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菜 单,新课标 高考二轮复习 英语,1/50,高考书面表示目标在于测试考生利用所学英语知识和掌握技能来表示思想，进行交流能力。书面表示在高考中其特点是题量少，分值重。要想得高分就要了解其命题特点，把握命题方向，更主要是利用写作技巧，在有限时间内审题、确定格式、连词成句，连句成文。选取恰当词汇，要提升档次，使用高级词汇。掌握各种体裁文章特点，把握其文章经典布局和结构，经常使用开头语和结束语等。写作都是依据所设情景进行，情景包含目标、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景形式有图画、图表、提要、短文等；所要求文体形式包含记叙文、说明文、各种应用文体和议论文。从近些年高考英语书面表示题来看，我们基本上能够将书面表示题大致归纳为两种写作类型：一类是文字性提醒/表格提醒写作；另一类是看图作文。,下面就高考考场上对书面表示，能心平气和地高效地写出一篇高水平文章应采取几个步骤帮同学们支招。,2/50,书面表示审题是第一步，也是至关主要一步。只有搞清题目要求，才不跑题，不漏关键点，圆满地完成写作任务。审题包含审体裁、审格式、审内容、审人称、审时态等方面内容。,(,浙江三校联考,)每位同学对担心学习生活都有不一样减压方式。假设你对本校100名同学减压方式进行了调查(调查结果以下面图表所表示)，请你依据下面图表内容向你班同学进行介绍，并结合自己实际提出你看法和提议。可依据需要适当发挥：,注意：,1.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；,2.词数100左右。,参考词汇：图表chart；减压relieve pressure；放松get relaxed,3/50,Hi，everyone.I have recently made a survey among 100 students in our school about how they relieve pressure in their daily school life._,_,_,_,_,4/50,【参考范文】,Hi，everyone.I have recently made a survey among 100 students in our school about how they relieve pressure in their daily school life.,Their ways vary from person to person.As the chart shows，up to 29 percent of the students choose music as their favorite way and the percentage of those turning to TV and the Internet reaches 28，while 18 percent get rid of their worries by sleeping.Surprisingly，exercise and others take up only 15 and 10 percent respectively.,Personally I prefer taking exercise to get relaxed.Exercise can lift my mood and build up my strength.Every time I feel stressed，I will take exercise.All worries will disappear with the sweat.Besides，it contributes to sound sleep，which makes me more confident and optimistic.All in all，exercise is a perfect way to reduce anxiety.,5/50,【点评】,1文章没有简单地罗列这些详细事实，而是，首先描述了图表主要内容，接着结合上面详细情况，谈到自己看法和提议，做到有理有据。范文符合写作要求，重点突出，详略得当。,2范文使用了两处非限定制订语从句as the chart shows up，which makes me more confident and optimistic；使用了while，surprisingly，personally，everytime，besides，all in all等过渡词，使文章结构比较紧凑，条理。,6/50,7/50,用词恰当，语言准确是书面表示基本要求，它直接或间接地影响到信息准确传输。英语基础知识好坏，直接关系到语言准确性。只要基础知识抓得好，并做卓有成效训练，准确利用语言是能够做到，如一些固定词组使用方法，动词时态、语态，主谓一致关系等都是书面表示中轻易犯错地方。同时应努力防止单词拼写错误，关键单词写错会直接影响语意表示。在应试中，对于写不来单词，应设法避难就易，寻找替换词(同义词、反义词)；要适当地多使用一些词组、习语来代替单词，以增加文采，丰富语句表现力。,8/50,(,宁波十校联考,)最近你校学生会组织学生开展了一次题目为,“,What is the beauty standard？,”,讨论活动。假如你是学生会主席，请依据下表学生讨论结果写一份总结材料，并谈谈你看法。,学生观点,理由,好脸蛋就是一封介绍信,在社交、竞争、求职等方面作用大,漂亮不能当饭吃,追求外在美而放弃内在美不是真正美,注意：,1.词数100左右；,2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。,参考词汇：求职介绍信recommendation,What is the beauty standard?,What does beauty really mean？Everybody has his own ideas about beauty._,_,_,9/50,【参考范文】,What is the beauty standard?,What does beauty really mean?Everybody has his own ideas about beauty.,Some students think that a pretty face is a recommendation.Good appearance often makes a big difference in social communication，competition，looking for jobs and so on.Not only can it help you become more confident，but also it helps you be impressive.Physical beauty is likely to draw much attention.,On the contrary，other students have quite different opinions.They hold the idea that good appearance will be of no value.Inner beauty is more important.A beautiful person is not the one with good looks，but with a kind heart.,In my opinion，the different ideas on beauty above are both acceptable although the standard of beauty changes with times and cultures.,10/50,【点评】,1在文章写作过程中，不可依据写作关键点提醒用汉语思维方式直接翻译，如,“,漂亮不能当饭吃,”,错译为“Beautiful cant as a meal to eat.”。,2范文对,“,好脸蛋,”,(a pretty face)；,“,社交,”,(social communication)；,“,外在美,”,(physical beauty)；,“,内在美,”,(inner beauty)等词翻译准确、地道。