高考英语复习专题六书面表达第二节方法运用于命题.pptx

,第二节方法利用于命题,专题六书面表示,1/44,栏目索引,一、提要类作文,二、画图类作文,三、图表类作文,四、,(,半,),开放式作文,2/44,(,全国,),假定你是李华，正在教你英国朋友,Leslie,学习汉语。请你写封邮件通知下次上课计划。内容包含：,1.,时间和地点；,2.,内容：学习唐诗；,3.,课前准备：简明了解唐朝历史。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右；,2.,能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,一、提要类作文,典例,3/44,法宝,1,“,五审,”,定调子,(1),体裁：通知信类应用文，应注意通知信格式；,(2),人称：以第一人称为主；,(3),时态：以普通现在时和普通未来时为主；,(4),关键点：通知上课时间、地点、内容及课前准备；,(5),层次：分为三段：第一段问候并通知上课时间及地点；第二段通知上课内容及课前准备；第三段为结束语。,法宝,2,“,韵色,”,得高分,该文除简单句外，还可使用并列句、省略句及复合句,(,定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句,),，做到句式多样。,4/44,法宝,3,黄金,“,三步曲,”,1.,遣词,next Chinese lesson/meet at/as usual/participate in/sporting activity/make it/as you know/in order to/acquire a good knowledge of/introduce.to./be of great help/advise sb.to do/learn about/in advance/look forward to/hear from,5/44,2.,造句,(1)How are you?,(2)I,m writing to tell you about your next Chinese lesson.,(3)We,ll still meet at my school,，,but not on Saturday as usual.,(4)I,ll have to participate in a sporting activity that day.,(5)Let,s make it three o,clock on Sunday afternoon.,(6)In order to acquire a good knowledge of Chinese,，,you should learn more about Chinese culture and history.,(7)This time I will introduce Tang poetry to you,，,which is of great help in learning Chinese.,6/44,(8)I advise you to learn about the brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.,(9)It will surely help you in learning the poems.,(10)Looking forward to hearing from you soon.,7/44,3.,成篇,Dear Leslie,，,How are you,？,I,m writing to tell you about your next Chinese lesson.We,ll still meet at my school,，,but not on Saturday as usual,，,since I,ll have to participate in a sporting activity that day.So let,s make it three o,clock on Sunday afternoon.,As you know,，,in order to acquire a good knowledge of Chinese,，,you should learn more about Chinese culture and history.Therefore,，,this time I will introduce Tang poetry to you,，,which is of great help in learning Chinese.I advise you to learn about the brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.It will surely help you in learning the poems.,8/44,Looking forward to hearing from you soon.,Yours,，,Li Hua,9/44,(,天津,),假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津。一批来自英国高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周交流活动。,现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请依据以下提醒写一篇讲话稿。,1.,回顾双方交流活动,(,如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面,),；,2.,谈谈收获或感想；,3.,表示祝福与期望。,跟踪训练,10/44,注意：,1.,词数不少于,100,；,2.,可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；,3.,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,Dear friends,，,How time flies,！,_,_,Thank you.,参考范文,11/44,Dear friends,，,How time flies,！,Two weeks went by,，,and our exchange activities ended.On behalf of my school,，,I would like to express my feelings.,As scheduled,，,we participated in several instructive activities.We learnt many Chinese characters and took plenty of exercise together.We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food.The food was very delicious.While visiting the art exhibition,，,we discussed the great artists,works.,12/44,In my opinion,，,everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other.And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip back to your country.I hope we,ll get together again next year.,Thank you.,13/44,(,北京,),假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请依据以下四幅图先后次序，写一篇英文周记，统计毕业前夕你们制作以,“,感恩母校,”,为主题毕业纪念视频全过程。,二、画图类作文,典例,注意：词数不少于,60,。,提醒词：视频,video,14/44,法宝,1,“,五审,”,定调子,(1),体裁：本文属于图画类作文；,(2),人称：以第一人称为主；,(3),时态：以普通过去时为主；,(4),关键点：制作以,“,感恩母校,”,为主题毕业纪念视频全过程；,(5),层次：分为两段：第一段描写毕业临近，决定制作毕业纪念视频；第二段写制作毕业纪念视频过程及最终到达结果。,法宝,2,“,韵色,”,得高分,该文除简单句外，还可使用非谓语动词、并列句、复合句,(,宾语从句、状语从句,),，做到句式多样丰富。,15/44,法宝,3,黄金,“,三步曲,”,1.,遣词,graduation come/a heated discussion/agree on/make a video/material collecting,/interview teachers/take pictures/every aspect of school life/tough/,debate over/compromise/unavoidable/turn out perfect/the graduation ceremony/,be well received/a great sense of achievement,16/44,2.,造句,(1)Graduation finally came.,(2)My classmates and I decided to do something.,(3)We agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.,(4)Material collecting took us a whole week.,(5)During this time we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.,(6)The editing part after that was tough.,(7)We debated over what to put into the video.,(8)Some compromises were unavoidable.,17/44,(9)The video turned out perfect.,(10)Several days later,，,when the video was played