专题03-近三年(2019-2021)中考英语作文真题.docx

专题01 近三年（2019-2021）中考英语作文真题
2022年中考英语满分作文通用模板

A
（2019·北京·中考真题）
文段表达
从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
提示词语: design，safety rule，careful，protect，picture
提示问题: When should you hand in the poster?
What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email .

If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li   Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. As it is required，you are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday.
Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you.First and foremost，the basic safety rules are of great importance，which should be included in your poster.In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school.Last but by no means least，if I were you，I would add a few suggestions about safety awareness，considering that better safe than sorry.In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li   Hua
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给Peter写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相关事宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先告诉Peter海报上交的时间；然后和他分享一些设计海报的想法。第二个内容应该是短文的主体。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。短文应以一般现在时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要合理安排短文内容，叙述应有层次、有条理。可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语，如First, Second, Last but not least等等。题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给Peter写邮件，告诉他制作主题海报的一些事情。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合题目要求。除题目中给出的开头和结尾，短文主要包括两个内容：第一段用一句话告诉Peter上交海报的时间；文章的中心和重点是放在了第二段上，这一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海报的想法。主要从四个方面进行阐述，内容非常详实，并使用了First and foremost, In the second place, Last but by no means least, In addition等短语，分清了这一段的层次，叙述非常有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，并使用了较复杂的句式结构，表现了作者较强的语言运用能力。短文中较好的句型有：Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you.、In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school、In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.等等。

B
（2020·广东广州·中考真题）
今天的英语课上，班级进行了题为“我送过的一份珍贵礼物，”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文，汇报你们四人小组的分享内容，需包括以下要点。
From
Bob
Kate
Lily
You
To
parents
good friend
foreign teacher
（请补充）
What
soup
Photo album
Paper cutting

（请补充）
Why
thanks and love
friendship
culture
（请补充）
注意：1. 词数：80词左右（短文的开头己给出，不计入词数）：2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
In today's English class, we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I gave”. Here is what we shared in ou group. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
In today’s English class.we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I gave”.Here is what we shared in our group.
A valuable gift given by Bob was a bowl of soup to his parents. In his opinion, he considered it as a good gift to express his thanks and love to them. Kate gave a photo album to one of her good friends because she wanted to cherish every moment with her/him, hoping that their friendship could last forever. In addition, Lily sent her foreign teacher a piece of paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese culture.
For me, what I gave to my grandparent was a smartphone. We don't live together and my parents are so busy that we can't meet each other often. However, we can have video chats by smartphone.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：这篇短文要求学生们根据题目中给出的图表，汇报一下你这个小组中四个人送过的珍贵的礼物。写作前，应仔细观察图表中的信息，浏览可知，短文中应介绍清楚这个礼物是谁送给谁的，是什么以及为什么送这个礼物。图表中给出的都是关键词语，学生写作时，应用完整的句子表达。并且对于最后一栏中自己送的礼物，学生需要发挥想象力，结合实际情况，进行补充。短文应以一般过去时态为主来叙述。
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先文章内容完整，包括了图表中的所有信息，对最后一栏的内容进行了补充，并对细节进行了拓展，使文章的内容更加充实。短文有三段，第一段是题目中给出的开头；第二段中作者主要介绍了小组中其他三人送的礼物；最后一段介绍了自己送过的礼物。层次清晰，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，符合表达需要，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，有变化，增强了文章的表现力。
高分亮点：
短语：in one’s opinion；in addition；each other。
句型：过去分词作后置定语；动词不定式作目的状语；because引导原因状语从句；现在分词作伴随状语；which引导定语从句；what引导主语从句；so…that引导结果状语从句。

C
（2021·浙江宁波·中考真题）
假如你是李华, 上个月你校举行了 “祖国在我心中”的主题活动（theme event）, 请你根据以下提供的信息并结合你参加这个主题活动的经历, 写一篇英语短文向你校英语报投稿。
注意：
（1）短文必须包括导图的所有要点, 并适当发挥;
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
（3）词数 80-100;标题已给出, 不计入总词数。

Motherland in My Heart
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【答案】
Motherland in My Heart
Last month, our school held an event with the theme of “Motherland in My Heart” to express our love for our motherland.
During the event, we had many activities, including singing red songs and telling stories about the Red Army. I took part in the singing competition. Besides, I attended the speech contest in which I told a story about a hero. Many students were moved by my story.
I think this event is very meaningful. I’m proud of my country. I hope our motherland will become much greater and everybody can live a better life.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目要求根据所给提示，以“Motherland in My Heart”为题，结合自己参加“祖国在我心中”主题活动的经历写篇文章，向学校英语报投稿。
2.写作指导：人称应采用第一人称，介绍主题活动内容时用一般过去时，表达自己的感受时用一般现在时。注意要包含所给要点，保证条理清晰。

