专题五 短文改错.docx

专题五 短文改错
题组一
Proofreading 1(2019河北石家庄二模)
I went to buy some traditional Chinese medicine on last Sunday. Just before leaving the drugstore, I noticed that some foreigners seems to have difficulty communicate with the assistant. I went over to ask if I needed. The assistant told me that she couldn’t make herself understand about how to boil the mixture correctly. Learning that I could give them the hand, they were relieved. Without some trouble, I translated that the assistant wanted to say. Both sides expressed thanks to me. I was delighted to help other. More importantly, as a Chinese, I felt proudly to see foreigners try traditional Chinese medicine.
答案　
I went to buy some traditional Chinese medicine ① last Sunday. Just before leaving the drugstore, I noticed that some foreigners ②seemsseemed to have difficulty ③communicatecommunicating with the assistant. I went over to ask if I ④ needed. The assistant told me that she couldn’t make herself ⑤understandunderstood about how to boil the mixture correctly. Learning that I could give them
⑥thea hand, they were relieved. Without ⑦someany trouble, I translated ⑧thatwhat the assistant wanted to say. Both sides expressed thanks to me. I was delighted to help ⑨otherothers. More importantly, as a Chinese, I felt ⑩proudlyproud to see foreigners try traditional Chinese medicine.
解析　
①考查介词。此处last Sunday作时间状语不需介词,故去掉介词on。
②考查动词的时态。根据语境可知,此处指发生在过去的事情,故将seems改为seemed。
③考查非谓语动词。have difficulty (in)doing sth.为固定句型,故应把communicate改为communicating。
④考查动词的时态和语态。此处指我走过去问我是否被需要,根据语境,事情发生在过去,且从句的主语为I,故应添加was。
⑤考查非谓语动词。understand与herself为被动关系,故将understand改为understood。
⑥考查冠词。此处give sb. a hand为固定用法,故将the改为a。
⑦考查不定代词。without表否定意义,some常用于肯定句中,any常用于否定句或疑问句中,故将some改为any。
⑧考查名词性从句。此处引导宾语从句,且宾语从句中缺少say的宾语,而that引导宾语从句并不充当成分,故将that改为what。
⑨考查代词。此处指“其他人”,应用others,other表示“其他的”,故将other改为others。
⑩考查形容词。看到外国人尝试传统的中药,我感到骄傲。felt为系动词,后面应用形容词作表语,故将proudly改为proud。
Proofreading 2(2019东北三省三校一模)
You must have heard about Dolly and have been amazed by the first cloned animal. But here came a problem:should we clone humans? When being asked about this question, a large number of people which are interested in the topic hold the view that it’s beneficial to clone humans. Therefore, some other people, me including, are against this idea. Cloning humans can bring negative effects and wrong informations. In the first place, they may not be treated equal as normal people, which I believe will make him suffer a lot. In second place, human cloning may lead in some social disorder, and it is quite dangerous.
答案　
You must have heard about Dolly and have been amazed by the first cloned animal. But here ①camecomes a problem:should we clone humans? When ② asked about this question, a large number of people ③whichwho/that are interested in the topic hold the view that it’s beneficial to clone humans. ④ThereforeHowever, some other people, me ⑤includingincluded, are against this idea. Cloning humans can bring negative effects and wrong ⑥informationsinformation. In the first place, they may not be treated ⑦equalequally as normal people, which I believe will make ⑧himthem suffer a lot. In ⑨
second place, human cloning may lead ⑩into some social disorder, and it is quite dangerous.
解析　
①考查动词的时态。此处需要用一般现在时,而非一般过去时,所以将came改为comes。
②考查非谓语动词。people与ask为被动关系,且根据句意可知不是表示正在被问,所以将being去掉。
③考查定语从句。先行词为people,指人,所以应当用who或that来引导,而不是which。
④考查副词。根据前后两句关系可知,此处是转折关系而不是因果关系,所以将Therefore改为However。
⑤考查非谓语动词。me和include为被动关系,所以将including改为included。
⑥考查名词。information为不可数名词。
⑦考查副词。此处用副词修饰动词,所以改为副词equally。
⑧考查代词。前文提及they,根据前后一致原则可知,此处应为them,所以将him改为them。
⑨考查冠词。此处second是序数词,前面需要有形容词性物主代词或定冠词the来修饰。根据句意可知,此处需要加入the。
⑩考查动词短语。lead to为固定短语,意为“导致”。
Proofreading 3(2018安徽合肥二次质检)
Last Saturday our class went hiking in a countryside. We meet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily while a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so frightening and even burst into tears. One of my classmate found a long rope and we finally got him out. Fortunately, she didn’t suffer seriously injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience we’ll never forget it, though we didn’t enjoy ourselves very much that day.
