9BU5-3写作课.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,Unit,5 Writing,My Favourite Sport,Objectives,By the end of this class,you will be able to,write an article about your favourite sport,use the four-step strategy of writing,A pen,Get ready for the class!,A notebook,Blank sheets of paper,A dictionary,What is your favourite sport?,During the winter and summer holidays,a lot of students are turning into couch potatoes,as they stay home all the time and lack exercise.,As we all know,there are a lot of sports can be done at home!These kinds of sports will help us keep fit as well.If you have any ideas,please write to us to talk about your favourite home sport.We will publish some of the articles and promote these sports in our community during the long holidays.,Share your favourite home sport with us!,The secret recipe for writing,Identify the topic,Scratch an outline,Enrich the content,Revise and polish,The four-step strategy,Step 1 Identify the topic,Read the,background information,and,requirements,carefully and identify what you are going to write about.,What sports can be done at home?,Step 1 Identify the topic,table tennis,running on the treadmill,yoga,aerobics,taekwondo,Paragraph 1,Step 2 Scratch an outline,Introduction,Body,Conclusion,aa,Many students are gaining weight during the long holidays,as they seldom go out for exercise.As a sport fanatic,I never have this kind of trouble because I enjoy playing table tennis at home.,Introduction,Topic sentences,Demonstrate your central idea at the very first place.,Paragraph 1,Step 2 Scratch an outline,Introduction,Body,Conclusion,Paragraph 2,Paragraph 3,Details about the sport,Body,when?how often?who?why?,Why is it a good sport to play at home?,Benifits of the sport,Your memory or experience of it,Your favourite team or star.,Paragraph 1,Step 2 Scratch an outline,Introduction,Body,Conclusion,Paragraph 2,Paragraph 3,Conclusion,Paragraph 4,If you are bored and sit around with nothing to do,why not try swinging the ball up in the air?,Playing table tennis for an hour every day not only keeps my body strong,but brings lots of fun and joy to my whole family.,Summary and,call-on,If you are sitting around with nothing to do,why not try swinging the ball up in the air?,Paragraph 1,Step 2 Scratch an outline,Introduction,Body,Conclusion,Paragraph 2,Paragraph 3,Details about the sport,when?how often?who?why?,Benifits of the sport,Paragraph 4,Summary and call-on,Topic sentences,Why is it a good sport to play at home?,Your memory or experience of it,Your favourite team or star.,Step 3 Enrich the content,aa,Although the spread of coronavirus keeps us home,I never stop exercising to keep fit.As a sport fanatic,I enjoy playing table tennis most.,aa,My favourite home sport is playing table tennis.I enjoy it very much.,Try to use some,compound or complex sentences,.,Better,word choice,helps catch readers interest and improve the quality of the article.,Sentence skills,aa,Step 3 Enrich the content,in addition,.besides,.,because,for,as,since,therefore,due to.,although/though/even though,.,Connecting words,yet/still/nevertheless/however,.,for example,for instance,in this case.,Playing table tennis relieves the boredom of staying home.Moreover,our family is filled with laughter each time we play together.,aa,Playing table tennis relieved the boredom of staying home.Our family are filled with laughter each time we play together.,Review your draft.,Check spelling and punctuation.,Rewrite carefully on your paper.,Step 4 Revise and polish,Check grammar.,The four-step strategy for writing,Identify the topic,Scratch an outline,Enrich the content,Revise and polish,Introduction,Body,Conclusion,Details about the sport,Benifits of the sport,Summary and call-on,Topic sentences,Sentence skills and connecting words,spellig,punctuation and grammar,aa,Many students are gaining weight during the long holidays,as they seldom go out for exercise.As a sport fanatic,I never have this kind of trouble because I enjoy playing table tennis at home.,Every day after dinner,we start the joy of the evening by a game of table tennis.,The living room is not spacious but enough for a home-made table tennis table-the dinning table.,My mother and I always take turns against my father.My little sister,Jenny,usually sits aside and cheers for us.,Table tennis is probably the best sport that we can play at home.A pair of bats,a ball and a dinning table are all the things we need to start the game.,I still remember the day my father taught me how to hold the bat and told me to stay calm no matter what direction the ball would come from.This still inspires me in every aspect of my life.,Playing table tennis not only keeps my body strong,but brings lots of fun and joy to my whole family.,If you are sitting around with nothing to do,why not try swinging the ball up in the air?,Thank you!,