非谓语在英语写作中的运用.ppt

宝岛台湾美丽而神秘，越来越多游客到台湾观光旅游。宝岛台湾美丽而神秘，越来越多游客到台湾观光旅游。请你根据下表内容介绍有关台湾的一些情况。请你根据下表内容介绍有关台湾的一些情况。写作内容写作内容地理位置地理位置中国东南部，是中国最大的岛屿中国东南部，是中国最大的岛屿人口人口约约22，000，000人人面积面积36，000平方公里平方公里特征特征是一个多山的海岛，风景秀丽，有很多闻名中外的名是一个多山的海岛，风景秀丽，有很多闻名中外的名胜古迹，每年大量游客慕名前来观光胜古迹，每年大量游客慕名前来观光社会评价社会评价台湾地区经济、文化发展迅速，台湾人台湾地区经济、文化发展迅速，台湾人(Taiwanese）热情友好，文明有礼）热情友好，文明有礼Taiwan was located in the southeast of China and it is the biggest island in China.It cover an area of 36 thousand square kilometers and has a population of 22 million.Taiwan is surrounded by a lot of mountains is well-known for its natural scenery and many places of interest.Taiwanese are enthusiastic,friendly and polite to others and Taiwan is attracted many tourists to visit every year.The economy and culture develop rapidly in Taiwan.优点：优点：1.要点齐全要点齐全 2.表达基本流畅表达基本流畅缺点：缺点：1.句子的表达有错误句子的表达有错误 2.句子结构简单句子结构简单,句式单一句式单一 iscoverswhichattracts时态时态主谓一致主谓一致主从句混淆主从句混淆语态语态 在英语写作中的运用在英语写作中的运用 少米之炊，大有可为少米之炊，大有可为By Huang YingA.安全性安全性B.简洁而不简单简洁而不简单C.高效（得分效率高效（得分效率=最终得分最终得分答题耗时答题耗时)当王老师走进教室拿丢在那里的钥匙的时候，当王老师走进教室拿丢在那里的钥匙的时候，他看到同学们正在读书。他看到同学们正在读书。Entering the classroom to get the keys lost there,Mr.Wang saw students reading.When Mr.Wang entered the classroom to get the keys that he had lost there,he saw students reading为什么要用非谓语为什么要用非谓语?1.被老师批评后，他决定要努力学习。被老师批评后，他决定要努力学习。一一.用用数个简单句数个简单句数个简单句数个简单句表达原文信息，一定要确保准确性。表达原文信息，一定要确保准确性。He was criticized by his teacher.He decided to study hard.二二.确定主干，并将其他部分以合理的形式表现出来。确定主干，并将其他部分以合理的形式表现出来。Criticized by his teacher,he decided to study hard.非谓语做状语或定语非谓语做状语或定语2.假如天气允许，我们就可以去爬山。假如天气允许，我们就可以去爬山。一一.用数个简单句表达原文信息，一定要确保准确性。用数个简单句表达原文信息，一定要确保准确性。Weather permits.We will go to climb the mountain.二二.确定主干，并将其他部分以合理的形式表现出来。确定主干，并将其他部分以合理的形式表现出来。Weather permitting,we will go to climb the mountain.3.翟志刚身着中国制造的花费翟志刚身着中国制造的花费3000万人民币的航天服在万人民币的航天服在太空中行走。太空中行走。一一.用数个简单句表达原文信息，一定要确保准确性。用数个简单句表达原文信息，一定要确保准确性。Zhai Zhigang walked in space.He wore a spacesuit.The spacesuit was made in China.The spacesuit cost 30 million yuan.二二.确定主干，并将其他部分以合理的形式表现出来。确定主干，并将其他部分以合理的形式表现出来。Zhai Zhigang walked in space,wearing a spacesuit made in China and costing 30 million yuan.1.1.这部以英文写成的小说在世界各地受到了青年人的追捧。这部以英文写成的小说在世界各地受到了青年人的追捧。2.2.昨天，万教授接受采访时，谈到了饮食与健康的关系。昨天，万教授接受采访时，谈到了饮食与健康的关系。3.3.站在山顶上我们可以看到全城站在山顶上我们可以看到全城.4.4.还有很多工作要做，他没有被允许外出。还有很多工作要做，他没有被允许外出。即时练习即时练习(请运用请运用 非谓语非谓语 翻译下列句子翻译下列句子)The novel is popular among the youngsters all over the world.written in English ,Professor Wan talked the Relationship between diet and health.Interviewed yesterday ,we can see the whole city.Standing on the top of the mountain ,he is not allowed to go out.With much work to do即即“with+宾语宾语+补足语补足语”with+宾语宾语+形容词形容词副词副词v-ingv-edto do主动、进行主动、进行被动、完成被动、完成将要发生将要发生 with复合结构复合结构Fill in the blanks 1.With the boy _the way，we found he house easily.(lead)2.With the boy _the way，we will find the house easily tomorrow.(lead)3.He lay on the bed with the bedroom door_.(shut)leadingto leadshut即时练习：即时练习：常见的使役动词和常见的使役动词和感官动词：感官动词：feel hear/listen see/watch/find let/make/have/get 一感二听三看四让一感二听三看四让使役动词和感官动词的结构使役动词和感官动词的结构+sb./sth.+非谓语非谓语 Speak louder to make yourself_.再大点声说，让别人都听到。再大点声说，让别人都听到。She has the computer _.她让人把电脑修好了。她让人把电脑修好了。I heard him _in the room.我听到他在房间里读书。我听到他在房间里读书。I dont want such a question _ here.我不想在这里讨论这样的一个问题。我不想在这里讨论这样的一个问题。heardrepairedreading books即时练习即时练习discussedConclusion:哪些非谓语结构可用来达成我们的目标？哪些非谓语结构可用来达成我们的目标？3）使役动词和感官动词的结构：）使役动词和感官动词的结构：使役动词使役动词/感官动词感官动词+sb./sth.+非谓语非谓语1）非谓语动词作状语或定语（若能写出定语或）非谓语动词作状语或定语（若能写出定语或状语从句，则必能写出此类结构）状语从句，则必能写出此类结构）2）特定的介词）特定的介词with,without,instead of,rather than,etc.People in Guangzhou found that the city had been flooded overnight.So many people who were terrified were walking on the roads that were covered with water.They found that a girl who was frightened was trapped in an underground garage and that she was trembling.As there wasnt any rescue equipment left,the passers-by had no choice but to ask the girl to wait patiently for the rescue team.Practice what you learntPractice what you learnt People in Guangzhou found that the city had been flooded overnight.So many people who were terrified were walking on the roads that were covered with water.They found that a girl who was frightened was trapped in an underground garage and that she was trembling.As there wasnt any rescue equipment