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如何写建议信
一:审题立意
1.应用文范畴 2.常用一般现在时;以第二人称为主 3. 三段式:
首段:提出对方问题; 使用过渡句,引出下文。
主体段:针对其问题提出自己的建议/忠告(以三个左右为宜)
末段:总结建议、表达自己的祝愿。
二:经典模板句子
1. 首段:(起始句)I am sorry to hear that you have trouble /difficulty (in) doing sth(问题)。(过渡句)However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. / I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.
2. 主体段:过渡词
① first/firstly/first of all/to begin with
② second/secondly/meanwhile/moreover/in addition/what’s more / furthermore
③ third/thirdly/finally/most important of all/last but not least
3. 末段
① As long as you act as what is mentioned above, you will find the situation is not hard to settle/resolve/solve/deal with.
② They are only my personal suggestions. I hope they can do you a lot of good.
③ It’s only if you act as what is mentioned above and…….that you…….
三:词汇积累
1.对别人友好
2有帮助的且忠实可信的
全心全意地
3乐于助人
4.了解别人的喜好
5.找到具有相同兴趣的朋友
6参加讨论或更多的课后活动
7不遗余力地帮助某人
8患难见真情
9万事开头难
10按照上面所说的那样做
11做某事有困难.
12听取某人的建议
13回以微笑
14此外,另外
15我认为关心别人胜过关心自己很重要
16绝对不要根据外貌和衣着来看一个人
17成为一个好的倾听者
18不同意某人
19做某事比作某事要好
20众所周知
21很重要
22做某事没意义
23这样做
24处于麻烦之中
25陪伴某人
四:连词成句
① 如果你听取我的建议,这种状况是很容易改变的。
② 如果你向别人微笑,你就能让对方感觉很自在,这样别人肯定也会对你回以微笑。
③ 我认为关心别人声国关心自己也很重要,同时决不能通过外貌和衣着来看一个人。
④ 当你不同意别人时,讨论比吵架要好。
⑤ 众所周知,相互吵架没有任何意义,且那样做除了伤害彼此什么也解决不了。
⑥ 最后一点但不是最不重要的一点,帮助别人以及忠实可信是非常重要的。
⑦ 不论什么时候你的朋友有麻烦,都绝不要离他而去,而是要陪着他并不遗余力地帮助他。
⑧ 记住:患难见真情。
⑨ (运用强调句型)只要你全心全意地对待别人,你就肯定会交到很多好朋友。
五:组句成章
Dear Xiao Dong:
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you .
To begin with ,to make friends, you must be friendly to others. Thus, smile is necessary. If you smile at others, you can make others feel at home and others are sure to give you a smile in return. I think it also important to think more of others than of yourself and you should never judge a person by his appearance and clothes. Secondly, you’d better try your best to be a good listener. When you disagree with someone, it’s better to discuss than to quarrel. As everybody knows, there is no point quarreling with each other and nothing can be resolved by doing so except hurting each other. Last but not least, being helpful and faithful is of great importance. Whenever your friend is in trouble, never leave him but keep him company and spare no efforts to help him. Remember: A friend in need is a friend indeed.
It is only if you act as what is mentioned above and treat others wholeheartedly that you are sure to make a lot of good friends.
Yours sincerely
Miss Wang
词汇积累:
1.对别人友好Be friendly to sb.
2有帮助的且忠实可信的Helpful and faithful
全心全意地Wholeheartedly
乐于助人Be wiling/ready to help sb.
3.了解别人的喜好
Learn about their likes and dislikes
4. 找到具有相同兴趣的朋友
Find friends with the same interest
6参加讨论或更多的课后活动join in a discussion and more after-class activities
7不遗余力地帮助某人
Spare no efforts to help sb.
8患难见真情
A friend in need is a friend indeed.
9万事开头难
All things are different before they are easy.
10按照上面所说的那样做
Act as what is mentioned above
11做某事有困难
Have trouble/difficulty doing sth.
12听取某人的建议Take one’s advice
13回以微笑Give you a smile in return
14此外,另外In addition
15我认为关心别人胜过关心自己很重要
I think it important to think more of others than of yourself.
16绝对不要根据外貌和衣着来看一个人Never judge a person by his appearance and clothes.
17成为一个好的倾听者Be a good listener
18不同意某人Disagree with sb.
19做某事比作某事要好
It’s better to do sth than to do sth
20众所周知As everybody knows,…….
21很重要
Be of great importance=be very important
22做某事没意义
There is no point/sense doing sth
23这样做By doing so
24处于麻烦之中Be in trouble
25陪伴某人Keep sb company
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