汉英笔译基础教程第15章-风格不符.ppt

,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,Click to edit Master title style,*,LOGO,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,Click to edit Master title style,*,汉英笔译基础教程,Basics of Chinese to English Translation,第十五章 风格不符,Contents,15.1,正式等级,I,15.2,风格翻译,II,15.1,正式等级,英语的正式等级大抵可以分为四种：旧式正式英语、现代正式英语、一般非正式英语和口语体非正式英语。,其中现代正式英语和一般非正式英语的使用范围较广。,一般非正式英语：,We think we learn from teachers,and we sometimes do.But the teachers are not always to be found in school or in great laboratories.Sometimes what we learn depends upon our own powers of insight.,口语题非正式英语：,You know,people are always saying they learn from teachers!OK,so they do,sometimes.But what I want to get across is this:you dont always find your teachers in schools or in labs,either.No sir!Sometimes you find the teacher right in your own eyes and ears and brains.Thats where its at!,从措辞来看，正式英语多选择庄重、抽象、多音节的,French,或,Latin,的词语，如：,scholar,instruction,lecture,emanate,radiate,insight,等；而非正式英语多选用短小、具体、常用的,Anglo-Saxon,词语，如：,think,learn,say,get across,eyes,ear,brains,be at,等。,从句式来看，正式英语多用抽象概念作主语，被动句，从属结构，句子偏长；而非正式英语则多采用人称主语，主动句，简单句或并列句，句子偏短。,汉语也有类似的风格：古朴的文言、端重严谨的现代汉语、通顺晓畅的现代汉语和通俗的汉语口语体，基本与英语的正式等级对应。,15.1.1,古朴文言,孙子曰：昔之善战者，先为不可胜，以待敌之可胜。不可胜在己，可胜在敌。故善战者，能为不可胜，不能使敌之可胜。故曰：胜可知而不可为。,SunTzu said:The good fighters of old first put themselves beyond the possibility of defeat,and then waited for an opportunity of defeating the enemy.To secure ourselves against defeat lies in our own hands,but the opportunity of defeating the enemy is provided by the enemy himself.Thus the good fighter is able to secure himself against defeat,but can not make certain of defeating the enemy.Hence the saying:One may know how to conquer without being able to do it.,15.1.2,端重汉语,办事快捷：该区全面推行项目登记制，投资者只须提交完备的申办公司的材料，六天就可领到工商营业执照副本。该区实行办事限时制，对区内各部门办理有关事项严格实行限时办事制，做到“区内的事，特事特办，马上就办，办就办好”。,High Speed Work.The zone carries items register system in all around way.Investors only need to present complete material of applying for setting up a company.It takes 6 days for them to get the copy of industrial and commercial business license.The zone carries out work limit time system in every department of administrative commission in free trade zone.They do“the business of free trade zone specially,at once and as well as possible”.,15.1.2,端重汉语,办事快捷：该区全面推行项目登记制，投资者只须提交完备的申办公司的材料，六天就可领到工商营业执照副本。该区实行办事限时制，对区内各部门办理有关事项严格实行限时办事制，做到“区内的事，特事特办，马上就办，办就办好”。,Efficiency,.The zone has,a project registration system,at work.Investors only need to present required documents in applying for business startup.It takes 6 days for them to get,the business licence from the Industrial and Commercial Administration,.The zone works on,a managed schedule,in handling applications to all the administrative departments or commission in the free trade zone.The new guideline for zone department is“,Every application shall be handled,specially,punctually and satisfactorily.”,15.1.4,口语体,这可绝不是件容易的事。一年，两年，至少三四年；一滴汗，两滴汗，不知道多少万滴汗，才能挣出那辆车。从风里雨里的咬牙，从饭里茶里的自苦，才赚出那辆车。