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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢,基础写作图表类,By Tracy,Practice makes perfect!,第1页,09广东高考,你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。,时间：上周末对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授,主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题,基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50%；(2)人数：世界第一,教授解读：(1)原因：很复杂；(2)治疗：没有哪一个药品能治愈近视；(3)提议：不要过分用眼；多参加户外活动；(4)尤其提醒：怎样握笔也和近视相关,依据以上情况写一篇采访报道，包含以下内容：,（1）采访时间、对象和主题；（2）中小学生近视发生率及人数；（3）教授解读,第2页,Last weekend I had an interview with Professor Wang,an eye-doctor,about the problem short-sightedness.,According to Prof.Wang,a little more than half of the students in middle and primary schools are suffering from it,rating the first in the world consequently.,Related experts say that the causes leading to it are,very complicated and up till now no medicine has been found to cure for it.,It is suggested that,we students not overuse their eyes and its of great help to our eye health to participate in more outdoor activities.,Meanwhile another tip from the experts is that,the problem has business with how we hold the pen while writing.,第3页,年深一模,你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。,时间：上周星期三 对象：王老师,主题：中学生英语单词拼写问题,基本信息：（1）约54%高中同学英语书法很差；（2）约45%英语词汇只会说而不会写,老师解读：（1）原因：考试未设拼写题型；平时训练不够；学生懒于记忆,（2）提议：提升认识，引发重视；加强训练，掌握方法,依据以上情况写一篇采访报道，包含以下内容：,1采访时间、对象和主题；2中学生英语单词拼写现实状况；3老师解读。,第4页,Last weekend I had an interview with Professor Wang,an eye-doctor,about the problem short-sightedness.,时间：上周星期三 对象：王老师,主题：中学生英语单词拼写问题,Last Wednesday,I had an interview with Mr.Wang,an English teacher,about the problem of English word spelling among middle school students.,concerning the issue of,第5页,According to Prof.Wang,a little more than half of the students in middle and primary schools are suffering from it,rating the first in the world consequently.,基本信息：（1）约54%高中同学英语书法很差；（2）约45%英语词汇只会说而不会写,According to Mr.Wang,a little more than half of the senior middle school students English handwriting are very,poor,and,the percentage of the words,which they can not spell correctly although they are able to speak,is 45,.,slightly,第6页,Related experts say that the causes leading to it are very complicated and up till now no medicine has been found to cure for it.,老师解读：（1）原因：考试未设拼写题型；平时训练不够；学生懒于记忆,He said that the causes leading to it are that there are no specific word spelling checks in exams,and there are no enough training.The students are lazy to memorize.,for spelling problems,also pointed out,Worse still,第7页,It is suggested that,we students not overuse their eyes and its of great help to our eye health to participate in more outdoor activities.,（2）提议：提升认识，引发重视；加强训练，掌握方法,He suggested that we(should),raise the awareness,and,place great emphasis on,that,and above all,we should,master skills,while we are training ourselves,.,第8页,Last Wednesday,I had an interview with Mr.Wang,an English teacher,concerning,the issue of English word spelling among middle school students.,According to Mr.Wang,slightly more than half of the senior middle school students English handwriting are very poor,and the percentage of the words which they can not spell correctly although they are able to speak is 45.,He also pointed out that,the causes for spelling problems are that there are no specific word spelling checks in exams,and there are no enough training.,Worse still,the students are lazy to memorize.,He suggested that,we should,raise the awareness and place great emphasis on that,and above all,we should,master skills,while we are training ourselves.,第9页,07-10年广东高考基础写作题目统计,年份,命题形式,主要内容,体裁,题材,07,表格,谁是你偶像,调查汇报,学校生活,08,汉字提要,奥运比赛项目射击,介绍,体育/热点话题,09,汉字提要,中小学生近视问题,采访报道,健康,10,汉字提要,禁烟决定,通讯报道,热点话题,第10页,Structure of the article,General idea(conclusion/tendency)（图表反应问题或总体趋势）,Facts(to support the idea)（详细数据或事实）,Reasons（原因分析）,Solutions or personal opinion/suggestions(if needed)（处理问题方法或提议）,第11页,必备词句,点明主题惯用词句：,上周，我们对人进行了关于调查。