on the graduation ceremony,，,it was well received.,(11)The students and teachers shared a great time.,(12)That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.,18/44,3.,成篇,Graduation finally came.My classmates and I decided to do something.After a heated discussion,，,we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.,Material collecting took us a whole week,，,during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.The editing part after that was tough.We debated over what to put into the video.Some compromises were unavoidable,，,but the video turned out perfect.Several days later,，,when the video was played on the graduation ceremony,，,it was well received.The students and teachers shared a great time.That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.,19/44,(,北京,),假设你是红星中学高三一班学生李华。你班同学参加了学校,“,地球日,”,系列活动。请按照以下四幅图先后次序，以,“,Actions for a Greener Earth,”,为题，给校刊,“,英语角,”,写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动全过程。,注意：词数不少于,60,。,提醒词：地球日,Earth Day,参考范文,跟踪训练,20/44,A week before Earth Day,，,posters were put up around our school,，,calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.,Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials.We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes,，,pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles,，,and turned those into dolls,，,handbags,，,tissue boxes and small vases.That weekend,，,we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there.All were very happy with those unexpected gifts,，,especially little kids and elderly people.We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.,21/44,We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.,22/44,(,江苏,),请认真阅读,右,面相关我国电影票房收入,(box-office income),柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇,150,词左右文章。,三、图表类作文,典例,23/44,Saturday,Afternoon,.,In,a,Shopping,Centre,.,Li Jiang,：,Hi,，,Su Hua.Which movie shall we see?,Su Hua,：,Whatever.We,ve got so many choices,，,Kung,Fu,Yoga,，,Journey,to,the,West,.Each sounds great!,Li Jiang,：,Yeah,！,And some movie stars are fantastic.,Su Hua,：,And the high-tech,！,.,Li Jiang,：,Perfect,！,Let,s get some food first.We only have 20 minutes left.,Su Hua,：,No hurry.The cinema is on the same floor.,24/44,One,Day,in,.,At,Home,.,Son,：,Mum,，,shall we go and see a film tonight?,Mother,：,Why bother,？,We can stay at home and watch films online.Its,convenient with our new and faster network.,Son,：,But it feels good in a cinema.,Mother,：,And the price.We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.,Son,：,Only 10 yuan more than last year.,Mother,：,But still we cannot get the moneys worth.Some films are just,boring.,25/44,写作内容,1.,用约,30,个单词概述柱状图信息主要内容；,2.,我国电影票房收入改变原因有哪些，简明谈谈你看法,(,上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点,),；,3.,谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向看法，并简明说明理由。,写作要求,1.,写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；,2.,作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；,3.,无须写标题。,评分标准,内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。,.,26/44,法宝,1,“,五审,”,定调子,(1),体裁：图表类作文；,(2),人称：以第三人称为主；,(3),时态：以普通过去时为主；,(4),关键点：概述短文内容；分析票房收入改变原因并给出自己看法；,(5),层次：分为三段：第一段总结归纳柱状图所含信息；第二段分析票房收入改变原因；第三段提出自己看法并给出理由。,法宝,2,“,韵色,”,得高分,该文可各种句式并用，如并列句、复合句,(,定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句,),，做到句式丰富多样。,27/44,法宝,3,黄金,“,三步曲,”,1.,遣词,box-office income/witness/a constant increase/slow down/various/economic development/powerful engine/application/appeal/account for/consequently/,turn away from/lead to/at a medium speed/movie industry/enjoy a slight increase,28/44,2.,造句,(1)The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in to over 40 billion in.,(2)That increase slowed down in.,(3)The reasons behind this are various.,(4)The fast economic development before was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income.,(5)The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase.,(6)China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year.,29/44,(7)The Internet increased options for movie lovers.,(8)Some viewers began to turn away from cinemas,，,leading to a slower growth.,(9)China,s economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years.,(10)An increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies.,(11)Its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.,30/44,3.,成篇,As is indicated in the graph,，,the box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in to over 40 billion in.However,，,that increase slowed down in.,The reasons behind this are various.The fast economic development before was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income.The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase.However,，,China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year.And the Internet increased options for movie lovers.Consequently,，,some viewers began to turn away from cinemas,，,leading to a slower growth.,31/44,China,s economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years,，,so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies.Therefore,，,its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.,32/44,(,陕西咸阳二模,),仔细观察下列图，依据要求，以,“,Health Changes in Developing Countries,”,为题，用英语写一篇,100,词左右短文。