汉英篇章对比与翻译说课讲解.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,汉英篇章对比与翻译,Cohesive ties 衔接手段,Cohesion markers 连贯标记,韩礼德的分类,Halliday&Hasan 在,Cohesion in English,中将英语的衔接手段分成五大类：,照应 reference,替代 substitution,省略 ellipsis,连接 conjunction,词汇衔接 lexical cohesion,另一种（陈宏薇）分类法：,I.指称衔接（照应）co-reference anaphora,II.结构衔接 structural cohesion,III.词汇衔接 lexical cohesion,IV.语音衔接 phonetic cohesion,I.指称衔接,按指称范围分,：,1.语外照应（外指）exophoric reference,2.语内照应 (内指）endophoric reference,1)前照应（回指）anaphoric reference,2)后照应（下指）cataphoric reference,例子：,张明是我的朋友。(,外指,，张明存在于客观世界之中),张明是我的一个朋友。,他,是西安人。（,内指,，“他”回指“张明”）,他,在那边！张明。（,内指,，“他”下指“张明”）,（言者手指一件教具）,那,是你做的吗？,这件事,我不清楚，我不知道,他是否参加了那次会议,。（,内指,）,他参加了那次会议,？,这,我不清楚。（,内指,）,按指称手段分,：,1.人称照应,2.指示照应,3.比较照应,人称照应,人称照应是通过人称代词(如 they,she,him 等）、所属限定词（如his,your,its 等）,和所属代词（hers,theirs，mine 等）来实现。,英语人称代词以及相应的限定词的使用率大大高于汉语。,孔乙己是站着喝,酒而穿长衫的唯一的人。他身材很高大；青白脸色，皱纹间经常夹些伤痕；一部乱蓬蓬的花白胡子。,穿的虽然是长衫，可是,又脏又破，,似乎十多年没补，也没有洗。（孔乙己）,Kong was,the,only long-gowned customer to drink,his,wine standing.He was a big man,strangely pallid,with scars,that,often showed among,the,wrinkles of,his,face.,He,had a large unkept beard,streaked with white.Although,he,wore a long gown,it,was dirty and tattered,and,looked as if,it,had not been washed or mended for over ten years.(Tr.Yang Xianyi&Gladys Yang),每年农历十二月二十以后，海岛上的居民便开始进入过年倒计时。先搞卫生，掸去一年尘土。接着准备食品，做年糕，炒倭豆、炒番薯片、打米花糖。二十五、二十六起，家家户户开始“谢年”：祀祖先。,Every year after the 20,th,of the lunar 12,th,month,inhabitants on the island would start,their,countdown on the Spring Festival.,They,would sweep,their,houses clean,flickering every bit of dust off the furniture.After that,they,begin to prepare various foods:steamed New Year cakes,fried beans,fired sweet potato chips,and baked rice cookies.On the 25,th,and 26,th,of the month,households start,their,“New Year Thanks-giving”rites to pay homage to,their,ancestors.,那年冬天，祖母死了，,父亲,的差使也交卸了，正是祸不单行的日子，我从北京到徐州，打算跟着,父亲,奔丧回家。到徐州见着,父亲,，看见满院狼藉的东西，又想起祖母，不禁簌簌地流下眼泪。,父亲,说：“事已如此，不必难过，好在天无绝人之路！”（朱自清 背影）,In that winter,my grandma died and,my,father lost his job.I left for Xuzhou to join,him,in hastening home to attend my grandmas funeral.When I met,him,in Xuzhou,the sight of disorderly mess in,our,courtyard and the thought to my grandma started tears trickling down my cheeks.,He,said,“Now that things have come to such a mess,its no use crying.Fortunately,heaven always leaves one a way out.”(张培基 译),另外，汉语第三人称代词系统没有英语发达。现代汉语中，“,他,”的功能虽然出现了,性、数、格的分化,，但在很多情况下还担当着,复数,、所有格和两性共指代词的功能。译者在进行汉英翻译时如遇到类似情况，需根据上下文判断出“他”的具体指代对象，确保译文正确。例如：,（10）对了！男人懒。,他,可以懒洋洋坐在旋椅上，,五官四肢，连同,他,的脑筋（假如有），一概停止活动，像呆鸟一般。（梁实秋，男人）,Indeed,men are lazy.You will find,them,lolling in a revolving chair,dumb like a wooden chicken,their,five sense organs,their,four limbs as well as,their,brain(if any)all at a complete standstill.（张培基译）,指示照应,指示照应指说话人通过指明事物在时间和空间上的远近(proximity)来确定所指对象。,王治奎（270页）：“汉语的,这,和,那,以及英语中的this和that 都常用于指示照应粘连（衔接），在语义上基本相同，但指称功能却大不一样。,汉语的这往往起一种化远为近的作用，其功能负荷量大于那，因此使用频率也高于那,。,而在英语中却恰恰相反,。”,“,这,倒难以说定。可是你只要看看这儿的小客厅，就得了解答。,这,里,面有一个金融界的大亨，又有一位工业界的巨头；,这,小客厅就是中国社会的缩影。”