2019年高考英语真题写作解析.doc

2019年高考英语真题 写作解析
一、假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.个人优势；
3.能做的事情。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.结束语已为你写好。
【写作指导】
申请信类型很多，包括求职信，报考申请信，留学申请信等；写申请信应注意语言言简意赅，语气诚恳礼貌，避免夸张。
申请信一般包括：申请原因、具备条件、恳请申请单位考虑自己的申请，表示谢意，期盼回复。具体为：
第一段引入事件，说明写信目的。
第二段介绍关于自己的一些具体内容。
第三段提出请求，表示感谢盼复。
【好词好句】
1. 好词集锦：
confident 自信的
suitable 合适的
extremely 非常；极度
pleased 高兴的
grateful 感激的
especially 特别；尤其；格外
opportunity 机会
position 职位
apply for 申请
be good at 擅长
take...into consideration 考虑
2. 说明应聘原因常用语
(1) I learned from sb/the newspaper that your company wanted to...
(2) I was told that...
(3) I have just read in the newspaper that your company needs a...
(4) I am writing to inqure the opportunity for ...
(5) I am writing to you to inqure if there would be any position available for me to work as a...
(6) I am writing to apply for the job.
(7) I have learned from your advertisement that a ...is wanted in your company.
3. 介绍个人优势常用语
(1) Now I would like to introduce myself to you.
(2) My name is Tom aged 16/who is a 16-year-old boy.
(3) I graduated from...in 2012.
(4) I like / am fond of swimming singing and dancing in my spare time.
(5) I work hard and I can get along /on well with others.
(6) I am good at English and especially my spoken English is fairly good.
(7) I can talk to foreigners in English freely.
(8) I am currently studying ...
4. 表示感谢及请求常用语
(1) Thank you for your consideration of my application.
(2) If you agree with me I\\'ll work hard and try to be a...
(3) I am looking forward to hearing from you.
(4) If you agree with me please write to me or phone me. My telephone number is...
(5) I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to ....
(6) I would like to apply the position that your company offers to me.
(7) Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply.
(8) I would be very grateful if you could consider my application.
【优秀范文】
Dear Sir or Madam
Being a student from China I\\'m writing this letter to apply for the voluntary position in the coming exhibition of Chinese paintings. And I\\'m really willing to expect you can consider me into this position.
Given that I can speak both English and fluent Chinese and I am outgoing sociable and responsible I do believe I am competent for this job. In addition through this I can not only improve my oral English but also introduce Chinese painting and calligraphy culture to visitors from all over the world. I would also like to seize this opportunity to deepen visitors\\' understanding of China and its painting and calligraphy culture. I hope it is possible to be accepted as a volunteer of this exhibition.
Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
二、假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括:
1.时间；
2.活动安排；
3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【写作指导】
邀请信注意事项
1. 审题：要点齐全，兼顾细节
2. 开头：简洁明了，直入主题
3. 行文：语言准确，语气恰当
4. 个人介绍+写作目的(I am writing to …)
5. 文章细节（时间、地点、活动内容、参加理由）
6. 再次邀请（希望）+联系方式
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信，包含以下几个方面：　
1. 邀请对方参加活动的内容、时间和地点
2. 与该活动有关的注意事项　
找到“中心/要点”— 在文章中应该注意“中心贯穿全文”
3. 期待对方接受邀请，并可表示感谢。
【好词好句】
1. 邀请 invite/ invitation
2. 做演讲 make/deliver a speech
3. 评委 judge
4. 感激 appreciate (vi. )/ be grateful
5. 荣幸 honor (v./n.)
6. 欢迎 welcome (v./n./adj.)
7. 接受邀请 accept sb’s invitation
8. 代表学校 on behalf of our school
9. 我想邀请你做... I’d like to invite you to...
10. 举办活动的目的是... The purpose of the activity is to
11. 活动的细节有... Here are some details about the activity...
12. 如果......我将感到荣幸 It’s my honor if...
13. 欢迎你参加 You are welcome to...
14. 我们将在…举办一个… We will hold a(n)/the …+时间、地点
15. 学生会将举办... The Students’ Union is going to hold a(n)/the …+时间、地点
16. 持续.. 从...到It will last… days from… to…
17. 有很多活动 The … will cover a wide range of activities including ….
The activities will include…
18. 请按时（参加）并带... Please be on time and bring… (do sth.)
19. 别忘记报名...Don’t forget to sign up for it before…
20. 如果你愿意参加，请回复我。Please reply before… if you would like to participate in…
段首常用语:　
(1)I am writing to invite you to…
(2)I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in…
(3)I wonder if you can come…
(4)How would you like to join us in…?
段尾常用语:
(1)Would you please drop me a line(写信给我) to let me know if you can come to…? (2)My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.
(3)We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
(4)I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.
【优秀范文】
Dear Allen，
I’m writing to invite you to the annual Music Festival to be held next Sunday in our school. We would be delighted to have you there with us.
This year the music festival will provide various activities where many students will put on some performances. Knowing that you are a music lover I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in it. You can sing a song or play a kind of musical instrument such as violin or piano. In addition you can also appreciate the performance of other students. I’m sure you will enjoy yourself in the activity.
I really hope that you can attend the music festival and please let me know your decision soon.
Yours sincerely

