高三英语第二轮专题训练 书面表达 作文过渡之基础性训练 人教版 课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,作文基础过渡性训练,高三英语写作专题（七),连贯与句式的运用,连贯,(coherence),指文章语意的通顺和语言形式的紧密衔接并符合一定的逻辑关系。,要使文章前后衔接紧密，可采用以下方法：,提示,1,：恰当使用关联词,如,when,，,so,，,if,，,because,，,so that,等。,提示,2,：巧妙使用意思有联系的词或短语,如,First,Second,Third,Soon,What,s more,As a result,等。,提示,3,：适当使用过渡性语句,The reasons are as follows.,Every coin has two sides.,On the other hand,On the contrary,连接词、句型的选择,1,、,递进关系,（肯定）,（否定）,2,、,时间,一,就,不久,然后,同时,Besides/Whats more/Also,/In addition/Furthermore,Whats worse/Even worse/Worse,still/To make matters worse,The moment/On doing/as soon as/,immediately/directly,It was not long before,/After a while/Soon,After that/Then/So/Next,At the same time/Meanwhile,3,、,转折,4,、,顺序,5,、,条件,6,、强调,however,/but/on the contrary/,On the other hand/yet,First/Second/Third/Last/Next/Then,If/As long as/So long as/,on condition that,It was that/who /So she did./,I do hope /She did help me./,It really worked.,7,、,其它,不得不做某事,have to do,sth,./have no,choicebut,to do,sth,.,/have nothing to do but do,sth,.,有必要做某事,There is no need(for,sb,.)to do,sth,.,/It is necessary(for,sb.)to,do,最好做某事,Youd better do,sth,.Its better to do,sth,.,做某事没困难,have no difficulty in doing,sth,./,have no trouble in doing,sth,.,感谢某人,thank,sb,./be thankful to,sb,./,express ones thanks to,sb,./,be grateful to,sb,./Thanks to,求助某人,turn to,sb,.for help/ask,sb,.for help/,with the help of/with ones help,惊奇,To ones surprise/In surprise/Surprisingly/,only+,不定式（表意外结果）,原因如下（很多）,The reasons are as follows.,There are many reasons for it.,浪费金钱（时间）,Its a waste of money/time,结果,As a result/Therefore/Thus/So,总结,In a word/In short/Above all/After all,表达观点,In my opinion/I think/I believe/Im sure/I guess,Task 1,请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。,Xiao Ming was walking in the street he heard someone cry for help.,He advised that I hire a car I could travel around in the west.,It was not long the police came.,he heard the cry for help,he jumped into the water to save the girl.,Do you agree with my arrangement?,do write to me soon.,We can go downtown and do some shopping.,we can pay a visit to some places of interest.,7.I shared the cost of the gas with my friends.,I saved$80.,Eating sugar is bad for our teeth.,it may make us fat.,Whats more/Besides/,Also/Furthermore/,In addition,when,so that/in order that,before,As soon as/Immediately/Directly/The moment,If not,As a result/,Therefore,Whats worse/Even worse/,/To make matters worse,句式的运用,：利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。,基本句型：,1,、,感叹句,e.g.1),How happy I was,when I received your letter.,2,）,What a kind boy,he is!,3,）,How disappointed,he was!,2,、,强调句,e.g.,It was,this young boy,that,helped the old granny.,3,、,倒装句,e.g.1),Only in this way,can you,solve this problem.,2)There,comes,t,he police car,.,3),Hardly had,they got to the station,when,they met,the young man.,句式的运用,：利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。,基本句型：,4,、,省略句,e.g.They read,while walking,or riding on a bus.,5,、,with,短语,e.g.I saw a young lady walking slowly in the,street,with a handbag in her hand.,6,、,定语从句,e.g.In my opinion,cyber cafes should be a place,where we can find much useful information.,7,、,各种名词性从句,e.g.Thats,what I should do,.,8,、,各种状语从句,e.g.Time passed quickly,before we knew it,.,Task 2,按要求改写下列句子,使其更具文采。,1.Tom saved the drowning girl.(,强调,),2.I hope I can pay a visit to you next year.,（强调）,3.Tom was puzzled.,（感叹）,4.It is great fun to climb the hill.,（感叹）,5.Tom and Mary like singing songs.,（肯定倒装）,6.John likes to study and play.,（否定倒装）,7.Soon the firefighters came.,（表时间句型）,It was,Tom,that/who,saved the drowning girl.,I,do,hope I can pay a visit to you next year.,How,puzzled Tom was!,What,great fun it is to climb the hill!,Tom likes singing songs,so does,Mary.,Not only,does John like to study,but(also),he likes to play.,It was not long before,the firefighters came.,Task 3 Writing Practice,请你给,中国日报,写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。