,3文章句式多变，使用了not only.but also.倒装句式；not.but.选择句式，及although引导让步状语句式。,11/50,从历年高考书面表示写作中，因为考生对词语搭配，短语组成，句式结构和习惯表示掌握不够扎实，因而出现了各种各样错误，影响了文章质量，降低了得分档次。就考生们在考卷中出现几个常见情况提一下，防止再出现类似错误。,1be动词遗漏。在主系表结构中，汉语中没有动词句子是允许，英语中每个完整句子都必须有动词来负担谓语。,误：He will sure to come and help me.,正：He will be sure to come and help me.,析：本句中sure是形容词不能充当动词置于情态动词之后。,2句子不完整。有考生因为对句子结构认识含糊，所以出现只写半句现象，这也是造成失分原因之一。,误：Because the kids thought their wages were too low.,正：Because the kids thought their wages were too low，they demanded a high pay.,析：本句是一个because引导原因状语从句，后面必须出现主句才能组成主从复合句结构，不然就造成了句子结构不完整问题。,12/50,3介词、冠词遗漏。还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词使用方法，就会出现显著错误，造成丢分现象。,误：Because his mistake several people died.,正：Because of his mistake several people died.,析：because是一个连词，后面应该引导一个原因状语从句。本句采取了一个简单句结构，用介词短语because of作原因状语能够有效地处理此问题。,4悬垂修饰语逻辑混乱。主要指修饰主句短语与主句逻辑关系混乱不清。,误：At the age of ten，his grandfather died.,正：When he was ten，his grandfather died.,析：这句中“at the age of ten”只点出十岁时，但没有说明谁十岁时。假如我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了。,13/50,5词性误用。词性误用常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等。,误：If you work hard，you will be sure to success.,正：If you work hard，you will be sure to succeed.,析：success为名词，而在句子结构be sure to do中应该使用动词succeed。,6指代不清。是代词与被指代人或物关系不清，或者先后所用代词不一致。,误：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.,正：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.,析：读完上面这一句话，读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。假如我们把易于引发误解代词所指对象加以明确，意思就一目了然了。,14/50,(,陕西西安模拟,)自从清明节、端午节等中国传统节日被纳入公休假以来，这些假日普遍受到人们欢迎。,假定你是李华，你美国笔友John来信问询关于清明节情况。请依据下表提醒内容，用英语给他写一封回信。,节日,日期,特点,活动,清明节,4月5日前后,24节气之一,放假一天，与家人团聚，扫墓，踏青，放风筝,注意：,1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；,2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,参考词汇：节气solar term,Dear John，,Glad to hear from you.Now Id like to tell you something about the Tomb Sweeping Festival._,Best wishes!,Yours，,Li Hua,15/50,16/50,【参考范文】,Dear John，,Glad to hear from you.Now Id like to tell you something about the Tomb Sweeping Festival,.,The Qingming Festival，also known as Tomb Sweeping Festival，is one of the twentyfour solar terms in Chinese lunar calendar.It usually falls around April 5 every year.At this time of year，the weather is getting warm，so it is the custom for people to visit the tombs of their ancestors in honor of them.People also take pleasure in going for an outing，flying kites or just enjoying the scenery and warm sunshine in the country with their family.,The Qingming Festival has a history of thousands of years，so there have been a lot of poems about it since ancient times.Now we can get a day off on this Chinese traditional festival.,Best,wishes!,Yours,，,Li,Hua,17/50,【点评】,1范文时态把握正确，句式富有改变，语言表示自然流畅。,2范文结构明确，层次分明。第一段表明了写信目标；第二段介绍了清明节及期间主要活动；第三段为简短总结。,3文中使用了许多高级短语：known as,“,作为,而著名,”,；in honor of,“,纪念,”,；take pleasure in sth.,“,从做某事中得到高兴,”,；go for an outing,“,踏青,”,；have a history of.,“,拥有历史长达,”,；get.off,“,放假,”,等。,18/50,19/50,写任何一篇文章，首先都要确定它主题。而确定主题关键在于正确表述文章主题句。主题句是文章内容高度概括，是文章主旨浓缩，所以，写好主题句是至关主要。在平时写作训练中，要尤其注意主题句训练，掌握不一样体裁文章拟主题句方法。,20/50,(,山东聊城模拟,)请依据下列图写一篇英语短文，描述图中内容，就其反应现象发表评论并提出处理方案。,注意：,1.词数100左右；,2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,参考词汇：网吧cybercafe,_,_,_,21/50,22/50,【参考范文】,As we can see in the picture，a father is anxiously looking for his son addicted to online games.It seems very hard for him to find the boy because the street is full of cybercafes.,In my opinion，the picture is meaningful and wonderful as well.Nowadays，more and more cybercafes are being opened in the name of improving intelligence.In reality，they are places where a large number of teenagers become addicted to online chat or games and can rarely be pulled out.As far as I am concerned，some measures should be taken to reduce the number of cybercafes as well as to help teenagers develop some other hobbies which do them good.,23/50,【点评】,1本题要求写一篇开放式作文，写作前应依据漫画提醒确定文章中心思想和主旨大意。