阅读所给提醒，确定文章中心。注意文体、人称和时态。文章要有层次、流畅。可以合适发挥，写作中合适使用连词，注意上下文紧密联络，要符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
此类作文写作措施要注意认真审题，可以分三段写：赞成；反对；你见解。注意过渡性语言使用。做到：要点要全，体现要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要精确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

6．近来，美国总统特朗普外孙女由于说一口流利中文而成为“网红”。你美国朋友Sam 看过有关报道之后也很想学好中文,不过不懂得该怎样做。假如你是大明，请你根据如下提醒写一封邮件给他,提某些有关怎样学好汉语提议。
要点提醒 :
1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;
2.不要胆怯出错误,与同学们用中文交流;
3.课下常常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看某些中文语言类节目;
4.常常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。
注意 :
1.词数80-100;
2.可合适增长细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信中不能出现与本人有关信息;
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。

Dear Sam ,
I'm happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.
Yours
Daming
【答案】Dear Sam,
I'm happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions.
First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don't be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you'd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.
In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.
Yours,
Daming
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以大明身份给Sam写一封信，告诉他怎样学好汉语，题目中从四个方面提出了提议。通过审题可知，这是规定写一封提议信，内容应包括如下几种方面：首先应和Sam先做一种交流，然后引出写信目；接下来给出详细提议，根据题目中给出这四条，用对英语体现出来，还应注意补充某些内容，使文章愈加充实；最终写一种合适结尾，如但愿提议对你有协助等。文章应使用一般目前时，根据体现需要使用恰当人称。写作时应注意英语体现习惯和汉语不一样，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式英语。应从句子整体构造考虑，写完整句子。如可以较常见主谓宾构造或主系表构造为主，简单句句型可以使文章论述清晰、简洁。为提高文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他某些复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文章意思连贯，体现流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定给Sam写了一封信，对他汉语学习提出了某些好提议。首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中规定所有信息。文章重要提成三个部分：第一段是与Sam之间问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题，并简介写信目；第二段中是提出详细提议，这是这篇文章主体，所在篇幅最大。这一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等词，论述条理、有层次；最终一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。另一方面短文使用了对时态和人称，句式构造符合英语体现习惯。语法规范、精确，用词得体。文章中语句以简单句构造为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整了文章构造。文章中使用了较为丰富短语和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。

7．书面体现
每个人均有自已心爱物品，相信你也拥有一种自已心爱物品吧！请以“A（n） _____ I have”为题，描述一种或一件你心爱物品，并谈谈你是怎样得到它，以及它存在意义。
规定：1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品名字；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 语言体现精确，短文连贯穿顺，80词左右。
A（n） _________ I have
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】A（n） toy gun I have
Everyone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.
In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.
When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.
Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!
【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自已最喜欢物品展开描述，规定是进行描述，并谈谈你是怎样得到它，以及它存在意义。写作难度是逐渐加深，在讨论其怎样获得时候要注意对使用时态，在谈论意义时候要注意体现精确性，避免不熟悉体现。
写作亮点：
这篇文章讲了自已最喜欢玩具枪，描述玩具枪时候有合适细节补充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黄布包着玩具枪），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪功能（small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自已小时候玩枪经历，精确使用了时态。在描述得到经历时候不落俗套，讲到了自已家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我盈利买枪，写作是富有感情，也通过这段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一定意义。最终玩具意义得到了升华，体现了作者期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家卫国层面，这样一篇作文是有深度，可以让人感动，是一篇优秀范文。

8．请根据表格内Zhang Ying某些体现提醒用英语写一篇短文，把她简介给你外国朋友Mary。
Time

Good habits

Bad habits

In the morning

Get up early

Eat junk food for breakfast

In class

Ask some questions

Quarrel（争执） with her
classmates sometimes

After school

Always exercise

Go home late

In the evening

Help her parents with housework

Watch TV or play computer
games for more than an hour

规定：1、语言要通顺，体现要对。
2、文章规定包含表格中所有提醒。
3、词数不少于60个英语单词。
4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。
【答案】One possible version
Dear Mary,
I’m very glad to introduce（简介） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?
Yours
Huang Deshun
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出材料较为齐全。写作中注意将张颖状况简介清晰。根据材料可知，本文重要用一般目前时态，第三人称进行论述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思愈加连贯可合适使用连接词。
【亮点阐明】本文在写作中使用了诸多固定