（子夜）,“,It,s a tall order,your question.But you can find an answer in the next room.,There,you have a successful financier and a captain of industry.,That,little drawing room is Chinese society in miniature.”(Tr.Sidney Shapiro),这,幅画是一部用思考和修养完成的杰作，它既有历史感又有现代艺术语言的独特性。（袁运甫 我所认识的吴冠中及其绘画）,The,painting is a masterpiece reflecting deep insight and artistic attainment;it expresses a sense of history by using specific modern artistic vocabulary.,稍稍能安慰我们的，是在,那,石上有一个不大不小的坑凹儿，雨天就盛满了水。（贾平凹 丑石）,The only thing that had interested us in,the,ugly stone was a little pit on top of it,which is filled with water on rainy days.,这种,力，是一般人看不见的生命力，只要生命存在，,这种,力就要显现(夏衍野草）,It,is an invisible force of life.So long as there is life,the,force will show itself.,比较照应,比较照应指通过形容词和副词的比较等级形式以及其它一些有,比较意义,的词语（如,same,so,as,such,differently,other,otherwise,等）表示的照应关系。,比较照应在语篇中起上下承接的作用。因为任何比较至少要涉及两个实体或事态，语篇中如果有表达比较意义的词语出现，,会话参与者或读者便会在上下文中寻找与其构成比较关系的其它词语。,比较照应的语篇衔接功能就是这样发挥作用的。,例1：,Tom gets ten dollars a week for pocket money,and Bob receives a,similar,amount.,例2,：,天空中积满了灰色的云块，呆滞滞的不动。他脸上的气色和天空,差不多,。,（那蹲着的黑影）一面抱怨这天气：“真冷呀，先生，你说是不是？”看见他并不是个讨厌的老头子，便高兴地说道：“乡下怕,更,要冷些吧？”（艾芜 冬夜）,“Its really cold here,“he complained.“what do you think,sir?”Seeing that he was not too nasty an old man,I readily responded:“It must be,colder,in the country,Im afraid.”,零式指称（zero anaphora),零式指称的基本概念是在语篇中本该出现的指称词被省略了。,汉语使用零式指称远比英语多；汉语的零式指称不受句法限制。（Li&Thompson,1979)(李那 和 汤普森),一路上吃了半斤炒栗子，睡了一会儿觉，就到了北京。,We,ate half a,jin,of roast chestnuts,had a nap and soon arrived in Beijing.,汉语没有定冠词，英语则可以用定冠词来照应。,他拿起作文念起来，“我们学校最美的地方，不是教室，不是操场，也不是校门口那个带喷水的小花坛，而是食堂。瞧，玻璃干净得叫你看不见它的存在-“洋教师念到这儿 (冯骥才：西式幽默),He picked up,the,composition and began to read,“,The,most beautiful spot on campus is not,the,classroom building,nor,the,sports-ground,nor,the,lawn with the fountain at,the,gate;,the,most beautiful spot on campus is our cafeteria.Look!,The,window panes are so clean that you scarcely notice there is glass in the”He paused,(刘士聪 Western Humor),1.语境意识,还是从火车上说起吧！大约在我四岁多的时候，我坐过火车。当时带我坐火车的人，是我的舅舅，叫张全斌。,Lets begin with the train.（？）,Lets start from the train.（？）,Lets begin from the time when I was on the train.（？）,应该译为：,Let,me,begin with my trip on the train.,2.文化意识,我现在对我,原来的父母,还有个模糊不清的印象关于我个人的,历史情况,，我就知道这一些，再多一点都记不起来了。(,My parents,)(This is what I know about,my childhood,and beyond that I do not remember much else.),杭州六合塔和西安大雁塔(Six Harmonies Pagoda;Big Wild Goose,Pagoda,),北海公园白塔是藏式佛塔，即喇嘛塔,（White,Dagoba,),II.结构衔接,结构衔接指信息结构之间的衔接，可通过主位述位结构或,替代、省略、对偶、排比、对照、顶针、回环、层递、反复,等修辞格实现。,替代,替代指用替代形式（pro-form）去替代上下文出现的词语。它的语义要从所替代的成分去索引。Halliday 和 Hasan把替代分成三类，即,名词性替代，动词性替代,和,从句性替代,。,名词替代,我能看看那条围巾吗？,可以。哪一条？,红的,还是,黑的,？,May I have a look at that scarf?,Yes.Which,one,?,The red,or,the black,one？,瞧那晚霞，我没见过比这更红的了。,Look at the sunset glow.I have never seen a redder,one,than that.,那声声燃放的鞭炮是,辞旧迎新,的欢呼。新世纪的新年，就在这欢跃的气氛中，一下子走近了。,The exploding firecrackers bid farewell to the passing year and cheered for the coming of a new,one,.The centennial New Year is just around the corner clothed in the delightful mood.,动词替代,She sings better than she,did,last year.,John drinks a lot.Does his brother,do so,?,谁原意和我们一起打篮球？