答案　
Last Saturday our class went hiking in ①athe countryside. We ②meetmet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily ③whilewhen a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so ④frighteningfrightened and even burst into tears. One of my
⑤classmateclassmates found a long rope and we finally got ⑥himher out. Fortunately, she didn’t suffer
⑦seriouslyserious injuries, but it seemed that her ankle ⑧ slightly twisted. We managed to
⑨sendingsend her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience we’ll never forget ⑩ , though we didn’t enjoy ourselves very much that day.

解析　
①考查冠词。句意:上周六,我们班去了乡下远足。in the countryside为固定短语,意为“在乡下”,故将a改为the。
②考查动词的时态。根据上句中的Last Saturday及本句中的at 8:00 am可知本句应该用一般过去时,故将meet改为met。
③考查连词。句意:在路上,我们开心地又唱又笑,这时一个女孩突然掉进了一个深坑里。be doing sth. when...为固定句式,意为“正在做某事,这/那时……”。when在该句型中为并列连词。故将while改为when。
④考查形容词。句意:她感到很害怕甚至突然大哭起来。frightened感到害怕的;frightening令人害怕的。本句表示“感到害怕的”,故将frightening改为frightened。
⑤考查名词的数。根据“One of”可知需将classmate改为classmates。
⑥考查代词。错误处应该用her指代上文提到的a girl。
⑦考查形容词。错误处应该用形容词作名词injuries的定语,故将seriously改为serious。
⑧考查被动语态。her ankle与twist为被动关系,故本句需用被动语态,因此在her ankle后加was。
⑨考查非谓语动词作宾语。manage后需用不定式作宾语。manage to do sth. 意为“成功做某事”。故将sending改为send。
⑩考查定语从句。“we’ll never forget”为定语从句,先行词experience在定语从句中作宾语,省去了引导词that或which,it多余,故将it删除。
题组二
Proofreading 1(2019四川成都二诊)
　　Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Yellow Mountain. We carried two backpacks, that turned out to be pretty heavier for the hike. I was not an experiencing hiker and those endless steps make me want to return to the safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me great. “Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there.” I pulled me together and kept going. After three-hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful sceneries on the way, we got to the top finally. For our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very much inviting.

答案　
Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Yellow Mountain. We carried two backpacks,
① thatwhich turned out to be pretty ②heavierheavy for the hike. I was not an ③experiencingexperienced hiker and those endless steps ④makemade me want to return to the safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me ⑤greatgreatly. “Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there.” I pulled ⑥memyself together and kept going. After ⑦ three-hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful ⑧sceneriesscenery on the way, we got to the top finally.⑨ForTo our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very ⑩ inviting.
解析　
①考查定语从句。根据句子结构可知,此处为非限制性定语从句,所修饰的先行词为指物的名词backpacks,所以把that改为which,which在定语从句中作主语。
②考查形容词。根据语境可知,此处没有比较的意思,所以应用形容词原级。
③考查形容词。experienced为形容词,表示“有经验的,经验丰富的”。
④考查动词的时态。根据文中的时间状语“Last year”可知,本文讲述的是过去的事情,所以应用一般过去时。
⑤考查副词。一般用副词修饰动词,所以应用副词greatly修饰动词encouraged。
⑥考查代词。根据该句的主语“I”可知,此处应用反身代词myself。I pulled myself together and kept going.意为“我振作起来,继续前进”。
⑦考查冠词。hike为可数名词,前面应加不定冠词,又根据three-hour的发音以辅音音素开头,所以应用不定冠词a。
⑧考查名词。scenery为不可数名词,没有复数形式。
⑨考查介词。此处为固定搭配,to one’s pleasure表示“令某人高兴的是”。
⑩考查副词。much一般用来修饰比较级,根据该句可知,此处“very”修饰形容词原级“inviting”,所以把much删掉。
Proofreading 2(2019山东济南一模)
Dear Mr. Brown,
We have learned that you were going back to America for the summer vacation. To express our thank for your excellent teaching in our school, we have decided have a party for you. The party which will start at 6:30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall. It will possible last an hour. To start with, our monitor will give a speech on behalf of a whole class. Then we would like to invite you to join us and singing some English songs. In the end of the party, we will present you with some gifts and cards, mostly making by ourselves. I believe you will have a good time together.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Frank