,1.,以下列图为依据描述发展中国家预期寿命,(life expectancy),和婴儿死亡率,(infant mortality rate),改变情况；,2.,说明引发改变各种原因，如生活条件改进、医学进步、环境保护认识等。,参考范文,跟踪训练,33/44,Health Changes in Developing Countries,As is described in the chart,，,in developing countries great changes have taken place in life expectancy and infant mortality rate between 1960 and.The life expectancy in 1960 was about 40 years old,，,while it increased to about 60 years old in.At the same time,，,the infant mortality rate dropped from 200 per 1,000 births in 1960 to 100 per 1,000 births in.,34/44,There are many reasons for the changes,，,I think.First,，,people,s living conditions have improved,，,so it is natural that they live longer than before.Second,，,thanks to the development in science and medicine,，,people are receiving better medical care than they used to.Third,，,developing countries are now better aware of environmental protection and they take more measures to solve the problem,，,which also does good.,In short,，,people,s health condition in developing countries is becoming better and better.,35/44,(,全国,),假定你是李华。你所在校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你留学生朋友,Eric,写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包含：,1.,球队活动；,2.,报名方式及截止日期。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右；,2.,能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,四、,(,半,),开放式作文,典例,36/44,法宝,1,“,五审,”,定调子,(1),体裁：书信类应用文，应注意书信格式；,(2),人称：以第一人称为主；,(3),时态：以普通现在时和普通未来时为主；,(4),关键点：写信目标；球队活动；报名方式和截止日期；,(5),层次：分为四段：第一段自我介绍并交待写信目标,邀请,Eric,加入球队；第二段介绍打乒乓球好处及球队活动；第三段通知,Eric,报名方式及截止日期；第四段结束语。,法宝,2,“,韵色,”,得高分,除了使用简单句外，该文还可使用非谓语动词作状语、并列句及复合句,(,宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句,),，做到句式多样。,37/44,法宝,3,黄金,“,三步曲,”,1.,遣词,invite/join/table tennis team/it is known that/benefit from/prevent.from./,keep sb.physically healthy/as to/experienced player/give training to/at the same time/divide.into./be interested/sign up/look forward to,38/44,2.,造句,(1)I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school.,(2)We can benefit a lot from playing table tennis.,(3)It can prevent us from getting shortsighted.,(4)It can keep us physically healthy.,(5)We plan to invite experienced players to give training to us every Friday afternoon.,(6)We will divide the members into several groups to practice at 5,：,00 pm after school.,(7)If you are interested,，,sign up on our school website before August 10.,(8)I,m looking forward to your reply.,39/44,3.,成篇,Dear Eric,，,I am Li Hua.I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school.,It is known that we can benefit a lot from playing table tennis.It can prevent us from getting shortsighted and it can keep us physically healthy.As to the activities,，,we plan to invite experienced players to give training to us every Friday afternoon.At the same time,，,we will divide the members into several groups to practice at 5,：,00 pm after school.,40/44,If you are interested,，,sign up on our school website before August 10.,I,m looking forward to your reply.,Yours,，,Li Hua,41/44,(,全国,),假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资企业兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历,(resume),。给外教,Ms Jenkins,写信，请她帮你修改所附材料文字和格式,(format),。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右；,2.,能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,跟踪训练,参考范文,42/44,Dear Ms Jenkins,，,I want to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I,m writing to ask you for some help.,In order to earn some extra money and reduce my family,s burden,，,I,d like to go to a foreign capital company to find a part-time job.I,ve finished the application form and personal resume.But I,m not sure if they are written well enough to catch their eye.Please refer to the attachments which include the application form and resume.You can correct any mistakes you find in them.,43/44,I,d appreciate it if you could help me revise them.,Looking forward to your reply.,Yours sincerely,，,Li Hua,44/44,