,我不,干,。,Whod like to play basketball with us?,No,I,wont,.,关于汉语的动词性替代，王力认为,“这么着”,具有替代功能，赵元任这认为汉语中最常见的替代动词为“,来,”。,黛玉便说道：“你既这么说，为什么我去了你不叫丫头开门呢？”,宝玉诧异道：“这话从哪里说起？我要是,这么着,立刻就死了。”,“你画的不像，等我,来,。”,子句替代,他们总是把房间搞得乱七八糟。你怎么也,这样,呢？,Theyve always made a mess of the room.,Why have you,too,?,省略,我想买一套家具。,买大连出的（家具）吧！,I want to buy a set of furniture.,Buy one(set of furniture)made in Dalian.,我们到那儿去春游？,（我们）到云台山（去春游）,Where shall we go for a spring outing?,(Well go to)Yuntai Mountain(for a spring outing),你决定了毕业后去西藏工作吗？,当然！（我决定了毕业后去西藏工作。）,Have you made up your mind to work in Tibet after graduation?,Sure!(I have made up your mind to work in Tibet after graduation.),工业园区土地使用权转让的成本价目前为每亩16万人民币，年内，对符合国家产业导向，规模大、科技含量高的外商投资项目，按照每100万,美元,用10亩土地的比例，给予特殊价格优惠，其中注册资本在100万,美元,到300万,美元,的，每亩地价为8,万元人民币,；300万,美元,到500万,美元,的，每亩地价为7,万元人民币,；500万到1000万,美元,的，每亩地价为6,万元人民币,；1000万,美元,以上的每亩地价为5,万元人民币,。,Currently the cost of land use transfer in the Zone is charged at the ratio of 160 thousand yuan per Chinese mu,whereas before the end of the year,the price will be lowered down to 1 million US dollars every 10 mu for those large and technology-intensive foreign projects that are run in compliance with the industrial orientation of the country.,As regards those conglomerates with a registered capital ranging from 1 million,(),to 3 million US dollars,the price is 80 thousand yuan per mu,(),70 thousand yuan for those with that from 3 million,(),to 5 million,(),60 thousand,(),for those from 5 to 10 million,(),and 50 thousand,(),for those over 10 million,(),.,以往过年都是打发小孩一点钱，现在,可不这样,了。,In the past,they would dismiss the kids with some money as a gift for the lunar New Year,but,not(),nowadays.,外商在开发区的投资越来越多，进出口贸易也随之增加。,Foreign investment are on the rise in the Empowerment Zone,so,are imports and exports.,去年有50个社区获“文明社区”称号，今年又将有20个,社区,获此殊荣。,Last year 50 communities were named as“civilized community”;this year,20 more(),will be given the title.,修辞手段,虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后。,（对偶）,Modesty helps one to go forward,whereas conceit makes one lag behind.,燕子去了，有再来的时候；杨柳枯了，有再青的时候；桃花谢了，有再开的时候。但是，聪明的你，告诉我，我们的日子为什么一去不复返呢？,(排比,）,Swallows fly away,yet return;willows wither,yet burgeon again;peach-blossom fades,yet blooms afresh.But tell me,you who are wise,why do our days depart never to return?,大红花一朵朵全被拉长了，这时是泼刺奔进的红锦,带,。,带,织入,狗,中，,狗,织入,白云,中。,白云,织入村女中,(顶针）,Each of the great crimson flowers stretched out now into rippling red silk belts.The belts interwove with the dogs,the dogs with the white clouds,and the white clouds with the country girls.,鲁迅好的故事,回环（palindrome),回环又称回文，“是利用相同的词汇，造成词序回环往复的语句，表现两种事物或情理的相互依存或相互排斥的辨证关系。”,我为人人，人人为我。,人不犯我，我不犯人。,常相知才能不相疑，不相疑才能常相知。,路人行上行人路，居士隐留隐士居。,雾锁山头山锁雾，天连水尾水连天。,雁飞平顶山，山顶平飞雁；僧游云隐寺，寺隐云游僧。