过渡性词语在作文中的使用.doc

过渡性词汇在书面表达中的作用
一．常见过渡性词汇及示例
1. 表递进关系
and then besides even in addition(to) what’s more what’s worse to make matters worse worse still further more moreover
e.g.
a.. They are going to get married ; what is more /besides ,they are setting up in business .
b. Tigers are protected animals in our country but they are in danger of dying out .Too many trees have been cut down , which has destroyed the places where tigers used to live .Some people even kill them and sell their skins to make money .
c. It was getting dark; worse still/what was worse/to make the matter worse, they lost their way.
2. 表转折关系
however ； after all； or； or else； otherwise； yet； though ； on the country； on the other hand ； nevertheless
e.g
a .There are good reasons for owning a car . However , I ’m afraid more and more cars will cause many problems .
b. I know he hasn’t finished the work , after all he is very busy .
c. We must run , or (or else ) we will be too late .
3. 总结与概括
in a word ； in short ； in general ； generally； at last ； finally； in conclusion ； in brief
e g .
a . She is pretty , hardworking and kind to others .In a word (In brief ) she is a good girl .
b. There is still some weakness in the legs , but generally /in general hercondition is good .
c. In a word /In general I am in favor of the proposal .
d. At last / Finally /In conclusion , I wish to thank you all for coming to my party .
4表解释说明与描述
for example /instance； such as； actually ； in fact； as a matter of fact； in other words ； that is to say； namely
e.g. Liu Xiaoqing was once considered as one of the most popular
actress in China between the 1980s and the 1990s .She used to live a rich and meaningful life .For example ,she began to appear on the stage at 5 ; when young , she showed great interest in singing and dancing ;She had entered an art school and worked in the country as a bared-footed doctor ;In the 1970s ,she played the part of Xiao Hua in a film with the same name and won the best actress award .
Later she was chosen by Beijing Film Studio and acted in many films , such as Fu Rong Town , The Secret Buddhist , Chun Tao and so on 。She had developed her own manner of acting , that is ( to say) ,to describe common people’s inner heart .
5. 表因果关心
because of; due to ; owning to; as a result; thanks to; therefore; so hence; on account of
e.g.
a . For years , people there tried to keep the balance of nature ; as a result , the countryside has now taken on a new look .
b. Thanks to her timely help , he has made much progress .
c. There will be a strong wind and the temperature will drop by 5- 8 . Also it is going to be cloudy or there will be light snow falls tomorrow morning .Therefore , make sure all the windows are shut .
6.强调 indeed ; really; surely ; certainly; above all
e. g.
a . He is indeed/really/surely a remarkable painter .
b. The results are indeed/really/surely satisfactory .
c. Madam Curie once said , “Life is hard ,but above all we must believe in ourselves .
7．表对比关系（对称关系）
however ; on the other hand; while; but on one hand ….. on the other hand ; instead of; just as ; similarly ; in the same way; like ; unlike
e.g
a. He is a good father , however ,he isn’t a good husband .
b. Beijing lies in North China while Guangzhou in South China .
c.
伦 敦
北 京
汽车靠左行
汽车靠右行
很多人乘汽车上班
多数人骑自行车上班
阴天多
阴天多
一个星期工作五天
一个星期工作五天
懂中文少
懂英文的多
学生教轻松
学生学习勤奋
In our country cars are driven on the left side of the road , but here on the right side .Many people go to work by car in London , while most people in Beijng go to work by bike . The climate in Beijing in better than ours ,which is fine most of the time .But on the other hand London has so many cloudy days .People in Beijng work 5 days a week just as those in London . In Beijng , students work hard and many can speak English .However, students in London don’t make full use of their time and few know Chinese .
8.表时间顺序
First； second ； then ； and then； after that； afterwards； later ； next ； meanwhile； in the meanwhile； at the same time； at present ； finally； at last immediately ； suddenly ； soon
e.g.
a . One day Mr.Wang was riding along the street when suddenly a car came running towards him …… Hearing his cry for help , someone immediately/ at once phoned the police and the hospital .Soon /Later and ambulance arrived and took Mr Wang to hospital and later/finally the driver was caught .
b. How to fry an egg : :First …. Second Tired ….and then ……
9.表空间顺序
here ； there ； on one side … on the other side ； in front of ； at the back of ； next to； opposite ； on the right /left (of) ； in the center of
e.g

