unit4-Wildlife-protection-writing-写作-保护动物市公开课一等奖省赛.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,写作专题突破,【写作要求】,假如你是李华，上周日去动物园，看到游客对动物乱扔石子甚至往一头熊头上泼水，对此你感到非常生气。现在请你用英语就此事给某报社编辑写封信，并提出你提议；请求该报帮着呼吁人们保护和爱护动物。,要求：词数,120,左右。,1/21,【审题谋篇】,第一自然段为总写：写明写信目标，你感受(应用普通现在时态)。,第二段：反应你所见所闻，应用普通过去时态。,第三段：你提议，应用普通现在时和未来时态。,最终一段：请求该报帮助。,本文应用第一人称；能够用first，second，but，even等词连接或过渡。,2/21,【写作关键点】,1.我写信是要告诉你上星期天我在动物园经历。,(1)_you about my experience in the zoo last Sunday.,(2)Here I write to tell you about_ in the zoo last Sunday.,答案：,(1)Im writing to tell,(2)what I saw,3/21,2有很多动物被养在动物园内，它们好像没有得到很好对待。,(1)There were many animals_in the zoo and _they were not being treated well.,(2)Many animals_and they_,_treated well.,(3)_many animals_ were not being treated well.,4/21,答案：,(1)kept；it seemed that,(2)were kept in the zoo；seemed not to be,(3)It seemed that；kept in the zoo,3首先要教育人们：动物是我们朋友。动物对人们生活主要性。,(1)First we should make people know that_,_and_.,5/21,(2)_，we should tell people_ animals and that they are our friends.,(3)_，we should make people know animals are our friends and important to peoples life.,答案：,(1)animals are our friends；important to peoples life,(2)Firstly；the importance of,(3)First of al,6/21,4任何虐待动物人都要被罚款。,(1)_badly should be fined.,(2)_badly should be fined.,(3)_badly should be fined.,答案：,(1)Anyone who treats animals,(2)Whoever treats animals,(3)Those who treat animals,7/21,5我提议把动物放回到自然界去。,(1)I suggest that_in nature.,(2)_is that these animals should be set free in nature.,(3)_that these animals should be set free in nature.,答案：,(1)those animals should be set free,(2)My suggestion,(3)It is my suggestion,8/21,【连句成篇】,_,_,_,_,_,9/21,【佳作观赏】,Dear Editor，,Here I write to tell you about my experience in the zoo last Sunday.I feel terribly sorry and ashamed of what people did to the animals.,There were many animals kept in the zoo and it seemed that they were not being treated well.I saw many visitors throw some stones at them and some visitors even poured water onto a big bears head.Some people just looked and laughed，but no one thought those were wrong.,10/21,Here is what we should do.First we should make people know animals are our friends and important to us.Second anyone who treats animals badly should be fined.Last,，,if people cant stop doing so,，,my suggestion is that these animals be set free in nature.,I hope you can help educate people to love and respect animals.Thank you.,Yours sincerely,，,Li Hua,11/21,【类文点津】,写一封反应问题或提意见、征求意见信,1,普通书信体组成：,正式信件,(,多用于外交、商务、社交等场所,),：开头,(start),，普通用,Dear,或,Dear,姓,/,身份,/,职务等，如,Dear editor,，,Dear mayor,，,or Dear Smith.,正文,(body),：正式信件讲话要含蓄一点，用词要慎重一些。,结尾,(ending),：,Yours sincerely,，,Sincerely,，,Sincerely yours,，,Yours truly,，,Yours faithfully,等较正式用语。,12/21,非正式信件(多用于亲友、同学、同事之间),开头：Hi，My dear；Dearest等。,正文：因彼此情谊笃厚，讲话能够直率一点、开门见山，意见要中肯。,结束语：Love，Cheers，Regards，Best wishes，Yours等相对随便词语。,2惯用表示：,反应现象惯用开头句式：,Im writing to tell you that.,Recently we have made a survey that.,13/21,Many people are worried about.,It worries more and more people that.,提出办法惯用句式：,We intend to.to help/save/protect.,We are ready to call on people to.,We feel like doing.to teach the illegal hunters a lesson.,Wed rather not.but do.,Wed like to.to punish those who do harm to wildlife.,14/21,征求对方支持惯用表示：,We need your support to made more and more people.,Would you please help us to.by.?,Well appreciate it if you can.,In order to.，we need.,.so that.,I hope that I can get help from.,I expect that you can.,15/21,As we know，the number of some,wild,plants and animals has already,decreased,and some animals have already,died out,.So it is high time for us to,pay,much,attention to wildlife protection,.But how can we prevent endangered animals from being,in danger of,disappearing？Firstly，we should,protect,them,from,being,hunted,.Its of,importance,to educate people to regard animals as our friends.Those who,词语串串练,16/21,want to get large,income,from hunting animals for their,fur,should be punished.Secondly，some nature,reserves,and,zones,should be set,so that,animals can live,in peace,.It is also necessary to,employ,some people to look after them.Only in this way will animals not be,harmed,more often.Thirdly，the habit of eating the meat of some,endangered,animals should be got rid of.,According to,some reports，some restaurants are still serving such dishes now.The government should,17/21,18/21,正如我们大家所知，野生动植物,数目已经降低，一些动物也已经灭,绝了。所以是时候我们该亲密注意,保护野生动植物了。不过我们怎样能够阻止濒临灭绝动物面临消失危险呢？首先，我们应该保护它们免遭捕杀。教育人们把动物看作是我们朋友很主要。那些想经过猎杀动物获取它们毛皮而取得暴利(income 收入)人应该受到处罚。第二，应该设置一些自然保护区和保护带，为,19/21,是动物能够平静地生活。雇用一些人照看他们也是有必要。只有这么动物才不会经常受到伤害。第三，应该摒弃吃濒危动物习惯。据报道，有饭店现在依然供给这类菜肴。政府应该制订更强有力法律来阻止类似事件再次发生。假如这么，濒危动物任人摆布(mercy仁慈；宽恕)日子将一去不复返。假如我们每个人都有保护野生动植物意识，那么保护野生动植物气氛必定会形成。这对人类和野生动植物来说将会是一个幸福结局。,20/21,本部分内容讲解结束,点此进入课件目录,按ESC键退出全屏播放,谢谢使用,21/21,