1、范文一:假如你是李华,你的美国好友托尼(Tony)来信询问你对未来生活的畅想。请你根据下面的内容提示,发挥想象,给托尼写一封回信。Dear Tony,I am very happy to get your letter. Now I will tell you about my future .Ill be an artist when I grow up. I love drawing and I want to draw all the beautiful things. I will live in Paris because there are lots of art exhibiti
2、ons in this city. Also, my parents will live in my large house with me. Then we can enjoy the great city together. I will go sightseeing somewhere else on vacation. I will show people what I see in the world with pictures. Yours, Li Hua范文二:以下是对10年后生活的畅想 My Life in Ten YearsIn ten years, I think Ill
3、be a reporter. Ill live in Beijing, because I went to Beijing last year and fell in love with it. I will live in an apartment with my pets. I like animals very much so Ill have many different pets. I may also collect plane tickets because I will travel a lot of places. And I think I will wear a suit
4、 during the weekdays. I hope I can go to America and Australia on vacation in ten years. So now I should work hard to make my dreams come true.范文三:Julia has got a bad cold. Her mother has gone to Beijing on business. Now you are writing a letter to Julia to give her some advice.Dear Julia,I am sorry
5、 to hear that you are ill. I think you should go to see a doctor and take some medicine. You should go to bed early and take a good rest. Youd better eat a lot of healthy food like vegetables. Youd better not drink coffee. Its bad for your health. You should drink lots of water. You shouldnt go to s
6、chool tomorrow. I hope you will be better soon.范文四:保持一份好心情(in a good mood)对我们的学习和生活都很重要。如何保持好心情呢?内容提示:1、多做运动;2、保持良好的饮食习惯;3、拥有健康的兴趣、爱好;4、乐于助人。How to keep a good moodIts very important to be in a good mood. How can we keep in a good mood? Here is some advice.First, you should do sports often. That hel
7、ps you keep healthy. As you know, Good health can help you to be in a good mood. Second, youd better have healthy eating habits. Then, good hobbies can also help you a lot, too. For example, you can listen to music and read some good books. Finally, when your classmates or friends are in trouble, yo
8、u should try to help them. When you help others, you will feel happy.范文五:你的英国朋友Tony询问你的期中考试(the mid-term exam),请根据成绩单回信,告诉你的成绩和老师的评价。Name:Wang Chen Class: TwoEnglish-B+; good at writingChinese-A; hard-workingHistoryB; can do betterScienceC; lazy studentMathA; hard-workingDear Tony,Im happy to get yo
9、ur letter. I finished my mid-term exams last week and I got my report card last Friday. I did OK in some subjects this time. My English teacher said I was good at writing. I did well in Chinese and math. The teachers said that I was hard-working. I had a hard time with science and I only got C this
10、time. It is the worst. My science teacher said I was a lazy student. As for history, the teacher said I could do better.Well, thats all about my report card. Yours, Wang Chen范文六:课本:P85写作要点:When did you start learning English? How long have you been studying it?How was your English? /How much have yo
11、u learned?Have you ever used English outside of school? What could you do to improve your English?I started learning English when I was ten years old. So I have been studying English for five years. For me, it is a hard school subject. And my English is not very good, though I think English is a ver
12、y important subject in school. English is also useful in life. One day a foreigner came to my moms store and wanted to buy some water. My mom didnt know English at all. I helped and my mom was very happy about that. I will work hard to improve my English. I think I could read more English books, wat
13、ch English movies, listen to English tapes, or even make friends with a native speaker of English. I hope my English will be better and better.范文七: If I have a lot of moneyIf I have a lot of money, I will do many things I love. First of all, I will spend money on travel, so my dream of traveling aro
14、und the world will come true. Then I will probably buy a big house with a swimming pool for my parents, so they can have happy lives. Of course, I will buy myself an original car, and drive it everywhere. Whats more, I am going to use most of my money to help the poor children. So I may give my mone
15、y to charities and make the poor students go to school and get a better education. This is a great chance that many people do not have. You can imagine how happy my life is if I have a lot of money.范文八: Have you ever been to Lishui?Have you ever been to Lishui? For many people, Lishui is an excellen
16、t place to take a holiday.Lishui is a beautiful city with a small population. Its famous for beautiful mountains and clean water. Many cities have mountains, but have you ever climbed the mountains at night? Baiyun Mountain is a wonderful place to have fun at night. It might seem strange to climb th
17、e mountain when its dark. But if youve ever climbed the mountain during the night, you might fall in love with it. Dont fear you wont be able to find delicious food in Lishui. Although Lishui is a small city with a small population, there are many kinds of food. Weather you like traditional Chinese
18、food, Western food or Japanese food, you will find them all in Lishui范文九:( Unit 10 试卷) 感谢信Thanks so much for the great New Year present. I am really surprised when I got the computer games. I think its probably the best gift I have ever received. However, my parents dont want me to play computer gam
19、es. I know its because they worried about my study. Im sure I will spend much time in studying rather than playing computer games. By the way, I cant wait to visit you and Aunt Sun next summer holiday. Best wishes.范文十:My Summer Vacation PlanThe summer vacation is coming. During this summer holiday,
20、Im going to do many interesting things. First, Ill do some reading. Because Im interested in reading and it can help me know more about the world. Second, I will spend some time with my friends. Were going to see movies, take part in some activities and even travel to a new place. I always enjoy mys
21、elf with friends. I think I will have a lot of fun and relax myself on the summer vacation. I cant wait.作文批改要求:1内容符合题意(离题不得分)。2.句子连贯,语法正确,无错误(语法:一处0.5分)尤其是标点,大小写。3.内容结构得当,层次清晰(结构:2分) 4.书写端正(书写:2分)5.句子优美,(能够运用一些连词,副词)文章有一定拓展,有一定深度。(文采:4分)常见的几种错误1. 用词不准确;2.语法结构有误(主语,谓语,句型);3.句子之间缺少连接成分,文章结构不紧凑,层次不清楚;4.中文式的表达;5.标点符号,大小写等用法不规范;6. 字数不足,等等。