,Becoming independent was not a simple matter at all.It took one year,two years,at least three or four years,and one drop of sweat,two drops of sweat,who knows how many millions of drops of sweat,until the struggle produced a rickshaw.By gritting his teeth through wind and rain,depriving himself of good food and good tea,he finally saved enough for that rickshaw.,15.1.5,正式等级混用,“,窃书不能算偷,窃书！,读书人的事，能算偷么？”,“,Taking a book cant be considered stealing,.Taking a book,the affair of a scholar,cant be considered stealing!”,“,The,purloining,of,volumes,good sir,can not be counted as theft.The purloining of volumes is,after all,something that falls well within the,purview,of the scholarly life.How can it be considered merely theft?”,15.2,风格翻译,风格翻译的三种基本手段：,对应式,重构式,淡化式,15.2.1,对应式,这里叫洋八股废止，有些同志却还在提倡。这里叫空洞抽象的调头,少唱,，有些同志却硬要,多唱,，这里叫教条主义,休息,，有些同志却叫它,起床,。,The abolition of foreign stereotypes was demanded in that report,yet some comrades are still promoting them.,Less,singing of empty,abstract tunes was demanded,yet some comrades are obstinately singing,more,.The demand was made that dogmatism,be laid to rest,yet some comrades are telling it to,get out of bed,.,15.2.2,重构式,于是，暮色中匆匆的人群里，,总有,我赶路的身影，,雨里、雾里、风里、雪里，,只盼着早些回家,Among the hasty crowd in the dusk,you can see me hurrying home in the rain,in the fog,in the wind and in the snow,only longing to get home as quickly as possible.,Thus the gathering dusk often,finds me,hastening home in a hurrying crowd.,Whether it rains or snows,windy or foggy,it is the longing to be home that,quickens my steps,.,15.2.2,重构式,这样，竟说得这个具着朴素的心地的她，,一时酸，一会苦，一时甜上心头，一时又咸的压下去了。,Thus,she,a simple-minded woman,felt sour for a while,bitter for a while,sweet for a while and salty for a while.,This chatter made the young woman,feel sad,delighted and depressed by turns.,15.2.3,淡化式,天目火山大石谷地处杭州临安西天目。火山岩巨石最多，,2002,年编入世界吉尼斯之最，巨石成谷、清泉满谷，称为石水圣景，峡谷仙境。可与世界著名的澳大利亚大陆岛石谷相媲美。石谷地貌奇特，野趣浓郁，以森林、奇石、碧潭、飞瀑、火山口、冰川遗迹构成一条壮观的山野长廊,幽深的林木、清新的空气、静态的巨石、动态的急流、呼啸的涛声五重组合，无愧中华生态旅游最佳景区的称号。大自然的鬼斧神工定让您心旷神怡、叹为观止。文坛泰斗金庸看了石谷后写下了“石谷有灵气,灵石成山谷”。该景区夏季温度低于该外界,5-10,摄氏度,是避暑纳凉胜地。石谷两边林木葱茏，山花烂漫，飞禽走兽出没无常，百鸟争鸣，可称中华一绝。身临其境，会使您留连忘返。,15.2.3,淡化式,Tianmu Stone Valley,also named Volcano Stone Valley,is located in Linan,Zhejiang and adjacent to the West Tianmu Mountain,Kingdom of virgin forest.It has the most volcano stones in the world,according to Guinness World Record 2002.Its long valley,huge stones of unique shapes,and abundant water resource,is as rare as those in the Stone Valley in Australia.This natural corridor is composed of green mountains,clean water,peculiar stones,running waterfall,deep ponds,crater and vestige of glacier.In summer,the temperature is about 5-10 lower than that in outside area.This miracle,features exuberant plants and a variety of birds and animals,perfectly combines serene trees,fresh air,still stones,running water,and green pond.If you come here,the beautiful scenery will make you forget to go back home.,15.2.3,淡化式,后来出嫁了，两个人还,藕断丝连,，这只能怪包办婚姻，不能怪她。,and after she was married they still kept it up.The arranged marriage was the cause of this;she cant be blamed.,“,木已成舟,罢！好在这个弟子会读书。”,Whats been done cant be undone!Its a good thing though,this boy studies well.,小结,风格因人而异，风格翻译更是千差万别。本章主要以“正式等级”和修辞格为切入口，分析风格翻译中常见的问题及风格翻译的三种基本手段：对应式、重构式和淡化式。其中对应式是风格翻译中具有最广泛、最切实可行的方法。重构式是风格意义的再创造，需要译者充分发挥其主体创造性，另辟蹊径译出相似的修辞效果。淡化式则是一种权宜性对策，在确保概念意义的前提下不得已放弃（或部分放弃）风格意义。,