left,the passers-by had no choice but to ask the girl to wait patiently for the rescue team.Practice what you learnt People in Guangzhou found that the city had been flooded overnight.So many people who were terrified were walking on the roads that were covered with water.They found that a girl who was frightened was trapped in an underground garage and that she was trembling.As there wasnt any rescue equipment left,the passers-by had no choice but to ask the girl to wait patiently for the rescue team.Practice what you learnt People in Guangzhou found that the city had been flooded overnight.So many people who were terrified were walking on the roads that were covered with water.They found that a girl who was frightened was trapped in an underground garage and that she was trembling.As there wasnt any rescue equipment left,the passers-by had no choice but to ask the girl to wait patiently for the rescue team.Practice what you learnt People in Guangzhou found that the city had been flooded overnight.So many people who were terrified were walking on the roads that were covered with water.They found that a girl who was frightened was trapped in an underground garage and that she was trembling.As there wasnt any rescue equipment left,the passers-by had no choice but to ask the girl to wait patiently for the rescue team.Practice what you learnt People in Guangzhou found that the city had been flooded overnight.So many people who were terrified were walking on the roads that were covered with water.They found that a girl who was frightened was trapped in an underground garage and that she was trembling.As there wasnt any rescue equipment left,the passers-by had no choice but to ask the girl to wait patiently for the rescue team.Practice what you learnt People in Guangzhou found that the city had been flooded overnight.So many people who were terrified were walking on the roads that were covered with water.They found that a girl who was frightened was trapped in an underground garage and that she was trembling.As there wasnt any rescue equipment left,the passers-by had no choice but to ask the girl to wait patiently for the rescue team.Practice what you learnt People in Guangzhou found that the city had been flooded overnight.So many people who were terrified were walking on the roads that were covered with water.They found that a girl who was frightened was trapped in an underground garage and that she was trembling.As there wasnt any rescue equipment left,the passers-by had no choice but to ask the girl to wait patiently for the rescue team.People in Guangzhou found the city flooded overnight.Without any rescue equipment left,the passers-by had to get the girl waiting patiently for the rescue team.They found a frightened girl trapped in an underground garage,trembling.So many terrified people were walking on the road covered with water.Practice what you learnt People in Guangzhou found that the city had been flooded overnight.So many people who were terrified were walking on the roads that were covered with water.They found that a girl who was frightened was trapped in an underground garage and that she was trembling.As there wasnt any rescue equipment left,the passers-by had no choice but to ask the girl to wait patiently for the rescue team.(71words)People in Guangzhou found the city flooded overnight.So many terrified people were walking on the water-covered road.They found a frightened girl trapped in an underground garage,trembling.Without any rescue equipment left,the passers-by had to get the girl waiting patiently for the rescue team.(48words)Practice what you learntTaiwan which is located in the southeast of China,is the biggest island in China.Although it covers an area of 36 thousand square kilometers,Taiwan has a population of 22 million.Taiwan,which is surrounded by a lot of mountains,is well-known for its natural scenery and many places of interest.Whats more,Taiwanese are enthusiastic,friendly and polite to others and therefore Taiwan attracts many tourists to visit every year.Because more people come to visit Taiwan,the economy and culture develop rapidly in Taiwan.