写人物的写作.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Writing,人物描写,An introduction of a person,What do we write,about a person?,1.Students(friends/classmates),2.Teachers(parents),3.Scientists,4.Political leaders,5.Famous persons(actors/athletes),What kind of person do we write about?,Guess:,WHO,IS,HE?,He is a great computer engineer.,He and his wife,set up a fund,to improve global health and education.,After graduation from,high school,he entered Harvard,He became one of the wealthiest men in America,in his thirties,.,He,is well-known for,his kindness.,Bill Gates,where,he dropped out in 1975 to,spend his time writing,programs.,He,was presented with,a KBE(,爵士勋衔,)in 2004.,Guess:,WHO,IS,HE?,He,has a gift for,music,He,was born in,Taiwan.He,is popular among,young people.,At the age of 21,he was able to release his first,record.,He has a wish that he could,receive a,Grammy,Award,one day.,He,is famous for,his R&B music.He has starred in a few movies.,One of his record,was named after,his mother.,Jay Chou,and,began to learn to play musical instruments when he was a little boy.,Guess:,WHO,IS,HE?,Though now just,in his twenties,he is already an international sparkling star.,He,was born in,a sporting family.,He is now 2.26 meters tall and 134 kg in weight.,He,is regarded as,the best basketball player in China.,He joined Shanghai basketball team in 1997 and became a member of China national team in 1998.,Yao Ming,He,is nicknamed,“The Little giant”,He became the third Chinese player in NBA history in1998.,Guess:,WHO,IS,HE?,He,was born in,Liaoning Province.,He joined the PLA,when he,was 18 years old.,He attended the College of the PLA Air Force in,1987,He was the first man in China who was sent into outer space in,Shenzhen 5,Yang,Liwei,which,made China the third country to independently send people into space.,and,graduated with a Bachelors degree,.,Place of birth,Appearance/looking,Name,Characters/qualities,Date of birth,Education/schooling,Interest/Hobbies,Praise/Evaluation,Achievements,Brainstorm,What to,write about,Competition,:,Speak out useful phrases/expressions in our writing,Example:,Students(friends/classmates),be born,in,at,the age of,study at,be good,at,do well,in,work,hard,at,be interested,in,enjoy,doing,sth,.,be ready to,helpdo,sth,.,win the first prize,in,competition,think highly,of,set a good example,for,learn,from,Competition:,Teachers(Parents),in,his twenties/thirties,be kind,to,be strict,with/in,care,for,treatas,more,like a friend,than,a teacher,work hard,have a good way of,making his class lively and interesting,be given the honor,of,a“Model Teacher”,be loved and respected,by,the students,Competition:,Scientists,be born in a family,make a living,by,Graduated from,receive a Doctors/Bachelors degree,go abroad for further studies,do experiments,do research work,be the first person to do,sth,lead to,his success,be well known/famous,for,devote,to,care little about money,live a simple life,be considered/regarded,as,Competition:,Political leaders,be born,in,as,a young man,After,graduation/Graduated,from,work hard,at,be interested,in,be active in politics,take part,in,spend his time,in,devote,to,think highly,of,be always remembered,as,be considered,to be,be regarded,as,Competition:,Famous person:,(actors/athletes),be born in,weigh,50 kg and,be,168 cm tall,have a gift,for,be interested,in,star in,be popular,with,become a member of,train hard,release the first record,be named,after/as,receive a Award,be presented,with,one of the best,win a gold medal,at,Games,become a world champion,in,set a new world record,of,win great fame,for,be proud,of,Fill in the blanks:,Zhou,Enlai,was born in 1898 in,Huaian,Jiangsu Province.In 1913,_ _ _(,介词短语,)of 15,he passed the examinations and entered,Nankai,Middle School,_(,关系副词,)he began to know some revolutionary thoughts.,at the age,where,In 1917 Zhou,Enlai,went to Japan,_(hope)to find a way to save China.During his stay in Japan,the Chinese people were living a hard life.In April,1919,Comrade Zhou,Enlai,returned to China to do _(revolution)work.He _ _ _,（动词短语）,the May 4th Movement and some other a_(,名词,).,hoping,revolutionary,took part in,ctivities,.,In 1920 Zhou,Enlai,went to France and joined the Chinese Communist Party in 1922._ _(,介词短语,)his revolutionary work,Zhou,Enlai,came back to his motherland from France in 1924,and began the life in _(,关系代词,)he had an aim of building a new China.,Because of,which,After the _(found)of the Peoples Republic of China,，,together with the other leaders,Zhou,Enlai,worked day and night to make China one of the _,（,strong,）,countries in the world.,Comrade Zhou,Enlai,died on Jan.8th,1976 in Beijing.He _(regard)as one of the greatest leaders of China.,founding,strongest,is regarded,Steps,Beginning(introduction),Birth(time,place),Schooling(,family,education,/work),Career(job,position),Achievements(,honour,/award/prize),Ending(death,praise/comment),TASK,Write a composition,Step 1:,Study the materials carefully.,Underline all the things you want to write in your introduction.,Writing Tips,Step 2:,Now write down the useful phrases/expressions in each sentence.,Writing Tips,Step 3:,Decide what tenses to use.,Pay attention to the correct form of verbs.,Writing Tips,Step 4:,Polish your article.,1)Use sentence patterns.,2)Organize the paragraphs.,3)Check the mistakes.,Writing Tips,HOMEWORK,书面表达,请根据下面表格的主要内容，用英语写一篇,100,词左右的短文，介绍我国著名乒乓球运动员张怡宁。,姓名,：张怡宁,籍贯,：北京,生日,：,1982.10.5,身高,：,168cm,体重,：,52kg,主要事迹：,6,岁,开始打球,，,1993,年,进入国家队,。她,训练刻苦,，,打法独特,。在,2004,年雅典奥运会上,获得,女单、女双,冠军,。,2005,年,3,月，,荣获,中国十佳劳伦斯,冠军,最佳女运动员奖,；,2005,年,5,月,获得,第,48,届世乒赛女单、女双,冠军,。她为我国,赢得了巨大的荣誉,。,参考词汇：,女单,womens singles,女双,womens doubles,中国十佳劳伦斯冠军奖,China Top Ten,Laureus,Sports Figure Glory,世乒赛,World Table Tennis Championships,Writing,Zhang,Yining,was born in,Beijing on October 5,1982.She,weighs 52 kilograms,and,is 168 cm high,.,She,began to play table tennis,at six and,became a player in,the national team in 1993.She,practices hard,and,has her own way of,playing.In 2004,she,became champions in,both womens singles and doubles,at,the Athens,Olympic Games,.In March,2005,she,was named as,the Best Female Athlete of“China Top Ten,Laureus,Sports Figure Glory”.In May,she,won the gold medal for,both womens singles and doubles at the 48th World Table Tennis Championships.She,won great fame for,our country.We,are proud of,this great player.,