专题02-建议信&感谢信&投诉信-应用文写作--(高考新题型).docx

专题02建议信&感谢信&投诉信
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Part I
建议信必备词汇+高分句式+满分模板
Part II
感谢信必备词汇+高分句式+满分模板
Part III
投诉信必备词汇+高分句式+满分模板

Part I建议信
1. 必备词汇
1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见
3.as follows 如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view  在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in... 参加
7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. into account/consideration  把……考虑在内
9.with regard to 关于；就
10. put forward 提出
11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事
13.with time going on  随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with 面临
15.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待
2. 高分句式
第一部分：说明写信的目的
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因
(1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
(3) 下午，我们会一起……
During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
(4) 记得带上水和午餐。
Remember to take water and lunch with you.
(5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club.
(6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。
I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.
(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
(8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
第三部分：提出建议
我建议……
I’d like to suggest that…
May I suggest that…?
In my opinion…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
I am writing to advise…
If I were you, I would…
第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!
（给你）最美好的祝愿！
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
3. 满分模板
模板①
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua

Part II感谢信
1. 必备词汇
1.thank sb. for sth. /doing sth. 因某事而感激某人
2. be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事而感激某人
3. show/express/extend/convey my sincere thanks/gratitude to sb. for sth. 向某人表达我诚挚的谢意
4.in trouble 陷入困境
5. make great／good progress 取得很大的进步
6.in/during/over the past/last four years 过去四年
7. be admitted to/into a university 被一所大学录取
8.say thanks to you for helping me 谢谢你帮助我
9. How time flies! 时间过得真快！
10．As time goes on/goes by/with time going on/going by 随着时间的推移
11. thanks to/owing to/because of your help 多亏了你的帮助
12.enjoy myself 玩得高兴
13.pay a visit to. 去参观，拜访
14. have a better understanding of… 对……有更好的理解
15.a place of interest 名胜
2. 高分句式
首段：表达真挚谢意
1. Thank you so much for your generous help.
非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。
2.1 am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help.
我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。
3.1t was so kind of you to treat me as your own sister.
谢谢你把我当作自己的妹妹。
4.1 am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.
我很感谢你为我所做的一切。
5.1 would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.
我想感谢你的帮助。
6. I’m writing to thank you for the few wonderful days in London.
我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过的快乐日子。
7.1 am writing to express/show/convey my sincere thanks to you for your help.
我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。
8. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.
为此，我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
中间段：解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
1.Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in my English.
多亏了你的帮助，我的英语有了飞速的进步。
2. Without/But for your help(lf it were not for your help) ,I would not have made so much progress in my English.
要是没有你的帮助，我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
3.1 extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor.
我太感谢你的帮助了。
结尾段：再次感谢
1.Thanks again for helping me.
再次感谢你对我的帮助。
2.Thank you again for your generous help.
再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。
3. 1 would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
如果你能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜感激。
4. Your kindness and help will always be remembered.
我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
5.1 deeply/greatly appreciate your hospitality（款待）．
我深深感谢你们的盛情款待。
3. 满分模板
模板①
Dear ________(对象),
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear ______,
How about your life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因)
Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢)
Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿)
Yours sincerely
Lihua
Part II投诉信
1. 必备词汇
1. 抱怨 complain about
2. 表达不满 convey/express one’s dissatisfaction
3. 对……满意 be content/satisfied with
4. 糟糕的服务 poor service
5. 采取措施 take measures
6. 解决问题 deal with/solve the problem
7. 调查此次事件 investigate/look into the matter/incident
8. 出乎意料 out of one’s expectation
11. 向……道歉 make an apology to…/apologize to…
12. 出乎意料 out of one’s expectation
13. 不用说 needless to say
14. 尽快 as soon as possible
15. 把某事牢记在心 bear sth. in mind
2. 高分句式
首段模板句式
1. I am writing to you about... which I received/bought...
我写信给你是关于……我收到/买了…
2. I am going to complain about...
我要投诉……
3. I am sorry to have to send this letter.. which I received/bought...
很抱歉我不得不寄这封信我收到/买了…
篇中模板句式
1. When we checked.... we noticed..
当我们国土……我们注意到. .
2. When I took... out of the bag and examined... closely, I found...
当我把……从袋子里拿出来检查…密切,我发现…
3. When I unpacked… and tried to use it, it did not work.
当我打开. .我试着用它，但没有用。
4. 我对……不满意有一些主要原因。首先，……更糟糕的是，……最后，……
There are some main reasons why I am not content with… At first, … What’s worse, … Eventually, …
结尾段模板句式
1. Please let me know what you intend to do in this matter.
请让我知道你打算对这件事做什么。
2. In view of the inconvenience this has caused, I feel you should...
鉴于给您带来的不便，我认为您应该……
3. I sincerely hope that/It is my sincere hope that you will look into/investigate the matter/incident seriously and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.
我真诚地希望你能认真调查这件事情，以及采取恰当的措施防止类似事件再次发生。
4. I would appreciate it very much if you could take measures to deal with/solve the problem as soon as possible.
你若能尽快采取措施处理这个问题，我将感激不尽。
3. 满分模板
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is/I' m ________(①自我介绍). I am writing to you for something to tell you something about__________________(②投诉的内容).
___________(③简述导致矛盾的事件). I______________(④陈述本人曾做过的努力). But_____________（⑤投诉原因一）. Besides, _______________(⑥投诉原因二). To be frank, ________________(⑦客观评论，以示诚恳). I do hope/ I wish that__________(⑧表达本人期待的解决方案).
Do you agree with what I said? I am expecting your answer.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua