2025年英语英语中考英语书面表达及答案.doc

【英语】英语中考英语书面体现及答案（word）

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．书面体现
地球是我们家园，我们作为地球主人，就应当好好保护地球。目前正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球环境，不挥霍地球能源，就可以让我们周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应当怎样做呢？谈谈你想法。内容应当包括如下几点：
1. 节省用水、用电；2. 节省纸张，循环使用旧书本，保护森林；3. 节省粮食，在更多土地上种树；4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；
规定：短文中不得出现真实校名和人名；80词左右
提醒词：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式
How does our earth turn better?
The earth is our home. _______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.
【答案】How does our earth turn better?
The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?
I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don't throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.
If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定构造But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

2．书面体现
假如你是Amy，德国互换生Sara下周即未来你家寄宿，昨天你收到她来信，在信中，她问询如下信息：1．你家状况；2.有关餐桌礼仪；3. 她要承担家务劳动；4. …目前，你就她提出问题给她回信，也预祝她在你家过得开心！
规定：1. 文章必须包括图片中重要内容，可合适发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息；
3. 字数约110词。
Dear Sara，
I’m glad to hear from you yesterday._____________________________________________
Love，
Amy
【答案】Dear Sara，
I’m glad to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family next week.
I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say "thank you |"in politely and leave the food there.
As for housework, I think it's our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.
Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.
Love,
Amy
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。而复杂并列构造In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone.和If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3．每一次变化都伴伴随我们成长，作为初中生你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显变化。
要点包括: 1. 变化是什么?
2. 变化是怎样发生?
3. 变化后有什么感受?
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.
When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.
Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，简介我比起小时候有了哪些变化。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我最大个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来简介我小时候不喜欢读书，最终指出目前书籍是我朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

4．书面体现
你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校利和弊；读走读学校利和弊；你选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容反复）。

注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含提醒中所有信息，并按规定合适发挥。
A hoarding school or a day school
We are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________
【答案】
We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.
If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.
As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校选择。第二段要写详细论述读寄宿学校利弊；读走读学校利弊。第三段要表述作者自已选择和理由。
【详解】
写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些规定？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？阐明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定期态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用合适句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落构造句型及关键词句完毕文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增长了文章亮点。
【点睛】
此类作文写作措施要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言使用。做到：要点要全，体现要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要精确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

5．Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，根据下表所列要点写一篇100词左右文章（文章开头已给出）。

学会对自已微笑

1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试败北、被他人误解等）。
2、使你自信，击败你人有时就是你自已。
3、有益于身心健康。

学会对他人微笑

1、便于与他人之间交流。
2、给他人带来快乐,自已也快乐。

微笑是一种语言

人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。

1、参照词汇： 对某人微笑 smile at sb. 误解 misunderstand
2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可合适发挥，使短文连贯穿顺。
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
___________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”
Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.
Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.
In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.
【解析】
这是一篇表格式作文，要点是一表格形式出现，首先要研究表格，找出需要体现要点，然后加以整合，也可以合适增长使意思更连贯，但要点一定要全，不能遗漏。写作时要注意遣词造句，不能受汉语影响，要用地道英语体现，注意时态，语态，单词拼写，语法等问题，用好简单句，合适用复杂句。可以用某些高级词汇。还要注意句子关联。

6．书面体现
假如你是李明，你英国笔友Jack来信问询你家乡与否有雾霾天气，状况怎样。请你按照如下提醒给他回一封e-mail。
内容如下：
1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生多次雾霾天气；
2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气危害，正在采用多种措施减少其发生；
3. 你在平常生活中打算为此做些什么。
参照词汇：雾霾haze
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右，信件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.
The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .
People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.
As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以李明身份给自已英国笔友写信，告诉他有关家乡雾霾状况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提醒，来组织语言，充实内容。首先简介去年家乡雾霾状况严重；然后简介为减少雾霾人们采用了某些措施；最终简介一下你自已在平常生活中应当怎么做。因此文章应重要提成三段，一种内容一段。文章内容中论述状况不一，时态不能统一，根据体现需要使用对时态，注意谓语动词对形式。写作时，应注意英语句式体现习惯和汉语是不一样，不能逐词翻译，应从句子整体考虑，写完整句子，运用简单句基本句型，使用恰当词汇和短语。为提高文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文意连贯，体现流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文中作者根据题目规定简介了自已家乡治理雾霾状况，并结合自身实际状况，讲述了自已平常生活中是怎样做。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中规定所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章构造清晰，提成了三段，每一段中心明确，意思体现清晰、明了。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，作者根据体现需要使用了一般过去时、一般未来时态和一般未来时态，动词形式变化精确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式体现符合英语习惯。句子构造以简单句为主，也使用了某些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中很好句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.等。

7．写作
81. 春天，许多人都喜欢参与多种户外活动。为了倡导中学生靠近大自然，某中学生英文报举行了一次征文活动，请你根据如下问题，用英语写一篇短文参与征文。
提醒：1）What’s the benefit （好处） of outdoor activities? （1-2 opinions）
2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （1-2 examples）
3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）
规定：1）体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括提醒中所有信息，并按规定合适发挥；
3）词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature.

【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.
When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the coming study or work.
There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.
Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面体现以“outdoor activities”为话题，结合所给写作材料，写一篇报刊征文稿。根据内容提醒可知本文会使用到一般目前时态，注意某些常见句式应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富语句，注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系，最终最佳要体现出人物感想和见解。
写作亮点：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁、要点齐全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富句型，例如：It is +形容词+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；时间状语从句等复合句，大大增长了信息容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错范文。

8． 书面体现
共享单车（shared bikes）在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们追捧，变化了人们出行方式，但同步也遇到了某些挑战，是国民素质‘“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息提醒，给《二十一世纪英文报》写一篇有关共享单车见解稿件。
社会现实状况
自从出现，饱受赞誉。
诸多优势
1.随地可见，出行以便
2.有益健康，减少污染
3.费用不高，承担得起
存在问题
1.未及时归还
2.占道挡路
你观点
我认为……（考生自拟，至少2点）

注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提醒内容，规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
2.表格中“你观点”一栏用2―3句话展开合理想象。作合适发挥。
3.词数在90个左右，文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.
Shared bikes have