作文专题一：看图作文.doc

作文专题训练一：看图作文（针砭时弊类）
第一段：描述、解释或说明图画（必要时可用习语、谚语）
1 显然这幅画隐含着一个当今社会上普遍存在的现象。

2 正如图中（生动）描绘的那样，……

3 这幅图传递出的意思是……

4 从以上图画可以明显的看出……

5 很明显，图画的作者希望引起我们对……的注意

第二段：分析导致问题的原因或提出解决问题的办法
1 导致这个现象（问题）的因素可能有几点。首先……，其次……，最后……。

2 这幅画所隐含的问题应该严肃对待。

3 这个现象（问题）已经引起了全社会的关注。

4 应该尽快采取切实可行的措施来解决该问题。第一……，第二……，第三……

第三段：总结陈词
1 在我个人看来确实是到了该我们……的时候了

2 只有通过这种方式我们才能够……

实战演习1：看下图作文 要求：1 简述图中内容；2 提出解决办法； 3 不少于60词
参考词汇：雾霾：haze, 强制执行：enforce

实战演习2：看下图作文。要求：1 简述图中内容；2 谈谈你的看法； 3 不少于60词
参考词汇：培训班：training classes

实战演习1 参考范文
As can be apparently seen from the above picture, the whole city is covered with haze. People have to wear masks in order to prevent the polluted air.
This phenomenon has aroused great concern of the whole society. Some urgent and yet practical measures should be taken to solve the problem as soon as possible. First of all, strict laws should be enforced by the government to control the emission of polluting gas. Furthermore, a large number of trees should be planted, which can definitely benefit us a lot. Last but not least, it is important for everyone to live a low carbon life.
Only in this way can we guarantee the comfort and happiness of future generations

实战演习2参考范文
As is vividly described in the picture，too much work makes Jack a dull boy. The boy has to go to so many training classes , which makes him too tired to learn anything.
It is quite obvious that the drawer wishes to draw our attention to the heavy burden of the students. In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students, because they are not interested in them at all. Please don’t force students to do what they are not willing to and return some time to students, with which they can do something they like. Students have the right to enjoy themselves after class!

实战演习1 参考范文
As can be apparently seen from the above picture, the whole city is covered with haze. People have to wear masks in order to prevent the polluted air.
This phenomenon has aroused great concern of the whole society. Some urgent and yet practical measures should be taken to solve the problem as soon as possible. First of all, strict laws should be enforced by the government to control the emission of polluting gas. Furthermore, a large number of trees should be planted, which can definitely benefit us a lot. Last but not least, it is important for everyone to live a low carbon life.
Only in this way can we guarantee the comfort and happiness of future generations

实战演习2参考范文
As is vividly described in the picture，too much work makes Jack a dull boy. The boy has to go to so many training classes , which makes him too tired to learn anything.
It is quite obvious that the drawer wishes to draw our attention to the heavy burden of the students. In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students, because they are not interested in them at all. Please don’t force students to do what they are not willing to and return some time to students, with which they can do something they like. Students have the right to enjoy themselves after class!

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