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书面表达新题型2022新题赏析(读写任务;完成句子)
主讲老师：麻雪玲 北京市英语老师
读写任务
命题特点
任务分为两部分，即
TASK 1、Summary
TASK 2、Opinion
“读”和“写”的有机结合
“读”的材料是为“写”供应情景
“写”是对“读”的材料的思考和延长
题一：
阅读下面短文，然后依据要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other people’s clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi.
The money was in fact her life savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learned to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation（捐助），and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. Only after she became known in America did she begin to travel all over the country. Since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the White House.
Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She said to the reporters that the idea
of helping somebody’s child go to college gave her much pleasure.
[写作内容】
1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2. 用约120个词就Miss McCarty的捐助谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
1. 你如何看待她的捐助行为；
2. 你认为她的捐助对受惠同学有哪些影响；
3. 假如你自己要捐助，你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由。
[写作要求]
1. 作文中可以使用亲身经受或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。
2. 作文中不得毁灭真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括精确， 语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
第一步：审题
1. 认真阅读要求，充分理解材料信息。
2. 体裁
3. 人称
4. 时态
5. 要点
体裁：叙议结合文
人称：三人称为主，一人称为辅
时态：叙述部分：过去时为主
谈论部分：现在时为主
要点： 4个
其次步：分段
Para. 1
要点一：用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
Para. 2
要点二：你如何看待她的捐赠行为。
Para.3
要点三：你认为她的捐赠对受惠同学有何影响。
Para.4
要点四：假如你自己要捐助，你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由。
第三步：概括文章，提炼要点
Para 1：用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other people’s clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi.
The money was in fact her life savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learned to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation（捐助），and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. Only after she became known in America did she begin to travel all over the country. Since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the White House.
Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She said to the reporters that the idea of helping somebody’s child go to college gave her much pleasure.
Oseola McCarty, though living a simple life, donated all her savings to a university to help the students with financial problems, which has brought her widespread social recognition.
A kind laundrywoman with a low pay donated to a university a lot of money she saved by
living a simple life to help the students having financial problems.
第四步：填句、填词
Para.2: I feel … by her kindness…
她的行为使我深受感动。 她对有困难的人慷慨解囊。她对高校生表现出的关怀使她成
为全部人应当学习的榜样。
moved, touched, impressed, inspired, generous, be concerned for, be worth respecting, made herself a good example
Para.3 ：In my opinion, those who received her donation will …
她的救济不仅使那些同学摆脱了经济负担， 并倍受鼓舞，他们会更加努力并获得成功。更重要的是，他们会将爱心传递，连续去挂念其他有困难的人。
be encouraged, study harder, achieve success, pass love and help on to …
Para.4 ：If I have the chance to donate, I will help… , because…
假如我有机会捐赠，我也会资助那些贫困高校生,由于他们是整个世界的将来。拥有了
学问、以及和善和爱心，他们会把这个世界制造的更加奇怪。
the future of the world, knowledge, kindness, virtue, become more beautiful
第五步：连接，修饰、润色、检查
高分主要来自：内容， 层次， 连接
临场失分六大缘由：
审题、内容、连接、层次、错误、书写
完成句子
命题意图
强化语法概念，积累学问储备
树立结构意识，规范表达方式
题二：
阅读下列各小题，依据汉语提示，用句末括号内的英语单词完成句子，并将答案写在答题卡上的相应题号后。
例：
______ was that the young player performed extremely well in the table tennis tournament. (delight)
令球迷欣喜的是那位年轻的球员在乒乓球锦标赛中表现得极为精彩。
答案：What delighted the fans/made the fans delighted
71. The community college has to cut down on staff ______. (save)
为了省钱，那所社区学院只好裁员。
72. So far the well-known journalist ______ more than 4,000 interviews with famous people. (accumulate)
迄今为止这位出名记者采访名人已累积达四千余人次。
73. Sometimes ______ to use examples to explain abstract concepts. (helpful)
有时候举例或许有助于解释抽象的概念。
74. The police will reward ______ useful information to catch the robber. (provide)
任何人供应有用信息挂念抓住劫匪，警方将予以嘉奖。
75. He’s the only student in the class ______ to take part in the Model United Nations conference. (select)
他是班上唯一被选上去参与模拟联合国大会的同学。
76. No other technological development has had ______ as the growth of electronics on so many aspects of social, economic, and cultural development. (impact)
没有哪项技术的进展像电子技术这样，对我们的社会、经济以及文化等诸多方面产生过如此重要的影响。
77. You ______ the meeting to tell me that ; you could have come to tell me afterwards. (interrupt)
你不该打断会议来告知我那件事，你本可以会后告知我。
78. This novel was once the ______ book in high schools in the United States. (read)
这部小说曾经是美国高中阅读最广泛的书。
79. The Public Square is an eye-catching sight of the city. ______ many stone sculptures of famous historical figures. (stand)
大众广场是这个城市引人注目的景点，很多历史名人的石雕像矗立在那儿。
80. It was several minutes ______ what he was saying. (take)
过了好几分钟，我才理解他说的是什么。
书面表达新题型2022新题赏析(读写任务;完成句子)
讲义参考答案
读写任务
题一：
One possible version
From this passage, we have learnt that Oseola McCarty, though living a simple life, donated all her savings to a university to help the students with financial problems, which has brought her widespread social recognition.
What she has done makes me deeply moved and inspired, which well proves her kindness. Being helpful and generous to the college students with financial difficulties, she has made herself a good example to motivate other people to participate in the similar activities.
From my perspective, the lady’s generosity is not only a means of assistance to those students short of money but also it will strengthen their faith in future life, leading them to work harder and achieve success. What’s more important is that they will undoubtedly pass the love on to whoever needs help in the future.
Given the choice, I will also make donations to the students with financial difficulties, for they are the future of the world. With knowledge, kindness and virtue, they will make a great difference to our world.
完成句子
题二：
71. in order to save money/so as to save money
72. has accumulated
73. it might/may be helpful
74. whoever provides/has provided
75. that has been selected
76. such a great impact/as great an impact/such an important impact/so important an impact
77. shouldn’t have interrupted/oughtn’t to have interrupted
78. most widely read
79. There stand
80. before I could take in/before I took in
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