,原因,：,1,、,家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱养家。,2,、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。,3,、,部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。,看法,：,1,、,每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。,2,、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。,要求：,1,、不要逐字逐句翻译。,2,、语句要连贯通顺。,3,、字数,100,个左右。,Now in the country areas,there are many children out of school.Most families are poor and cant afford their education.They,have to stay,at home and make money.Some parents think,daughters neednt go to school.,They dont let them go to school.Some children are not interested in their studies and wouldnt like to go to school.,All the children including girls should be educated.The whole society should pay attention to it.Theyll play an important part in the future of our country.,诊断,：,优点,缺点,药方,1,、词能达意；,2,、语句表达基本正确。,语句不够连贯,1,、使用常见句型；,2,、每两个句子之间使用关联词或过渡词。,Now in the country areas,there are many children out of school.,。，,most families are too poor to send their children to school.,they,have no choice but to,stay at home and make money.,some parents think,there is no need for their daughters to,go to school.,they don,t let them go to school.,some children are not interested in their studies.,some wouldnt like to go to school.,all the children including girls should be educated.,the whole society should pay attention to it,theyll play an important part in the future of our country one day.,The reasons are as follows,There are many reasons for this.,First,As a result,Second,So/Therefore,Third,Whats worse/Worse still,Even worse/To make matters worse,In my opinion,Whats more/Besides,because,Task 4 Writing by yourselves,下列图画描述的是两位少先队员上星期日去少年宫的途中经历的事情,.,请据此写一篇短文,参加由英语组组织的英语作文竞赛。,练习一、,（一）简单句翻译,1,我们在学习怎样用电脑。,Were learning how to use the computer.,2,他和他的朋友经常查字典。,He and his friend always look up in the dictionary.,3,请给我一杯水,好吗？,Please give me a cup of water,will you?,4,老师让我回答了这个问题。,The teacher asked me to answer the question.,5,我们的国家变得越来越强大。,Our country is getting stronger and stronger.,6,你的到来使我很高兴。,Your arrival makes me very happy.,7,村庄里有许多绿树和湖泊。,There are many green trees and lakes in the village.,8,我们不应该歧视弱者。,We should not look down upon the weak.,(,二,),并列句翻译,1.,我喜欢读书，他喜欢玩玩具。（,while,）,I like reading,while,he likes playing with toys.,2.,孩子们非常高兴，或者至少看起来很高兴。（,or,）,The children are very happy,or,at least they look happy.,3.,中国是发展中国家，而美国是发达国家。（,but/while,）,China is a developing country,while,the United States is a developed one.,4.,这里常下雨，有时有暴风雨。,(and,）,It often rains here,and,storms sometimes.,5,他不但受到我们的鼓励而且受到老师的表扬。（,not only but also,）,He was,not only,encouraged by us,but also,praised by the teacher.,6,我们周围的东西不是固体、液体就是气体。,(eitheror),Everything around us is,either,solid,liquid,or,gas.,7,一个人既应该有勇气也应有毅力。,（,both and),A man should have,both,courage,and,perseverance.,8.,新中国的妇女在政治生活和家庭生活方面享有和男子同等权利。,(as well as,）,In new China women enjoy equal rights with men in political life,as,well as,in family life.,9.,我喝咖啡要加奶加糖。,When I drink coffee,I prefer to add sugar,as well as,milk.,(,三,),复合句翻译,1,我相信你一定能成功。,Im sure,youll succeed.,2,北京再也不是,20,年前的样子了。,Beijing is no longer,what was 20 years ago.,3,这个城市是我出生的地方。,This is the city,where,I was born./,The city is the one,which,I was born in.,4,他和以前不一样了。,He is not,what,he used to be.,5,为了明天赶上早班车，我要早起。,I have to get up earlier,so that,I can catch up the early bus,.,6.,虽然他年轻，但是经验很丰富。,Although,he is young,he is very experienced./,He is young,but,he is very experienced.,7,如果有困难，请来找我。,Please turn to me,if,you are in trouble.,8.,老师所讲的都记在笔记本上了。,What the teacher said,was all taken down on the notebook.,9,众所周知，中国是人口大国。,It is well-known that,China is a country with a large population.,10,据报道，他是来自新西兰的一位学者。