（96words）Practice what you learntTaiwan which is located in the southeast of China,is the biggest island in China.Although it covers an area of 36 thousand square kilometers,Taiwan has a population of 22 million.Taiwan,which is surrounded by a lot of mountains,is well-known for its natural scenery and many places of interest.Whats more,Taiwanese are enthusiastic,friendly and polite to others and therefore Taiwan attracts many tourists to visit every year.Because more people come to visit Taiwan,the economy and culture develop rapidly in Taiwan.（96words）Practice what you learntTaiwan which is located in the southeast of China,is the biggest island in China.Although it covers an area of 36 thousand square kilometers,Taiwan has a population of 22 million.Taiwan,which is surrounded by a lot of mountains,is well-known for its natural scenery and many places of interest.Whats more,Taiwanese are enthusiastic,friendly and polite to others and therefore Taiwan attracts many tourists to visit every year.Because more people come to visit Taiwan,the economy and culture develop rapidly in Taiwan.（96words）Practice what you learntTaiwan which is located in the southeast of China,is the biggest island in China.Although it covers an area of 36 thousand square kilometers,Taiwan has a population of 22 million.Taiwan,which is surrounded by a lot of mountains,is well-known for its natural scenery and many places of interest.Whats more,Taiwanese are enthusiastic,friendly and polite to others and therefore Taiwan attracts many tourists to visit every year.Because more people come to visit Taiwan,the economy and culture develop rapidly in Taiwan.（96words）Practice what you learntTaiwan which is located in the southeast of China,is the biggest island in China.Although it covers an area of 36 thousand square kilometers,Taiwan has a population of 22 million.Taiwan,which is surrounded by a lot of mountains,is well-known for its natural scenery and many places of interest.Whats more,Taiwanese are enthusiastic,friendly and polite to others and therefore Taiwan attracts many tourists to visit every year.Because more people come to visit Taiwan,the economy and culture develop rapidly in Taiwan.（96words）Practice what you learntTaiwan which is located in the southeast of China,is the biggest island in China.Although it covers an area of 36 thousand square kilometers,Taiwan has a population of 22 million.Taiwan,which is surrounded by a lot of mountains,is well-known for its natural scenery and many places of interest.Whats more,Taiwanese are enthusiastic,friendly and polite to others and therefore Taiwan attracts many tourists to visit every year.Because more people come to visit Taiwan,the economy and culture develop rapidly in Taiwan.Practice what you learntWith more people coming to visit Taiwan,the economy and culture develop rapidly in TaiwanTaiwan,located in the southeast of China,is the largest island in China.Although covering an area of 36 thousand square kilometers,it has a population of 22 million.Taiwan,surrounded by many mountains,is well-known for its natural scenery and many places of interest.Taiwan which is located in the southeast of China,is the biggest island in China.Although it covers an area of 36 thousand square kilometers,Taiwan has a population of 22 million.Taiwan,which is surrounded by a lot of mountains,is well-known for its natural scenery and many places of interest.Whats more,Taiwanese are enthusiastic,friendly and polite to others and therefore Taiwan attracts many tourists to visit every year.Because more people come to visit Taiwan,the economy and culture develop rapidly in Taiwan.（96words）Practice what you learntPractice what you learntTaiwan,located in the southeast of China,is the largest island in China.Although covering an area of 36 thousand square kilometers,it has a population of 22 million.surrounded by many mountains,Taiwan is well-known for its natural scenery and many places of interest.Whats more,Taiwanese are enthusiastic,friendly and polite to others and therefore Taiwan attracts a large number of tourists to visit every year.With more people coming to visit Taiwan,the economy and culture develop rapidly in Taiwan.(83words)Homework Write the composition and hand it in.请你把图画内容整理成请你把图画内容整理成五个句子五个句子，使用你今天的所使用你今天的所学学将其表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。将其表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。妈妈的唠叨妈妈的唠叨