,No X in Nixon.,You can cage a swallow,cant you?But you cant swallow a cage,can you?,Wont lovers revolt now?,Poor Dan is in a droop.,Niagara,O roar again!,Live not on evil!,Step on no pets.,Name no one man.,Nurses run.,Able was I ere I saw Elba.,Ma is as selfless as I am.,Damm it，I am mad.,Desserts,I stressed.,Able was I ere I saw Elba.,未到俄岛我未倒。,英雄缚于俄岛处，出岛我欲缚雄鹰。,英雄落于俄岛处，出岛我欲落雄鹰。,层递（climax)、反复（repetition),一年，两年，三年,，你的望眼将穿，,一年，两年，三年,，我的归心似箭。,Year in year out,youve been looking forward with eager expectation to my home-coming;,year in year out,Ive been looking forward with great anxiety to returning home.,将光慈 写给母亲,李定坤译,登鹳雀楼,白日依山尽,黄河入海流。,欲穷千里目，更上一层楼,Mounting the Stork Tower,The white sun sets behind the mountains,The Yellow River flows into the sea.,Go further up one flight of stairs,And youll widen your view a thousand,li.,连接关系,“,Conjunctive elements,are cohesive not in themselves but indirectly,by virtue of their specific meanings;they are not primarily devices for reaching out into the proceeding(or following)text,but they express certain meanings which presupposes the presence of other elements in the discourse.”(Halliday&Hasan,1976:226),连接成分本身就具有明确含义，通过在语篇中使用这类连接性词语，“人们可以了解子句之间的语义联系，甚至可经前句从逻辑上预见后续句的语义。（胡壮麟，1994：92）,廖秋忠（1992：86-87）的分类,表示添加信息：and,also,too,furthermore,besides,moreover,in addition,what is more,表示因果关系：because,for.For this reason.Since,as a result,thus,therefore,so,consequently,of course,accordingly,表示文章意义的转折或对比：although,however,on the contrary,still,but,otherwise,despite,nevertheless,though,in fact,on the other hand,as a matter of fact,表示文章中事件发生的时空顺序：first,second,third after this/that,meanwhile,suddenly,and so on,then,before,next,formerly,later,finally in the end,at last,表示列举：firstly,secondly,for one thing,for another;first of all,to begin with,then,last,in conclusion,last of all,to conclude,表示举例、解释：for example,for instance,that is,namely,to illustrate,表示总结：in short,to sum up,in conclusion,briefly,on the whole,to conclude,to summarize,本人在香港创业二十余年，历尽艰辛，虽在事业上略有成就，但也饱尝人世间的风风雨雨。每次回乡总是得到家乡各级领导的热情接待，心头总有一种温馨的感受，一种到家的感觉。,It has been more than 20 years since I started my career in Hong Kong,where,I have weathered through various hardships.My modest achievements in business,also,go along with multitudinous pains and tears.,As a result,every time when I return to my hometown,where,I am given warm receptions by the local government leaders,my heart will be over flown with tenderness and affection,for,it gives me a feeling of home.,忙到除夕夜才松口气。全家团圆，坐下来吃“年夜饭”。,All the preparations are not completed until the lunar New Years Eve,when,all the family members sit down around the table to enjoy the“New Years Eve dinner.”,我喜欢看小孩子追逐着旋转的火焰，心里重温起少年的愉悦。,I love gazing upon kids chasing the spinning fireworks,as,it reminds me of my teenage glees.,在生活越来越富足的今天，越来越多的长辈选择“压岁书”作为送给孩子们的过年礼物。连日来市里各大书店门庭若市，少儿类图书的销售量直线上升。,Today with more and more people living a better-off life,seniors in the family would give books to the children as a lunar New Year gift.,As a result,in the past few days,people have beating a path to the big bookstores in the city and sales volumes for various childrens books have increased by large margins.,许多人因此学会了用手势表达简单的日常用语，现在如果有手持纸条的聋哑人前来乘车，问讯处的同志能用哑语回答。