,Last week,we made/did/carried out a survey on among people.,e.g.,上周，你市一家报社对国庆长假期间市民休闲方式进行了一项调查。,A survey was carried out by,an evening post in our city,among,the citizens,on,how they spent their last national holidays.,第12页,Practice,受某英文报委托，你最近就英语阅读兴趣以访谈方式对某市10所高中1000名学生进行了调查。,Recently,we,did a survey among,1000 senior middle school students from ten schools,on,their reading interests.,最近我国教育教授对我国中学生所喜爱节日进行了一项调查。,Recently some Chinese educational experts,did a survey to,find out which festivals are the most favorite ones,among,middle school students.,第13页,图表反应问题或总体趋势惯用词句：,从以上表格中我们能够显著地看出，中国人口在高速增加。,From the graph/table/diagram/chart above,we can see obviously that the population of China is increasing fast.,正如能够从图表中所看到，,As can been seen from the table,.,As we can see clearly from the table,.,必备词句,第14页,图表内容描述惯用词句：,表赞成动词短语：,表不赞成,动词短语：,人数是(数字),the number of people who is(数字),the number of people who takes up X%,e.g.,反对该观点人超出5千。,The number of people,who,are opposed to,this idea,is over 5,000.,必备词句,agree with,approve of,be in favor of,be for,disagree with,disapprove of,be opposed to,be against,第15页,吸烟人数：约3.5亿;分布：男性75%女性25%,The number of people who smoke,is about 350,000,000.,The number of men who smoke,takes up 75%.,The number of women who smoke,takes up 25%.,The number of people who smoke,is about 350,000,000，,and,75%are male,while,25%are female.,Practice,第16页,受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿;,因二手烟死亡人数超出10万人/年,The number of people who are affected by second-hand smoke,is about 540 million.,The number of people who died from second-hand smoke,is over 100,000 every year.,Practice,What is the worst,第17页,分数、倍数、排序惯用词句：,直接表示：,18%of ,two fifths of.,变换表示：,50%of=half of,25%of=one fourth of=one quarter of;,倍数+（形容词/副词）比较级+than；,倍数+as+（形容词/副词）+as,The number of students in our school is three times larger than that in theirs.,(4)排序：sb./sth.rank the first place.,sb./sth.is in the second place.,A put B in the first place.,必备词句,第18页,展现数据惯用词句：,表示对比、转折：,on the contrary,in contrast to,compared to/with,while,but,however,表示比较：,as as;twice the amount of;more than;less than;the same as;similar to;different from,表示升、降：,rise,on the rise,go up,climb,rocket,increase,double;go down,fall,drop,decline,decrease/reduce,on the decrease,必备词句,第19页,上周，你对全班50人就学校取消周六第二课堂,(extracurricular classes),决定进行了一次调查，调查结果以下：,I,made a survey,last week,among,50 classmates,about,their views,on,our schools decision to cancel the extracurricular classes,on Saturday,.,The survey shows that,86%of my classmates,agree to,the decision,while,12%dont,agree,but 2%dont,voice,their opinion.,Practice,第20页,分析原因惯用词句：,原因是。,The reason for is that.,有两个原因能够解释这么一个现象。,There are two reasons,that account for,this phenomenon.,许多原因能够说明/造成/引发这个改变/成功/增加。,A number of factors,could account for,(contribute to/lead to/result in),the change(success/increase).,必备词句,第21页,Practice,上周，你市一家报社对国庆长假期间市民休闲方式进行了一项调查。以下是调查结果原因分析：,1.大多数市民以为物价太高，生活压力大，没有太多钱出游。,2.一部分市民认为国庆期间游客太多，太拥挤。,3.一部分市民则认为，可利用国庆放假好好地休息一下，以放松自己。,第22页,The reason for,such a situation,is that,most citizens,hold the view that,they dont have too much extra money for tour due to high living expense and pressures in their lives.,Meanwhile,a portion of the citizens,think,that,most of the places of interest are usually over crowded during the national holidays.,However,some others believe that,it is the right time for them to,take a good rest and relax themselves during the holidays.,第23页,归纳总结或发表评论惯用词句：,归纳总结：,in a word,in short,to conclude,in conclusion,generally speaking;,personally,in my opinion,as far as Im concerned,from my point of view,我们能够得出这么结论：,We can draw the conclusion that.,We can learn/know.,From the changes in the charts,we can predict that.,必备词句,第24页,Practice,最近你对你们学校高三学生体育锻炼情况做了一次调查，结果以下：,坚持锻炼同学主要参加以下体育活动：,70%同学坚持体育锻炼,30%同学基本上不锻炼,一个放松,有利于学习,1.