D
（2021·湖北襄阳·中考真题）
“谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦。”有数据显示，中国餐饮业人均食物浪费量为每餐93克，浪费率为11.7%。减少餐饮浪费，是践行绿色发展理念的必然要求。倡导餐桌上的文明新风，需要我们共同努力。请你依据下列三个要点提示，用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点提示：
（1）你和身边的人平时就餐是否节约；
（2）叙述一次你经历过的与节约或者浪费有关的就餐过程；
（3）简单表述你对这次就餐的看法。
2. 注意事项：
（1）用词在90个左右：
（2）行文应连贯流畅；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名或校名。
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【答案】
Food waste is a big problem. There are still a lot of people who are hungry. It is also harmful to the environment. My family don’t like to waste food. When we go out for dinner, we always order no more food than we need, and we will take the left food home.
One day, my friend Lucy and I went out for lunch. She ordered a lot of food to celebrate passing the exam. In the end, much food was left. I told her that we should take it home, because wasting food is not right. She felt ashamed and promised not to waste food next time.
I think when you throw away food, you are not just wasting the food itself. Resources are also wanted while growing, transporting and cooking the food. These things all take energy, time and water. So let’s avoid wasting food from now on.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“食物浪费”这一现象写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段描述曾经历过的与浪费有关的就餐过程；第三段发表自己的看法。写作时保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

E
（2019·重庆·中考真题）
书面表达。
假如你参加了学校组织的“走近乡村”寒假社会实践活动。请根据要求，向某英语网站投稿，分享活动经历。
要求：1.80~120词，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
          2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：

Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine!

【答案】
Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine.
During the winter vacation, my classmates and I joined in the school activity “Get close to the countryside”.
We live in the famers’ homes. Their great living conditions surprised us a lot. Do you know where vegetables come from? We got the answer when working with the farmers. Besides, we learned about other plants and some farm animals. How interesting!
We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from books before, and felt the wonderful changes of the countryside. We realized how hard the farmers worked and decided to save food. We were happy to see the farmers’ life was getting better and better.   
We really hope we’ll have another activity like that this winter vacation!
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于一篇图表作文，根据表格提供的信息来介绍“走近乡村”寒假社会实践活动的经历。人称为第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，既要写活动的过程，又要总结活动感受与收获。并补充两条个人的观点。表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。高分句型：1.We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from books before. 我们经历了农村的生活，学到了一些我们以前从书中得不到的东西。that we couldn’t get from books before.是定语从句，修饰不定代词something。2. We really hope we’ll have another activity like that this winter vacation! 我们真的希望今年寒假还能有这样的活动！hope后面是省略that的宾语从句。
F
（2020·江苏泰州·中考真题）
假定你是李华，三年的初中生活就要结束了你和好友Mike分别在即，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语给Mike留言：
1.回忆你俩之间一段难忘的经历（如互相帮助、互相鼓励或一起参加某项活动等），并谈谈你的感受；
2.你对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；
3.你对Mike的祝福和期待。
要求：
1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3.词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye._______________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye.
We have studied in our school for three years. We had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, you have kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of your best friends. I’ve learned a lot from you.
             It’s important to keep healthy. I hope you can keep doing sports every day. You can take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. I think sports can make you energetic.
I wish you can become better and better in everything. I am looking forward to your success.
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一张留言条。三年的初中生活就要结束，要求给好友Mike留言，回忆难忘的经历并谈谈你的感受；提出对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；对Mike的祝福和期待。
2.例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，主要以第一、二人称为主，用一般现在时和一般过去时来写，在讲述最值得回忆的故事时要用一般过去时，其它用一般现在时；内容包含四部分：第一部分开篇点题；第二部分讲述难忘的一件事情及自己的感想；第三部分对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；第四部分对Mike的祝福和期待。本文时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。
3.高分亮点：
短语：say goodbye；do well in；do well in；Since then；as soon as；have a talk with sb；learn a lot from；keep healthy；take part in；in order to；look forward to。
句型：①让步状语从句 No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.
②时间状语从句 when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.
                            As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well.
③宾语从句 I think I am so lucky to become one of your best friends.