,Many staff members have thus learned to put simple daily exchanges into gestures.People working at the information desk,for example,are able to use the languages to answer inquires from those deaf-mutes who still have slips of paper clutched in their hands.,为此，本市将继续以集装箱运输为主攻方向，开发穿山、大榭和梅山深水岸线。,To accomplish the goal,the city will continue to concentrate its efforts on developing its container shipment and,at the same time,open up a deep-water shipment route connecting Chuanshan,Daxie and Meishan.,III.词汇衔接,词汇衔接指通过词的重复、同义、反义、上下义、互补、同现等词汇间的语义关系来实现语篇连贯。,运用这些词可以产生很强的粘合力，形成一张“词汇网”(lexicon network),赋予语篇连贯性。,分为两大类：,1.复现(reiteration),2.同现(collocation),1.复现（同词重复或异词重复）,1)原词复现,2)同义词或近义词复现,（synonyms&antonyms),3)上义词和下义词 复现,(superordinate&subordinate),概括词 general word,具体词 specific word,原词复现,During all the years of my life,until that moment,I had carried the menacing,the hostile killing,world,with me everywhere.No matter what I was doing or saying or feeling,one eye had always been on the,world,-that,world,which I had learnt to distrust almost as soon as I learnt my name,that,world,on which I knew one could never turn ones back,the white mans,world,.(,This Morning,This Evening,So Soon,by James Baldwin),汉语中重复运用某一词的情况很多，翻译时应注意适当调整。,老金奔过去一看，原来是一只不到500克中的羽毛刚长齐的,猫头鹰,。他把,猫头鹰,小心翼翼装进笼子里，然后骑自行车送往离家7.5 公里的城区,林业局,。,林业局,的工作人员把,猫头鹰,放归大自然。,Lao Jin hastened over and found it was a young fledgling,owl,no more than 500 grams in weight.He picked the,bird,up and placed,it,into a cage with much care.Then he cycled the,bird,all the way to,the Municipal Forestry Bureau,7.5 kilometers off his home.,There,the staff members set the,creature,free into the embrace of the forest.,乡镇工业,园区,已经成为我市乡镇,企业,“二次创业”的有效载体，极大地改善了,企业,的发展环境。目前已有3772家,企业,进驻,园区,。,Township industrial,zones,provide solid vehicles for the citys,enterprises,in running new businesses and greatly improve the setting for the development of such,entities,.So far,3772,establishments,have found home in these,quarters,.,同义词和近义词复现,We observe today not a,victory,of party,but a,celebration,of freedom-,symbolizing,an end,as well as a beginning-,signifying,renewal,as well as,change.,(,Inaugural Address,by John Kennedy),孔乙己便涨红了脸，额头上的青筋条条绽出，争辩道：“,窃,书不能算,偷,窃,书读书人的事，能算,偷,么？”,At that Kong Yiji would flush,the veins on his forehead standing out as he protested,“,Taking,books cant be counted as,stealing,Taking,books for a scholar cant be counted as,stealing,.”,王治奎：汉英翻译教程第73页 建议将“窃”与“偷”这对同现词分别译作,“stealing”,和,“theft”,，以充分传达其概念的同一性。修辞效果更好。充分表现了孔乙己违反同一律，窘迫至极、强词夺理的心态。,上下义词复现,We,trotted,on,we,crept,up Constitution Hill,we,rattled（,发嘎嘎声）,down into Lamas Street,and the tailor still rang his bell and a dragon,squealing,in front of his wheels.As we,clip-clopped,over the cobbles that led down to the Towy Bridge,I remembered Grandpas nightly noisy journeys that,rocked,the bed and,shook,the walls,and I saw his gay waistcoat in a vision and his patchwork（,拼缝物）,head tufted and smiling in the candlelight.The tailor before us turned round on his