2025年九年级上册英语书面表达解题技巧超强及练习题含答案.doc

九年级上册英语书面体现解题技巧(超强)及练习题(含答案)

一、英语书面体现
1．你有无由于没能好好管理时间而影响了学习经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你见解。
内容包括：1.你没完毕学习任务经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对怎样管理好时间给出几点提议。
作文规定：1.短文须包括所有提醒内容，可合适发挥。2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.
I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.
How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。而特殊非谓语动词构造Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

2．书面体现
假如你是九年级学生李华，你美国笔友Billy发来邮件问询你平时锻炼状况。请你根据如下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并提议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
写作要点：
1. 你近来正忙于为即将到来体育测试（physical test）做准备。
2. 简介你平时锻炼状况：
（1）每天锻炼时间：不到一种半小时。
（2）偶尔不锻炼原因：作业多，没时间。
（3）擅长体育运动：球类运动。
3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。
写作规定：
1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
2. 可合适加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，体现精确，条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. ___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.
I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.
Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，简介自已平时锻炼状况，并提议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头表达很快乐收到Billy来信，接下来简介我平时锻炼状况，最终指出锻炼给我带来好处以及我提议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

3．伴随社会发展，通讯方式从远古时代书信到当今互联网，经历着巨大变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具使用及见解。内容包括：
1. 你喜欢使用通讯方式有哪些？
2. 它们长处和缺陷是什么？
3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？
规定：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me,
【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.
Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具使用及见解。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我喜欢使用通讯方式有哪些；接下来简介它们长处和缺陷是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最终呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。此处prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

4． 近来一份学生体质健康调查成果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提醒内容，用英语写一篇短文，并刊登自已观点。
现 状
大概70%学生眼睛近视
重要原因
1. 睡眠局限性
2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
防止措施
1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动
2. 养成对用眼习惯
你观点
… ….（至少一条）

参照词汇：近视 shortsighted
规定：
（1）词数：80～100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可合适发挥。
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,
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【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。根据题干规定可知，本篇文章重要使用一般目前时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠局限性（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视措施：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成对用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应当理解保护眼睛重要性，尽最大努力保护我们眼睛。（I think ⋅⋅⋅；try one's best to do sth.）。
常用重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。

5．书面体现
根据如下提醒，写一篇简介我朋友张阳短文。
基本状况
张阳，阳光中学九年级二班学生
爱好爱好
1. 喜欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读多种类型书，由于……
2.喜欢观鸟。每年记录两次鸟儿数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面变化。
优秀事迹
上个月把零花钱捐给了但愿工程
未来梦想
1. 但愿成为连接家乡到上海路段高铁总工程师
2. 每个人为保护环境都可以做某些变化。如：…….（举1例）

规定：1）体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有有关信息，并合适发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句构造综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

6．书面体现
某英文报举行“家乡变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提醒，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右短文，不必逐字逐句翻译。
过去
生活条件差，道路狭窄，房屋破旧。
污染严重，垃圾遍地。
......（合适发挥一至两点）
目前
环境：政府采用措施来改善污染，都市变得越来越整洁。
生活：住房宽敞明亮；许多人搬进了新公寓。越来越多人有自已汽车；生活舒适。
交通：新飞机场已投入使用数年。be in use（投入使用）；
旅游：每年有成千上万来自各地游客。
未来
但愿……（两点）

规定：1. 短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，并合适发挥，使短文连贯穿顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等有关信息。
Changes my hometown
My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, _______________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.I hope my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以The Changes in My Hometown为题，简介一下自已家乡这些年来发生变化。题目中用表格形式，给我们对比家乡过去和目前，我们应用对英语将这些内容体现出来，并对未来提出两点但愿。审题可知，作文基本框架和大概内容均有了，需要注意是在描写过去时候，需要合适发挥一到两点；尚有对未来但愿也需要学生自已发挥。这两个地方需要学生们展开想象，合剪发挥，注意要与文章其他部分可以很好结合起来，内容也要统一，符合题目规定，合情合理。体现时，需要注意英语体现习惯和汉语是不一样，不能逐词翻译表格中语句，而应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当词汇、短语和句型来体现。注意句式多变，长短句结合、简单句、并列句或复合句穿插使用，提高文章档次。语句之间注意使用合适连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者按照题目规定，简介了自已家乡这些年来变化。文章是按照时间次序，先简介了家乡过去面貌，这一部分使用了过去时态，谓语动词都变成了过去式，形式精确。然后是家乡目前样子，这里重要以一般目前时态为主。最终对家乡未来体现了自已愿望。整篇文章内容充实、完整，论述清晰、条理，构造合理。文章中语言得体，语句通顺，句式体现符合英语习惯，语法规范、精确。短文里还使用了某些很好短语和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.等等。

7． 书面体现
请将短文写在答题卡对应位置上。
一直以来，同学们对作业持有不一样观点。在你班主题班会上，同学们进行了“Is daily homework necessary？”讨论，请你根据提醒和规定，并结合自已实际经验，刊登你观点。
Yes
No

Help us understand what we have learned；
Practice makes prefect；...

Take up too much time；
Make us less interested in studying；...

Your opinion：

规定：
1．80词以上。
2．文中不得出现真实人名、校名。
【答案】Dear students，
I'm glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it's necessary for us to do daily homework.
Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．
In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn't be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.
That's all. Thanks.
【解析】写作分析：审题之后能明白写作任务是要写出一篇小论文，讨论每日作业究竟是不是必要。首先需要陈说正反两方面观点，另一方面结合自已实际经验，刊登自已观点。写作过程中要注意逻辑精确，注意对使用连词，借助实例、实际经验来佐证自已观点。
写作亮点：首先用一种自然段来阐明写作主题，体现出自已观点（认为作业是很必要），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…这样句型。另一方面，开始详细陈说观点，陈说时候要合适使用实例，有关用到短语有have some difficulties in doing在做…时候有困难，review the knowledge复习知识，think over the difficulties来回思考难点，Little by little一点一点地。恰当谚语也为文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧这个谚语。最终可以用说理方式来简介做作业必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我们技能，在这里也有一点亮点，就是说作业也要有变化性，要丰富多彩，体现了作者深度思考，总体来说杰出地完毕了既定写作任务。

8．共享单车自从在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们追捧，变化了人们出行方式，但同步也遇到了某些挑战，是国民素质“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息提醒，给二十一世纪英文报写一篇有关共享单车见解稿件。
社会现实状况
自从出现，饱受赞誉。
诸多优势
随地可见，出行以便
有益健康，减少污染
费用不高，承担得起
存在问题
未及时归还
占道挡路
你观点
我认为------

参照词汇：公共自行车public bicycles
注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提醒内容，规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
2.表格中“你观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做合适发挥。
3.词数在90个左右，文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.
【解析】这是一篇材料作文，规定给英文报社写一篇投稿，简介对共享单车见解。作文应包括4个重要内容，一种是社会现实状况，第二个长处，第三是存在问题，最终刊登个人观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并合适发挥。要注意上下文连贯，将这些内容有机连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用某些好句型和短语，注意对时态和语态以及谓语动词形式，还需要注意英语体现和汉语习惯不一样，让整篇短文体现流畅。

9．为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀老式文化, 某双语杂志将举行征文活动来简介中国经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一种选题。请你根据下面内容提醒, 用英语写一篇短文参与此活动。
内容提醒：
1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口
2. 通过简介这个故事, 刊登你见解或者观点。
规定：
1. 可以合适增长细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右.
2. 不得在作文中出现学校真实名称、老师和同学真实姓名。
【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called