Li Hua
三、假定你是校排球队队长李华，请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：
1.比赛信息；
2.赛前准备；
3.表达期待。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【写作指导】
本题考查的是通知邮件的应用文写作，通知队友做赛前准备，参考结构如下：
第一段：在开头说明写信意图；
第二段：按照文章要点展开写作，例如比赛信息和赛前准备。
第三段：最后表达你的期待。
【好词好句】
upcoming 即将来临的
stadium 体育场
preparation 准备
inform sb. of sth. 告诉某人某事
prepare for 准备
is scheduled to 定于，被安排
come up with 提出
stick to 坚持
get in shape 恢复健康
attach great importance to 非常重视
devote oneself to doing 致力于做某事
1. You being a member of the team proper preparation on your part would be appreciated.
你是这个团队的一员，请做好适当的准备。
2. For starters please come up with a workout schedule and stick to it so that you can get in shape soon.
首先，请制定一个锻炼计划，并坚持下去，这样你就能很快恢复健康。
3. Since the school attaches great importance to this game I hope we can devote ourselves to becoming a stronger team and beat our opponent.
因为学校高度重视这次比赛，我希望我们能够成为一个更强大的队伍，打败我们的对手。
【优秀范文】
Dear Chris
I’m Li Hua captain of the school volleyball team. I’m writing to inform you of the upcoming volleyball game that you should prepare for.
The game is scheduled to be held in the school stadium next Sunday. You being a member of the team proper preparation on your part would be appreciated. For starters please come up with a workout schedule and stick to it so that you can get in shape soon. Secondly you should attend the team training sessions and meetings to study the visiting team together with the teammates.
Since the school attaches great importance to this game I hope we can devote ourselves to becoming a stronger team and beat our opponent.
Sincerely
Li Hua
题目分析
这是一篇带有邀请信特色的告知信，作为学校排球队队长的李华要告诉队员参加比赛，具体细节包括比赛内容、比赛前的准备等，并期盼他的到来。事实上，“告知信”是近年高考英语作文的热点，因为在高考英语十大书信作文中，只有告知信对考生的“造句能力”要求更高，而其它书信往往都存在大量的套路和套话可以选用。

示范写作
Dear Chris

How are you doing? Recently an important volleyball game will be held in our campus which will be not only meaningful but also exciting. So as captain of the team I on behalf of all our team members am writing to invite you to join us in the battle!

Here are some relevant details about it. To begin with it will be on the 3rd volleyball court from 2:00 to 4:00 on the afternoon of July 1st. Besides we the Giants will confront the Eagles which is undoubtedly a tough rival. As a result adequate preparation is urgently needed including practice nutrition and a perfect plan.

Hopefully you could make it to this wonderful event. We need you! Looking forward to your reply and your presence.

Yours
Li Hua

试题点评
一篇高考英语作文可以分成两个部分，一部分是考前准备的套路套话，一部分是考场发挥的遣词造句。作为专业的考生，我们应该两手都要抓、两手都要硬，既要背熟各类作文的写法，又要练出真正的遣词造句能力。