中考英语专题复习课(书面表达).pdf

中考专题复习课Writing检查口语爱好与学业1.迈克疯狂地迷恋足球，喜爱看足球比赛，当然也喜爱踢足球；2.放学后，他经常花1个小时左右的时间和 同学们一起踢足球；3.他的父母不喜欢这一点，要求他在5点半 之前回家；他认为在爱好上花些时间是重 要的，希望能得到父母的支持。分析结构Introduction Hobbies and studiesMike is crazy about foot ball!Main bodyHe loves wat ching foot ball mat ches.Of course,he loves playing foot ball t oo.He oft en spends about one hour playing foot ball wit h his classmat es aft er school.His parent s dont like t his and have askedhim t o go home before 5.30.He t hinks it is import ant for him t o spend some t ime on his i hobbies.e wishes he could have his parent s5 support.ConclusionDiscussionWriting skillssix steps抄写规范 o组段成篇集句成段O审清题意抓住要点连词成句自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些 同密卷知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室 园看歌声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。用提语演该栏目写一篇广播稿。不良现象和行为（至少3点）1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游戏3 看法我认为建议（至少3条）1.合理安排时间2.参加兴趣小组3 注意：100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词爨参考词汇:make good use of,int erest groups、social act ivit ies,do sport s,net bar-_ lM|第一步:审清题意认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示 要点和补充信息具体做法：用笔勾画WJ自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有祟同学不矢祈!|用好这些面前针对这“棱1英语之声在目就“如何更好地利用谡余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏广播稿。内容要点包括:体裁结构良现象和旅（至少3点）12多时间在兴趣23.77已知信息时态以一般现 在时为主看法我认议（至少3条1.2.3.合理安排时同 触口兴趣堂未知信息字数00词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词第二步:列出写作不要遗漏要点!具体做法:根据段落整理写隹要点Write an outlineIntroductionr i花太多时间在兴趣爱好上problems3 2.迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏I L 3.Main body opinions r 1.合理安排时间tsuggestionsJ 2参加兴趣小组L 3.Conclusion第三步：抓住要点，列关键词1.List some keywords about problems.Phrases:Spend-on,hobbies,be crazy about2.List some keywords about opinions.Phrases:not good for st udy and healt h,.3.List some keywords about suggest ions.P h rases:_第四步：连词成句1.Make sent ences wit h t he keywords about problems.Sent ences:Some students spend t。much time on their hobbies and cant finish their homework on time.2.Make sent ences wit h t he keywords about opinions.Sent ences:I dont t hink it s good for our st udy and healt h.3.Make sent ences wit h t he keywords about suggest ions.Sent ences:_第五步：集句成段，组段成篇However,how can we make bet t er use of our spare t ime?/|And also|I Fr exampl丁There are many t lwngs we can do,心e can plan our t ime carefully and t ry ourbest t o achieve a balance bet ween our st udy and hobbies?We can set up and join different kinds of int erest groups,t ake part in so act ivit iesywe can do some sport s.If 旷 should help parent s do some housewh注意添加 主题句，连接词！,Besides t hese,抓住要点，列关键词IProblemsbe crazy about(7B4)play computer games(7A1)watch too much TV(8A1)spend too much time on their hobbies(9A3)refuse to do homework(9A3)spend on(7A2)Opinionsnot good for our health and study(7A2)focus on(9A3)Pay more attention to(9A1)Suggest ionsplan time carefully(9A3)achieve a balance between study and bobbies(9A3)take part in different after school activities(7A2)join interest groups(8A2)do some sports(7A4)do some housework(7B5)“Lets enjoy our own)compositions!中考英语书面袤达评分标准一、评分原则：1.短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错。一处大 错扣1分。2.通篇人称错误，统扣2分。3.拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的错误为小错。2个小错相当4.相同错误只扣一次。字数不足90词扣3分。5.文中若出现自己及老师、学校等真实姓名扣3分。6.书写潦草，卷面不清，扣2分。二、评分档次：一档文（1720分）写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构。二档文（1316分）基本莺出全露内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有少量 语法错误。三档文（912分）写出大部内容要点，语言基本通顺有一些语法和拼写错误。四档文（58分）写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不通，影响理解。五档文（04分）言不达意，不知所云。范文展示Hello,everybody!Ifs time again for our English Broadcasting Program.Todays topic is“How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time55.Nowadays,we students have much more free time than before.But quite a number of students don5t know how to use the time properly.They spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time.Also some of them watch too much TV,Whats worse,some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games.We don5t think its good for their study and health.However,how can we make better use of our spare time?There are many things we can do.For example,we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies.And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups,take part in some good social activities.Besides these,we can do some sports.If we have time,we should help parents do some housework.Let5s make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!_cSummaryThe structure of the article r Introductionr CProblemsZ)j Main body J opinionsConclusion写作：第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息第二步就是要列出写作提纲（列关键词、连词成 句、集句成段、组段成篇）写作前：确定人称、写作后：查错改错Homework1.复习本课要点2.背诵精彩范文祝同学们在中考中取得好成绩!二W易 Net EaseTHANK YOU!Your advice is welcome!变换句式Some st udent s spend t oo much t ime on t heir hobbies.They can5t finish t heir homework on t ime.Some st udent s spend t oo much t ime on t heir hobbies and t hey cant finish t heir homework on t ime并列句Some st udent s spend so much t ime on t heir hobbies t hat t hey cant finish t heir homework on t ime复合句结果状语从句常见错误时态是否正确 主谓是否一致 要点是否全面 人称是否正确 语序是否有问题 语言是否符合习惯 固定短语是否恰当