250m
330m
图 书 馆
实 验 楼
饭 厅
办公楼
教学楼
教学楼
广 场
运 动 场
学生宿舍

校 办
工 厂
学生宿舍

This is YuYing Middle School .It’s 330 meters long and 250 metres wide .
Entering the school . you can see beautiful buildings in which are the teachers’ offices and bright classrooms . In front of them there is a square with two tiny gardens on its both sides .
On the left /In the south west corner stand the library and the labs . North of them are students’ dormitories and the dinning hall .On the right lies a large playground with so many trees around it .And there is a school –run factory in the northeast corner of the school yard . Such is our school , large and beautiful and we all love it .
10 表并列关系
or as well as and also too
e.g
a..We study Chinese ,math and English as well /too .
b. Stay here or go out to play .It’s up to you .
11.表让步关系
Though； although ； as； wherever ； no matter where/who /when /how / what.；. while ； in spite of
a. Though/Although/Even if /though he is disabled ,he is a man with determination .
b. Though /Although great effects have been made to control pollution, little progress has been made .
c. Learned as you are , you should turn to others for advice wherever /no matter where you go .
12 表条件关系
if ； once ； on condition that ； unless
e. g
a . You can go out to play if / on condition that you finish your homework .
b. You cannot go out unless you finish your homework .
13 . 过渡性插入语
I think ； in my opinion； I’m afraid； you know； as we all know； as far as I know
as far as I ‘m concerned ； as can be seen； from the chart ； As is shown in the picture
14 .表目的
for the purpose of； so as to ； in order to ； so that ； in order that
e.g. We left so that /in order that we would be more room left for others .
二、 书面表达实例
(一)根据图标何提示，写一篇文章。 阐述手机给人们带来的利弊
1.方便，随时的联系
2.许多功能，如发短信上网等
3.时尚，使拥有者具有安全感
4.接到打错的电话并为之付费
5.电磁辐射有害健康
6.追求时尚可以理解但学生的首要任务是学习

million

As can be seen from the chart /As is shown in the chart , great changes have taken place in ownership of mobile phones in China . At the end of 2002, there were million mobile users . By the year 2005, the number will reach up 30 million .
On one hand , people have found mobile phones very convenient .First they can get in touch with each other whenever and wherever they like .Second there are many different functions , such as sending short messages and surfing the Internet . Also /Besides/What’s more , owing a mobile phone is a fashion and make you feel safe in case of an emergency .
On the other hand , a mobile phone may also bring us some trouble . For example ,you will have to pay for a wrong incoming phone call .What’s more , the radiation from the phone may do harm to our health .In spite of this , the number of people using mobile phones is still increasing .
In a word/.In my opinion , following the fashion is understandable , but as students , we should put all our heart into studies .
（二） 你的英国网友Jason 询问关于姚明的情况， 请及根据在国内网站上所收集的有关信息给他回复一封电子邮件， 谈谈有关姚明的情况：
生日 ：1980.9.12 身高 ： 2.26 米
出生地 上海 最喜欢的食品 ：肉
体重 ：134 公斤
最喜欢的颜色：蓝色 最崇拜的人物 ：周恩来
座右铭 ：相信自己 1997：进上海篮球队
1998 ：入选国家队 2000 ：入选亚洲全明星队
2002 ；CBA总冠军主力队员
2002 ：成为CBA 选秀(draft)状元并加盟休斯顿火箭队( Houstion Rockets)
现在感受： 很累 今后打算 ：暂无更多计划
注意 ：1. 邮件的开头已经为你写好
词数： 100 左右
As we know /As is known , Yao Ming is the most famous basketball players in China and the hero in the eyes of millions of fans ,
Yao , now 2..26 meters tall and 134kg in weight ,was born in Shanghai on September12, 1980. He likes meat most and his favorite color is blue .
He joined Shanghai basketball team in 1997 and became a member of China national team in 1998. Two years later he was elected as a member of Asian All-star basketball team . In 2002, Shanghai won the champion of CBA and he was among the top players .
In the same year he went to the US and became Number One Overall in the NBA draft . Later /Soon he joined Houston Rockets .
However,he said he felt a little tired because of the countless matches as well as struggles . Therefore /So /And it was reported that up to now he still hasn’t got any further definite plan .