英语英语书面表达试题类型及其解题技巧.doc

（英语）英语书面体现试题类型及其解题技巧

一、英语书面体现
1． 如今，诸多都市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环境保护、便捷而备受青睐，但同步也引起了某些问题。请你根据提醒以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，体现自已见解和提议。
要点提醒：
Advantages
Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力）
Take exercise…
Problems
Throw away, damage（毁损）, be stolen…
Advice
Civilized（文明）, follow the rules, take good care of…

注意：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，可合适发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名及地名；
3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Bike-sharing
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people.
First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（提议）
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文内容丰富，体现了所有要点，语言体现精确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: It's known that it has many advantages.，First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。
【点睛】
本文规定以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格内容提醒，写一篇短文，体现自已对共享单车见解和提议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中三个要点：首先，论述共享单车长处；另一方面，列举共享单车带来问题；最终，根据问题给出个人提议。

2．书面体现
根据如下提醒，写一篇简介我朋友张阳短文。
基本状况
张阳，阳光中学九年级二班学生
爱好爱好
1. 喜欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读多种类型书，由于……
2.喜欢观鸟。每年记录两次鸟儿数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面变化。
优秀事迹
上个月把零花钱捐给了但愿工程
未来梦想
1. 但愿成为连接家乡到上海路段高铁总工程师
2. 每个人为保护环境都可以做某些变化。如：…….（举1例）

规定：1）体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有有关信息，并合适发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.
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【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句构造综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3．书面体现
每年4月23日是世界读书日，这个纪念日意义在于推进更多人去阅读。假如你校将开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动主题，向全校同学发出倡议。
读书意义
1. 获取知识，开阔视野
2. 使人愉悦，益于学习
3. ……（自由发挥）
现实状况
1. 作业多，无良好读书习惯
2. 不懂得读什么书，不会选择
倡议
……（至少两点）

注意：1. 词数90左右。短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可合适发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 短文中不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
Dear classmates,
Reading is very important in our daily life.
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Let’s start reading now!
【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life．
First of all，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books．It can also help to open up a whole new world to us．Second，reading will/can make us clever and happy．It is good for our study and it can help us grow up．Third，reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful．
However，there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don't have enough time for reading．Moreover，some of us don't have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet．
In my opinion，our school can have a"Reading Week"once a term．Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library．We must spend more time reading some useful books．As a result，we can have a better future．
Let's start reading now!
【解析】亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如first of all，all kinds of books，help to do，be good for，more and further，so much，spend too much time doing，search the Internet，in my opinion，as a result等。同步First of all，/ Second，/ Third等时间副词和However/ Moreover / As a result等构造副词运用，既使文章思绪清晰、层次分明，还丰富了习作内容，使体现多样，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

4．书面体现
根据规定完毕短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定位置上。
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈压岁钱（lucky money）。伴随生活水平提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该怎样管理自已钱，让自已钱用得更故意义？请结合自已实际写一篇文章，词数 80 词以上，文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下：
1. 你压岁钱来源和用途；
2. 对合理使用压岁钱提议（至少 3 点）；
3. 呼吁大家节省用钱，把自已压岁钱用在最需要、最故意义地方。
【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.
In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.
All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.
【解析】
【详解】
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈压岁钱（luckymoney）。伴随生活水平提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该怎样管理自已钱，让自已钱用得更故意义？这是一篇给材料作文，本题所给材料比较详细，写作中注意将所给内容体现出来，不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文重要使用人称就是第一人称，时态为一般目前时态，注意谓语动词变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。
【点睛】
文章使用了很好短语和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。

5．　　近年来雾霾天气在中国许多都市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括：
1. 雾霾危害 2. 雾霾产生原因（2个） 3. 应对雾霾措施（3个）
提醒：雾霾 smog poisonous 有毒
注意：1. 词数110左右； 2. 可以合适增长细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
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【答案】　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.
　　How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.
　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. 　　Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们根据提醒来简介有关雾霾状况，题目中给出了写作内容，我们应将这些内容用对英语体现出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意体现层次和条理。另一方面要注意使用对时态和人称，通过度析可知，这篇短文应使用一般目前时态，谓语动词用原形，尤其要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一种写作难点。最终要注意英语体现习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上使用是不一样，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当词汇和句型来体现，语法规范。还应使用某些很好句型或者短语，增强文章体现力。

6．书面体现
假如你是李明，你英国笔友Jack来信问询你家乡与否有雾霾天气，状况怎样。请你按照如下提醒给他回一封e-mail。
内容如下：
1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生多次雾霾天气；
2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气危害，正在采用多种措施减少其发生；
3. 你在平常生活中打算为此做些什么。
参照词汇：雾霾haze
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右，信件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.
The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .
People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.
As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以李明身份给自已英国笔友写信，告诉他有关家乡雾霾状况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提醒，来组织语言，充实内容。首先简介去年家乡雾霾状况严重；然后简介为减少雾霾人们采用了某些措施；最终简介一下你自已在平常生活中应当怎么做。因此文章应重要提成三段，一种内容一段。文章内容中论述状况不一，时态不能统一，根据体现需要使用对时态，注意谓语动词对形式。写作时，应注意英语句式体现习惯和汉语是不一样，不能逐词翻译，应从句子整体考虑，写完整句子，运用简单句基本句型，使用恰当词汇和短语。为提高文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文意连贯，体现流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文中作者根据题目规定简介了自已家乡治理雾霾状况，并结合自身实际状况，讲述了自已平常生活中是怎样做。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中规定所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章构造清晰，提成了三段，每一段中心明确，意思体现清晰、明了。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，作者根据体现需要使用了一般过去时、一般未来时态和一般未来时态，动词形式变化精确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式体现符合英语习惯。句子构造以简单句为主，也使用了某些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中很好句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.等。

7．书面体现
某英文报举行“家乡变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提醒，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右短文，不必逐字逐句翻译。
过去
生活条件差，道路狭窄，房屋破旧。
污染严重，垃圾遍地。
......（合适发挥一至两点）
目前
环境：政府采用措施来改善污染，都市变得越来越整洁。
生活：住房宽敞明亮；许多人搬进了新公寓。越来越多人有自已汽车；生活舒适。
交通：新飞机场已投入使用数年。be in use（投入使用）；
旅游：每年有成千上万来自各地游客。
未来
但愿……（两点）

规定：1. 短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，并合适发挥，使短文连贯穿顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等有关信息。
Changes my hometown
My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, _______________________________________________________________
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【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.I hope my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以The Changes in My Hometown为题，简介一下自已家乡这些年来发生变化。题目中用表格形式，给我们对比家乡过去和目前，我们应用对英语将这些内容体现出来，并对未来提出两点但愿。审题可知，作文基本框架和大概内容均有了，需要注意是在描写过去时候，需要合适发挥一到两点；尚有对未来但愿也需要学生自已发挥。这两个地方需要学生们展开想象，合剪发挥，注意要与文章其他部分可以很好结合起来，内容也要统一，符合题目规定，合情合理。体现时，需要注意英语体现习惯和汉语是不一样，不能逐词翻译表格中语句，而应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当词汇、短语和句型来体现。注意句式多变，长短句结合、简单句、并列句或复合句穿插使用，提高文章档次。语句之间注意使用合适连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是