答案　
Dear Mr. Brown,
We have learned that you ①wereare going back to America for the summer vacation. To express our ②thankthanks for your excellent teaching in our school, we have decided ③ have a party for you. The party ④ will start at 6:30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall. It will ⑤possiblepossibly last an hour. To start with, our monitor will give a speech on behalf of ⑥athe/our whole class. Then we would like to invite you to join us and ⑦singingsing some English songs. ⑧InAt the end of the party, we will present you with some gifts and cards, mostly ⑨makingmade by ourselves. I believe ⑩youwe will have a good time together.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Frank
解析　
①考查动词的时态。根据语境可知,此处用现在进行时表将来,所以把were改为are。
②考查名词。thank v.感谢;thanks n.感激;谢意。
③考查固定搭配。decide to do sth.表示 “决定做某事 ”。
④考查句子结构。根据句子结构可知,此句为简单句,which多余,所以应删掉。
⑤考查副词。根据句子结构可知,此处应用副词possibly修饰动词last。
⑥考查限定词。根据语境可知,此处特指整个班级或者我们整个班级,所以把不定冠词a改为定冠词the或者our。
⑦考查动词。根据该句中的and可知,此处和前面的join并列,所以应改为动词原形。invite sb. to do sth.表示 “邀请某人做某事”。
⑧考查介词。at the end of...表示“在……结束时”,in the end 表示“最后”,单独使用,不与介词of连用。
⑨考查非谓语动词。根据句子结构可知,make与所修饰名词some gifts and cards为被动关系,所以应用过去分词made作后置定语。
⑩考查代词。根据语境以及该句中的 “together ”可知,此处应表示 “我们”,所以将you改为we。
Proofreading 3(2019河南郑州第二次质量检测)
I used to be a person who hates exercising. But after I started playing baseball,I attracted by the sport. Therefore, I cut down on most of my spare time, like shopping. Though it wasn’t the hard process for me, I needed to make more of an effort than others. I enjoy the feeling of work with my teammates as well as the time we spend it together. There is a proverb that goes, “The process is much beautiful than the outcome.”
I am a beginner in this sport. Sometimes people will look down on me, and it doesn’t matter. It will only make me keep trying. Only with practising over and over again can I catch up with other fantastic player one day. The challenge encourages myself to go on.
答案　
I used to be a person who ①hateshated exercising. But after I started playing baseball, I ②ttracted by the sport. Therefore, I cut down on most of my spare time, like shopping. Though it wasn’t ③thea hard process for me, I needed to make more of an effort than others. I enjoy the feeling of ④workworking with my teammates as well as the time we spend ⑤ together. There is a proverb that goes, “The process is ⑥muchmore或much后加more beautiful than the outcome.”
I am a beginner in this sport. Sometimes people will look down on me, ⑦andbut it doesn’t matter. It will only make me keep trying. Only ⑧withby practising over and over again can I catch up with other fantastic ⑨playerplayers one day. The challenge encourages ⑩myselfme to go on.
解析　
①考查动词的时态。根据句中的used可知此处应用一般过去时,故将hates改为hated。
②考查动词的语态。句意:但是在我开始打棒球之后,我就被这项运动吸引了。主句中主语I与attracted之间为被动关系,故在I与attracted之间加was,构成被动语态。
③考查冠词。句意:虽然它对我来说并不是一个很难的过程,但是我需要比他人付出更多的努力。此处表泛指,不是特指,故将the改为a。
④考查非谓语动词。错误处work作of的宾语,所以需用动名词作of的宾语。故将work改为working。
⑤考查定语从句中代词的多用。we spend it together作定语修饰the time,省略了关系代词which或that,it就是which/that作的成分,故将it去掉。
⑥考查比较级。此处指过程比结果更美好。此句中有than应考虑使用比较级。故将much改为more或在much后加more。
⑦考查连词。句意:有时人们会瞧不起我,但是没关系。前后两个分句构成转折关系。故将and改为but。
⑧考查介词。通过某种方式或手段做某事用介词by。故将with改为by。
⑨考查名词复数。句意:只有通过反复的练习,有一天我才能赶上其他出色的球员们。此处表复数概念,故应将player改为players。
⑩考查代词。句意:这个挑战鼓励我继续坚持下去。
题组三
Proofreading 1(2019陕西咸阳一模)
Cell phones are very convenient for students to search for learning information. Beside, they can bring us a lot of funs. However, once addicting to them, we are always wasting time on them where we should study.