,2对图片描述主次分明，详略得当。,3过渡词使用灵活，提升了文章档次。阐述观点时，表述富有改变，如,“,in my opinion，.,”,和“as far as I am concerned”前后对应。,24/50,25/50,将写好句子组织起来，形成段落或短文。要注意使用一些表示并列、递进、让步、转折、因果关联词语和过渡言词，以增强文章连贯性和流畅性。常见关联词有：,时间次序：first，second，then，finally，at last，immediately，suddenly，soon。,空间次序：here，there，on one side，on the other side，in front of，at the back of，next to。,并列关系：not only.but also.，and，also，too，as well as。,转折关系：but，however，while，though，otherwise。,因果关系：because，since，as，thanks to，as a result of。,条件关系：as/so long as，on condition that，if，unless。,递进关系：whats more，to make the matter worse，more importantly，whats worse，worse still。,26/50,(,浙江台州质检,)你所在城市最近计划修建地铁，这件事引发了人们广泛争论。请依据以下信息写一篇英文报道，客观陈说人们不一样看法，并表明自己观点。,赞成观点,反对观点,1.处理交通拥堵问题，方便市民生活。,2提供一个新交通方式，利于环境保护。,1.建设时间长，影响城市交通。,2投入资金过大，成本回收过慢。,你观点,注意：,1.开头已给出，但不计入总词数；,2.不要逐句翻译，可适当增加内容以使行文连贯；,3.词数120左右。,Recently，people are having an argument on whether a subway should be built or not in the city.Opinions vary from person to person._,27/50,28/50,【参考范文】,Recently，people are having an argument on whether a subway should be built or not in the city.Opinions vary from person to person.,Some people think it necessary to build a subway.For one thing，building a subway can help solve traffic problems and people will enjoy a more convenient life.For another，it provides a new means of transportation，which is environmentally friendly.,On the other hand，others hold the opposite opinion.From their point of view，the long process of construction is bound to influence the citys traffic.Whats more，too much money will be spent building it，and it will take a long time to get the money back.,Weighing up the pros and cons，I support the idea that a subway should be built because not only will the environment be protected but also more space will be saved.,29/50,【点评】,1本题要求依据正反对比材料分析，然后写一篇发表个人观点议论文。,2范文最大亮点是使用了许多连接过渡词(for one thing，for another，on the other hand，from their point of view，whats more)，增强了文章逻辑性和连贯性。,30/50,从历年书面表示高分文章来看，每篇文章都有,“,亮,”,点，即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。考生要想取得高分就应在,“,正确,”,表示基础上写出自己特色，突出文章亮点。,书面表示中一个突出问题是考生对于使用较高级词汇进行表示意识不强。所以，考生在写作中应有意使用一些,“,较高级词汇,”,，可使用经过构词法改变来词汇、同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词汇、短语。在造句时，既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。假如能将,“,较高级词汇,”,利用得贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使该作文与众不一样。,31/50,(,福建漳州模拟,)健康一直是人们关注问题，请以“Health”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对这个问题看法。关键点以下：,1健康主要性；,2保持良好生活习惯，多锻炼，保持饮食平衡；,3乐于和人交往，与他人友好相处。,注意：,1.词数100左右；,2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,_,_,_,32/50,33/50,【参考范文】,Health,As we all know，health is far more important than wealth.Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve our ambition.To stay healthy，we should keep some fundamental principles in mind.,Above all，it is very important for us to develop a good living habit and keep a balanced diet.Secondly，wed better take regular exercise to keep fit.Most importantly，we should develop a positive attitude towards life and take an active part in communicating with others so that we can live in harmony with others.,In conclusion，if we follow the above advice，we are likely to lead a healthy and happy life.,34/50,【点评】,1本题属提要式话题作文，题目要求明确，写作层次明晰。