时间；,2.运动受伤或过分疲劳会影响学习,第25页,【写作内容】依据调查结果，写一篇短文，包含以下内容：,有多大百分比同学认为不锻炼好及其理由；,有多大百分比同学认为要进行体育锻炼及其理由；,坚持锻炼同学主要参加体育活动项目。,第26页,One possible version:,30%of the students,questioned,say,they think it better not to have physical exercise,.They believe,theres no time to spare for,sports for Senior 3 students and it will,have a bad effect on,study if the students,get hurt,or,too tired in,it.,While,70%students think we should,do necessary physical exercise,.,They hold the view that,it is a good relaxation and will surely,do good to our study,.Half of them,stick to running,every day,and others,prefer to play,basketball,table tennis,badminton or do something else.,第27页,必备词句,相关采取办法词或句型：,make efforts to do,take measures,take steps,take action,Its time to do.,Its about/high time that sb.should do sth.,sb.did sth.,第28页,Appreciation,Here are some suggestions on how to build a harmonious relationship between students and teachers.,Above all,students and teachers should trust each other,which may result in better communication and understanding.,Whats more,students should respect teachers while teachers treat every student fairly.,Only by,trusting and respecting each other,can they,achieve their goal.,第29页,提出提议或办法惯用句型：,对我提出以下可能处理方法。首先，；另首先，,I suggest some possible solutions to.For one thing,.For another,.,对可采取一些切实可行办法。首先，；另外，；能成功处理这个问题方法还有,Some workable advice may be taken to.First of all,.In addition,another way contributing to success of solving the problem is.,必备词句,第30页,提出提议或办法惯用句型：,下面是对于怎样处理方法。第一，；另外，最终。,Here are some suggestions on how to deal with.To begin with,.Moreover,.Finally,.,我们应该采取一系列有效办法来处理这种情况。第一；第二，；最终。,We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.Firstly,.Secondly,.Finally,.,必备词句,第31页,Practice,Health,Magazine,做了一项调查，了解到现在人们健康情况在下滑，主要原因以下：,1工作忙碌，压力过大，缺乏锻炼；,2生活没有规律，熬夜，休息不够；,3不少人有抽烟、喝酒习惯；,4提议：培养良好生活习惯，戒烟，戒酒，多运动。,第32页,According to the survey made by,Health,Magazine,compared with,the past,people,are in poorer health,.,One of the main reasons is that,people are living a busy life without taking enough exercise and,suffer lots of stress,.,Besides,most of them have to stay up late at night,with so little time to rest,making,their life become quite irregular.,Worse still,a number of these people have got into the habit of smoking and drinking alcohol.,To change this situation,one,should form a good living habit,by doing physical exercise regularly,and try to keep,away from cigarette and alcohol.,第33页,你校将开展禁毒宣传，请你依据下面表格内容和饼状图写一篇短文。短文内容包含分析青少年吸毒原因，介绍毒品危害并给同学们提出提议，方便让同学们远离毒品。,【写作内容】,Practice,毒品危害,1.每年浪费8,000亿美元;2.严重危害健康，加速死亡;3.诱发或直接造成犯罪,远离毒品提议,1.不要和吸毒人做朋友;2.保持乐观生活态度和健康生活方式,第34页,In modern society,drugs are becoming a more and more serious problem in the world.The trade of drugs is widespread,which costs up to$800 billion every year._ _ _ _,第35页,As we all know,drugs,do great harm to,our health,not only,causing people to die at an early age,but also,directly contributing to the happening of crimes.,As is shown on the chart above,30%of the teenagers taking drugs are cheated into doing it,and,50%are driven by curiosity.,Another,15%just seek excitement or try to get rid of their anxiety,and,the rest,try it for some other reasons.,In my opinion,in order to protect us students from drugs,we should be careful to,make friends and stay away from those who take drugs.,Also,it s very important for us to,lead a healthy life and hold positive attitudes towards life.,第36页,