英语观点对比类作文写作.ppt

,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,观点对比类作文 写作技巧,英语写作,-How to write,an argumentation,（议论文）,书面表达,(,满分,25,分,),暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文，,并谈谈你的看法。,(2006,年陕西卷）,注意：,1.,词数,100-120 2.,短文必须包括表中所列要点。,3.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,The summer holiday is coming.Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.,the structure of the article,topic sentence,for the opinion,against the opinion,ending sentence,diamond,convenient and comfortable,cost less/save money,lose the chance of getting to know the outside world,2.increase ones knowledge and widen ones horizons/views,1.,(,待在家中,),花费少，舒适方便,不能亲身了解外界,2.,(,外出旅游,),增长知识，开阔眼界,花费多，旅途不便,spend more money and go through some trouble on the way,beginning,have different views on sth,/,react to,sth,in different ways.,differ in,their attitudes towards sth,.,conclusion,my opinion,(,待在家中,),(,外出旅游,),The summer holiday is coming.Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.,some,others,the structure of the article,topic sentence,for the opinion,against the opinion,ending sentence,diamond,对比类写作 实战模版,模板,There is discussion about the issue that,（作文题目）,Different people,however,have different opinions on this matter.,A majority of people think that _,观点一,_.In their views there are 2 reasons,contributing to,this matter as follows:in the first place,原因一,.Furthermore,in the second place,原因二,.,People,however,differ,in,their,opinions,on,this,matter.,Some,people,hold the idea that,观点二,.In their point of view,for one thing,，原因一,.For another thing,原因二,.,As far as I am concerned,I,firmly,support,the,view,that,观点一或二,.,It,is not only because _,but also because _.,介绍讨论的主题,(,开头句,),：,我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是,We had a discussion,about,whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood,过渡句,Opinions are mainly divided into two groups.,Different people,however,have different opinions on this matter.,主要有两种不同意见。,然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。,介绍正方观点：,Sixty percent of the students are,for,the idea.,Some believe that,进一步介绍正方观点,Whats more,we can as well as,Besides,its,which,介绍反方观点,On the other hand,of the students think,However,others have different opinions.,进一步介绍反方观点,Whats worse,Whats more,In addition,Besides,First,Second,Third,总结句,(,未达成一致,),In short,no agreement has been reached yet.,本人观点：,As far as I am concerned,.,(In my opinion,.;Its my opinion that)For one reason,.For another reason In a word,.,词汇,句型,语法多样化,1.,覆盖了所有的,要点,2.,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,3.,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,假定你是李华。下面是你班班会上以“中学生是否能佩带手机”为题进行讨论的情况。请你写一封信给,21st Century,报的编辑说明该情况，并表明你自己的观点。,比例,40%,学生赞同,60%,学生不赞同,赞同的理由：,1.,便于同亲友联系；,2.,可以上网查资料；,3.,储存有用信息。,不赞同的理由：,1.,手机辐射对人健康有害；,2.,响铃影响自己和他人学习；,3.,容易引起相互攀比。,注意：,1.,要包含所有的要点，但不要逐条翻译；,2.,字数约,100,字。参考词汇：辐射,radiation,Dear Editor,There is a heated,discussion weve had on whether mobile phones should be brought to school.,We have,two different opinions on the question.,Sixty percent of the students think students can bring a mobile phone to school.,In their views there are three reasons,contributing to,this matter as follows:in the first place,i,t is convenient for a student who carries a mobile phone to get in touch with his/her parents and friends.,Furthermore,in the second place,he can also search for some important information on the Internet by the phone.Besides,its fashionable to have a mobile phone.,However,40 percent of the students are against the view.,In their point of view,for one thing,with mobile phones,some students may have a chat on the Internet and spend much time playing games,which has a bad effect on their study and health.Whats more,one mobile phone may cost much money and its likely to be lost in the school.,As far as Im concerned,students should place their study before other things and there is no need for us to use mobile phones.In a word,I dont think its a good idea to bring mobile phones to school,