范文擅用短句或短语表示，节奏性很强。,2文中亮点在于使用了不少高级词汇，enable，achieve ones ambition，fundamental principles，keep in mind，regular，develop a positive attitude，in harmony with等，值得借鉴。,35/50,36/50,高考勉励尽可能使用较复杂语言结构。较复杂语言结构通常指以下几个情况：,1尽可能使用复杂句式，如在一句中加入定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句、同位语从句、主语从句或表语从句。,2使用改变多样句式，如疑问句、祈使句、倒装句、省略句。,3使用非谓语动词、强调句型和其它固定句型。,多变句式标准：,1加法(串联),我们有时希望自己像个native speaker一样能写很长句子；但又怕写错。要处理这一问题，最保险写长句方法是在句子之间加and，但它们之间最好是先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.,假如二者是并列，我们能够用一个超级句式：not only.but also.。如：Not only is the fur coat soft，but it is also warm.。,其它词能够用besides，furthermore，likewise，moreover等。,37/50,2转折(拐弯抹角),用了表示转折关联词，能够使文章关键点明确，重点突出。,The car was quite old，yet it was in excellent condition.,The coat was thin，but it was warm.,表转折关联词还有despite that，still，however，nevertheless，in spite of，despite等。,3因果,文章中使用了表示因果关系连词后，能够让你句式变得丰富多彩，语言富于改变，更具说服力。,The snow began to fall，so we went home.,表示因果关系词或短语还有then，therefore，consequently，accordingly，hence，as a result，for this reason，so that等。,38/50,4失衡句(头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重),有时突然出现一个不合乎常理句子，必定会吸引他人注意力，显得与众不一样。其实就是使用了主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句变形。,This is what I can do.,Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.,5附加,定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语恰当利用，也会让人感觉你有深厚语法功底，又含有极强语言表现力。,The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.,I dont enjoy that book you are reading.,Mr.Liu，our oral English teacher，is easygoing.,39/50,(,湖北八校高三联考,),近期，某地教育局发出通知，要求各级各类幼稚园一律不得使用任何教材。,“,禁书令,”,一出，引发了社会广泛热议。请你依据下表提供信息，写一篇英语作文，介绍人们不一样观点，并就,“,禁书令,”,发表个人看法。,正方,反方,1.减轻幼儿学习负担；,1.不利于幼儿学习基础知识；,2.促进孩子锻炼和身体发育；,2.教师需要自己决定教学内容；,3.有利于培养思维和动手能力。,3.无法检验孩子学习情况。,注意：,词数100左右。,参考词汇：动手能力handson capability,_,40/50,41/50,【参考范文】,Last September textbooks were cancelled in kindergartens in Anhui Province，about which people have different opinions.,The supporters argue that it reduces childrens learning load and allows children to have more time to exercise so that they can grow healthy physically.At the same time，it can help to develop childrens thinking ability and handson capability.,However，those who are against cancelling textbooks in kindergartens argue that its bad for childrens learning.Besides，it is teachers duty to decide what to teach.More importantly，it is difficult to check how children are learning.,Personally，without textbooks children can have a better time in kindergartens，which is beneficial to their future development.,42/50,【点评】,1第一段开门见山，直奔话题，然后引出人们对幼稚园,“,禁书令,”,两种不一样观点。第一段中“about which people have different opinions”是很好过渡语。第二段，全方面客观地陈说了正方主要观点；第三段先用However表示句意转换，然后陈说了反方主要观点；最终一段表明作者赞成幼稚园,“,禁书令,”,，因为这么有利于幼儿身心发展。,2文中好表示句式：,(1)it作形式主语：it is teachers duty to decide what to teach；it is difficult to check how children are learning。,(2)定语从句：about which people have different opinions；who are against cancelling textbooks in kindergartens；which is beneficial to their future development。,(3)目标状语从句：so that they can grow healthy physically。,43/50,44/50,假如写出短文主题突出、内容正确、关键点齐全、观点鲜明、表示流畅、过渡自然、结构完整，作文内容质量就能够到达较高档次。不过，假如想得到阅卷老师青睐，取得较高分数，还要确保卷面书写优美、整齐。,45/50,假设你叫李华，是一名高三学生，请给某英文报社Heart to Heart栏目标编辑Mary写一封信，内容包含：,1正在担心备考，身心压力很大；,2父母期望很高，不停施压；,3与父母难沟通，很苦恼；,4希望Mary就怎样与父母沟通提些提议。,注意：,1.词数100左右，信开头和结尾已经给出，,不计入总词数；,2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mary，,I am a Senior 3 student._,_,Looking forward to your reply.,Yours，,Li Hua,46/50,47/50,48/50,49/50,【点评】,本文卷面整齐，书写流畅、工整，字迹清楚，且字母大小适中，分段合理，单词字母按音节分开，符合单词分行标准，没有用错标点，是一篇上好例文。,50/50,
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