写作常见错误市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件.pptx

*This may effect our mood.-This may affect our mood.*Reading will benefit from us.-Reading will benefit us.-We will benefit from reading.第1页第1页*People cant understand why.-People cannot*She married to Tom.-She married Tom第2页第2页*The government lacks of money.-The government lacks money.*In the morden society,-In the modern society,第3页第3页*We learned many knowledges in this experience.-We obtained(acquired/gained)much knowledge in this experience.*He collected many datas.-He collected many data.第4页第4页*People are very concerned with this issue.-People are very concerned about this issue.*There are many people think this is wrong.-Many people think this is wrong.第5页第5页*On the one hand,this makes us healthy;on the other hand,it can save us money.-For one thing for another*I wish they are happy forever.-I hope they will be happy for ever.第6页第6页*People should rise their awareness of enviromental protection.-People should raise their awareness of environmental protection.*I wish they are happy forever.-I hope they will be happy for ever.第7页第7页*When one have money,he can do what he want to.-Once one has money,he can do what he wants(to do).*I very like you.-I like you very much.第8页第8页*There are many ways we can learn English well.-There are many ways for us to learn English well.*Money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.-They spend money on what they need.第9页第9页nBird can fly.nA bird can fly.nBirds can fly.nThe bird can fly.nThe birds can fly.第10页第10页n*Work hard is very important for us to succeed.n Working hard is very important for us to succeed.第11页第11页n*Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with this situation.nChildren who are raised in impoverished families can generally deal with this situation.第12页第12页n*They are treated different.n They are treated differently.n*Internet will not instead of teachers in the future.nInternet will not replace teachers in the future.第13页第13页n*Some people think it is justified,others think it is unfair.nSome people think it is justified,while others think it is unfair.第14页第14页n*There are a lot of people in the world suffer from poverty.nA lot of people in the world suffer from poverty.第15页第15页n nlike第16页第16页