Last Monday I take my cell phone to school. During a lesson, I was secretly playing with it. Suddenly my teacher was standing nearby, glared at me. Then, I had to hand it in because it against the school rule. At first I felt very much angry, but later I realized that I was wrong. Thanks for the teacher, I know that the cell phone isn’t the necessary part of school life.
答案　
Cell phones are very convenient for students to search for learning information. ①BesideBesides, they can bring us a lot of ②funsfun. However, once ③addictingaddicted to them, we are always wasting time on them ④wherewhen we should study.
Last Monday I ⑤taketook my cell phone to school. During a lesson, I was secretly playing with it. Suddenly my teacher was standing nearby, ⑥glaredglaring at me. Then, I had to hand it in because it ⑦ against the school rule. At first I felt very ⑧ angry, but later I realized that I was wrong. Thanks ⑨forto the teacher, I know that the cell phone isn’t ⑩thea necessary part of school life.
解析　
①考查副词。句意:此外,它们可以给我们带来许多乐趣。beside意为“在……旁边”,故将Beside改为Besides。
②考查名词。fun为不可数名词,没有复数形式。故将funs改为fun。
③考查非谓语动词。addicted为形容词化的过去分词,意为“沉溺于……”,故将addicting改为addicted。
④考查定语从句。句意:然而,一旦我们对它们上瘾,我们总是把我们应该学习的时间浪费在手机上。句中先行词为time,定语从句中缺少时间状语,故将where改为when。
⑤考查动词时态。根据时间状语Last Monday可知本句需用一般过去时,故将take改为took。
⑥考查非谓语动词。本句中主语my teacher与glare为逻辑上的主动关系,故用glaring表主动,作伴随状语。
⑦考查谓语动词。本句中because为从属连词,引导原因状语从句,主语为it,其后的against为介词,且主句中用的是一般过去时,故在it与against之间添加was。
⑧考查副词。本句中angry为形容词原级,very常修饰原级,而much常修饰比较级。故将much去掉。
⑨考查介词。本句中thanks to意为“幸亏;由于”,为固定短语。故将for改为to。
⑩考查冠词。句意:多亏了老师,我知道了手机不是学校生活必需的一部分。此处表泛指,故将the改为a。
Proofreading 2(2019吉林辽源二模)
After school, as usual, I went back home. On the bus, I find a woman with a cute baby standing besides me and having difficulty holding on to the grab pole. In spite my own exhaustion, I rose from my seat and gave them away without hesitation to her and the baby. She thanked me several times sincerely, that made me feel extremely proud. I was realized my little favor could real make a difference to a person who was badly in need of it. Arrived home, I almost forgot my tiredness. I was lost in happinesses because I did a little for a stranger and gained a lot.
答案　
After school, as usual, I went back home. On the bus, I ①findfound a woman with a cute baby standing ②besidesbeside me and having difficulty holding on to the grab pole. In spite ③ my own exhaustion, I rose from my seat and gave ④themit away without hesitation to her and the baby. She thanked me several times sincerely, ⑤thatwhich made me feel extremely proud. I ⑥
realized my little favor could ⑦realreally make a difference to a person who was badly in need of it. ⑧ArrivedArriving home, I almost forgot my tiredness. I was lost in ⑨happinesseshappiness because I did a little for a stranger ⑩andbut gained a lot.
解析　
①考查动词的时态。本文讲的是“我”在放学回家的路上发生的事情,全文基本时态是一般过去时,故将find改为found。
②考查介词。“在……旁边”应用介词beside,故将besides改为beside。
③考查固定短语。in spite of为固定短语,意为“虽然;尽管”,后为名词短语作宾语,故在spite后加of。
④考查代词。此处代词指代上文中的my seat,为单数形式,故将them改为it。
⑤考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知,此处为非限制性定语从句,that不能引导非限制性定语从句,且关系代词在定语从句中作主语,故将that改为which。
⑥考查动词的语态。句意:我意识到我的小恩惠对一个非常需要它的人来说真的能起到作用。主语I与realize之间为主动关系,因此谓语动词应用主动语态,故将was删除。
⑦考查副词。修饰动词make应该用副词形式,故将real改为really。