,It is reported that,he is a scholar from New Zealand.,11,他与我们到别时留下了他的姓名和地址。,He left his name and address,when,he said good-bye to me.,12,李秘书被解雇是因为他受贿。,Secretary Li was dismissed,because,he took bribe.,13,盗贼没等警察抓捕，就逃逸了。,The robbers had escaped,before,the police arrived,.,14,他读过信后就把信毁掉。,He destroyed the letter,after,he read it.,15,自开店以来，我们赢获大利。,We have made large profits,since,we opened this shop.,16,如果我知道它在哪，它就不会丢了，是不是？,If,I knew where it was,it wont be lost,would it?,17,一直向前走直到一所新的蓝色大楼。,Go straight on,until,you come to a new blue building.,18,他不照别人告诉他的去做。,He wont do,as,hes told.,19,按照她的要求，她被埋葬在花园里。,She was buried at the garden,as,she had requested,.,20,我们一到达那里就给你打电话。,Well ring you,as soon as,we get there.,练习二、改正错句,(,一,),修改下面的句子，去掉多余的词。,1.Do you know who first invented the telephone?,Do you know who invented the telephone?,2.In my opinion,I think Japan is far ahead of Spain in science.,In my opinion,Japan is far ahead of Spain in science.,3.The first up train leaves away from the station at 6:00.,The first up train leaves at 6:00.,4.No sooner had I left the house than it began to rain immediately.,No sooner had I left the house than it began to rain.,5.Listen to me speaking carefully.,Listen to me carefully.,6.Every day Tom and I walk to school on foot together.,Every day Tom and I walk to school together.,7.Every Sunday I go to pay him a visit.,Every Sunday I pay him a visit.,8.George is entirely different in various ways from his brother.,George is entirely different from his brother.,9.That famous football team from Brazil which won the match.,That famous football team from Brazil won the match.,10.Henry is still too young not to handle this important job alone.,Henry is still too young to handle this important job alone.,11.Mary has made up her mind to decide to go abroad.,Mary has made up her mind to go abroad.,12.There is a mistake in your wrong sentence.,There is a mistake in your sentence.,13.I suggest how about eating out this weekend.,I suggest eating out this weekend.,14.Please look the papers over from beginning to end.,Please look the papers over.,15.Though she has six children,but she lives by himself.,Though she has six children,she lives by himself.,16.You will find his house easily without difficulty.,You will find his house easily.,17.I always have eggs for breakfast in the morning.,I always have eggs for breakfast.,18.Hong Kong is an island surrounded by water on all sides.,Hong Kong is an island.,19.,Mrs,Hill is old-fashioned in the dress,but young at the heart.,Mrs,Hill is old-fashioned in dress,but young at heart.,20.Mr.Li is an honest man who never tells lies.,Mr.Li is an honest man.,（二）改正下面句子中的词语错误：,Dont be discouraged;go ahead,and make other try.,Dont be discouraged;go ahead,and make,another,try.,2.,Mr,Cooper would tell you the truth if he was here.,Mr,Cooper would tell you the truth if he,were,here.,3.There is not more much time before our vacation.,There is not,much more,time before our vacation.,4.A person should always be ready to make a change in habits.,A person should always be ready to make a change in,his,habits.,5.Every child likes surprise.,Every child likes,a,surprise.,6.If the book you will want is out you may ask for it.,If the book you want is out you may ask for it.,7.He walked slowly,stopped frequently to rest.,He walked slowly,stopping,frequently to rest.,8.The number of the tickets that the box office sell was very large.,The number of the tickets that the box office,sold,was very large.,9.The final plan differed greatly with the original one.,The final plan differed greatly,from,the original one.,10.That package is too heavy to be carried.,That package is too heavy to,carry,.,11.We all know the news which we won the football match yesterday.,We all know the news,that,we won the football match