人教版六年级下英语U4thenandnow作文指导.doc

U4 then and now
以‘My changes’’为题，写一篇小作文。
写法指导
作文结构展示
可能用到的词汇和句子
开头：
介绍自己现在的自然状况
l Hello. My name is...
l I’m... Years old.
中间：
介绍自己现在和过去的不同
n I like... now,but I didn’t like...
n I was... Before,but I’m...now.
n I had...before,but I have... Now.
n long hair, short hair, writing, reading, drawing,tall,short
结尾：
问读者的变化情况
u How about you?
u Do you have any changes?

【经典例文】
My changes
Hello,I’m Zhang Yang. I’m a girl. I’m 12 years old.There are many changes in my life.
Before,I had long hair,but I have short hair now.②Iwas thin and short before. I’m stronger and taller now. I like pink now,but I didn’t like pink before. I liked playing ping-pong before. What do I like now?③1 like playing badminton now.What about you?④Do you have any changes?⑤
①There are后加名词的复数形式。
②由Before..., but... Now句型介绍出从前与现在的不同之处。
③ 由问句引出下文，引起读者注意，同时避免了文章句式的重复。
④⑤两句均为问句，起到拉近作者和读者之间的距离，引起读者思考的作用。
结合以上所学，以‘My changes’为题，写一篇小作文。