yesterday.,12.The suggestion of the worker proved far more valuable that we had expected.,The suggestion of the worker proved far more valuable,than,we had expected.,13.It was not until 1920 since regular radio broadcast began.,It was not until 1920,that,regular radio broadcast began.,14.They stayed at a hotel in front of it was a beautiful garden.,They stayed at a hotel in front of,which,was a beautiful garden.,15.So surprised he was that he could hardly say a word.,So surprised,was he,that he could hardly say a word.,16.Is this necessary to buy a new mobile phone while the old one is still working?,Is,it,necessary to buy a new mobile phone while the old one is still working?,17.Our teacher insisted we would go there on foot.,Our teacher insisted we go there on foot.,18.Though he has a lot of work to do,however,he often helps us.,Though he has a lot of work to do,he often helps us.,19.This is the date when I will never forget.,This is the date(that)I will never forget.,20.You can stay the place where you are.,You can stay in the place where you are.,练习三、,（一）,改正句子中非谓语动词形式的错误,Get up late is a bad habit.,Getting,up late is a bad habit,.,2.Be diligent is one of the keys to success.,Being,diligent is one of the keys to success.,/,Diligence,is one of the keys to success.,3.My hobby is reading and go shopping.,My hobby is reading and,shopping,.,4.Compare with these kinds of the one-child families,my family is rare at present.,Compared,with these kinds of the one-child families,my family is rare at present.,5.A good housewifes love can make every member in the family feels happy.,A good housewifes love can make every member in the family,feel,happy.,6.Become a good teacher is my dream.,Becoming,a good teacher is my dream.,7.I want to buy a lot of beautiful dresses,as love beauty is a nature of a girl.,I want to buy a lot of beautiful dresses,as,loving,beauty is a nature of a girl.,8.Lets learn English,begin with ABC.,Lets learn English,beginning,with ABC.,9.Close the distance between them,she pressed her face to his heart.,Closing,the distance between them,she pressed her face to his heart.,10.She watched the trees in the yard,regret that spring had so soon passed.,She watched the trees in the yard,regretting,that spring had so soon passed.,11.Limiting by the time,I could not visit so many places.,Limited,by the time,I could not visit so many places.,12.It introduced that the founder of the club was a young man.,It is introduced that,the founder of the club was a young man.,（二）改正句子在结构上的错误,I like by train.,I like traveling by train.,2.I very much like there.,I like there very much.,3.,Her dream is she can give performance in Beijing.,Her dream is,that,she can give performance in Beijing.,4.,Only do that,can we improve our writing skills.,Only by doing that can we,improve our writing skills.,5.,I would save each coin can be saved.,I would save each coin,that,can be saved.,6.,I was still thinking if let him know it.,I was still thinking if,I should,let him know it.,7.,Most of the people buy vegetables in the market are women.,Most of the people,who,buy vegetables in the market are women.,8.,The way of people spend the weekend is different.,The way,people spend the weekend,is different.,9.,As an airhostess can often stay in the sky.,As an airhostess,she,can often stay in the sky.,10.,In the countryside,there are too many children cant go to school.,In the countryside,there are too many children,who,cant go to school.,11.In the street of Beijing we can often meet foreigners come from all over the world.,In the street of Beijing we can often meet foreigners,coming,from all over the world.,12.The reason for this is because they didnt realize the importance of career for a woman,.,The reason for this is,that,they didnt realize the importance of career for a woman.,13.He likes