英语作文模板市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件.pptx

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,CET-4作文模版汇总,By:Pizza.Chen,第1页,第1页,.Writing,（批驳分析类）,写作模式,参考范文,What Attitude Should We Take to Sth.,1.社会上对某事物错误观念,2.分析批驳其错误所在,3.给出如何看待该事物提议,第2页,第2页,.Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,上一页,写作模式（批驳分析类）,1),With the,arrival/birth,of,sth.is becoming more and more,in our life,.,2),Hit/Affected,with this trend,some/many people come to believe/contend that,.,(错误观念),3),But t,heir viewpoint/belief could not arouse any echo in my mind,.,(作者立场),4),It is true that sth.is,a key ingredient,in ones,(让步法分析),5),On any scale of,in fact,there is almost nothing heavier than sth.,6),If we see sth.in its true colors,however,it is,Back,第3页,第3页,.Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,上一页,nothing but,(批驳分析I),7),.,(进一步阐述),8),And,moreover,laying any undue stress on sth.may lead one to,as can be easily seen in the cases of,(,批驳分析II),9),Therefore,it is necessary,to,take a correct,attitude towards,sth,.,10),On the one hand,(正确见解I),11),On the other,.,(正确见解II,),12),In sum,sth.,means,but not,to our life,.,(结论句),Back,第4页,第4页,.Writing,Back,What Attitude Should We Take to Money,社会上对金钱错误观念。,分析批驳其错误所在。,给出如何正确看待金钱提议。,下一页,上一页,第5页,第5页,1),With the arrival of,market-based economy,money,is becoming more and more,important,in our life,.,2),Hit with this trend,many people come to believe that,money is above everything else in their life.,3),But their belief could not arouse any echo in my mind,.,4),It is true that,money,is a key ingredient in ones,struggle towards happiness,without,.Writing,Reference model:,What Attitude Should We Take to Money,下一页,上一页,Back,第6页,第6页,which,for example,there would be no way to go to college or form a family.,5),On any scale of,ones daily worry,in fact,there is almost nothing heavier than,money.,6),If we see it in its true colors,however,money,is nothing but,a,means to an end.,7),Money can buy us food,but not appetite;medicine,but not health;diplomas,but not knowledge;and days of joy,but not the whole life of happiness.,8),And moreover,laying any undue stress on money may lead one to,stop at nothing in making it,as,.Writing,上一页,下一页,Back,第7页,第7页,can be easily seen in the cases of,most corrupt officials.,9),Therefore,it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards money,.,10),On the one hand,money is vital to our daily life,in which case,it is wise of you to spend not where you may save.,11),On the other,money is something to be plowed into something more important,so it is better to spare not where you must spend.,12),In sum,money means something but not everything to our life.,.Writing,上一页,THE END,第8页,第8页,.Writing,（分析提议类）,写作模式,参考范文,Effects of Sth.On Sb./Sth.Else,1.分析某事物正面效应,2.分析某事物负面效应,3.给出如何看待该事物提议,第9页,第9页,.Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,写作模式（分析提议类）,1),As is known to all,sth,.does bring a lot of benefits to,sb./sth.else,.,2),First,it can greatly,strengthen,thereby changing for the better,.,(正面分析I),3),Besides,it can,make/render sb./sth.else better able to,(正面分析II),4),And best of all,it can help sb,.,(正面分析III),5）,But all the above does not mean/follow that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects sth.,brings about,.,6）,If,as a succession,Back,第10页,第10页,.Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,上一页,of scientific studies,reveals/implies/suggests,there are more chances that,(负面分析I),7),In addition,the more.,the worse.,(负面分析II),8),And worst of all,(负面分析III),9),Therefore,a scientific approach,must be,adopted to,the problem of,sth,.,10),On the one hand,(提议I),11),On the other,.,(提议II),12),In sum,sth,.can do,sb./sth.else,good or harm,all depending on,(结论句),Back,第11页,第11页,1.分析体育锻炼给我们带来益处。,2.分析体育锻炼给我们带来害处。,3.给出如何参与体育锻炼提议。,.Writing,The Effects of Exercise on Our Health,下一页,上一页,Back,第12页,第12页,1),As is known to all,exercise,does bring a lot of benefits to,our health.,2),First,it can greatly strengthen,our hearts,lungs,bones and muscles,thereby changing,our whole health,for the better,.,3),Besides,it can make,our brains,better able to,react to what is going on around us.,4),And best of all,it can help us,breed optimism about our tough life.,.Writing,Reference model:,The Effects of Exercise on Our Health,下一页,上一页,Back,第13页,第13页,5),But all the above does not mean that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects,exercise,brings about,.,6),If,you are normally inactive and then,contrary to your usual habit,start a program of undue,exercise,as a succession of scientific studies reveals,there are more chances that,you have yourself injured.,7),In addition,the more,exercise those on a fat-reducing diet take,the more loss of iron they will suffer and,the worse,their health will get.,8),And,.Writing,上一页,下一页,Back,第14页,第14页,worst of all,continual as well as excessive exercise,can result in,sudden death.,9),Therefore,a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of,exercise.,10),On the one hand,our physical exercise,must be based on,both progressiveness and regularity.,11),On the other,we must go in for physical exercise according to local as well as health conditions of our own.,12),In sum,exercise,can do us,good or harm,all depending on,how we make use of it.,.Writing,上一页,THE END,第15页,第15页,.Writing,A,Letter to the College President,写作模式,参考范文,（分析提议类）,1.,就学校一些改变给校长写封信,2.,分析改变主要表现在哪些方面,3.,提出（进一步）改进意见,第16页,第16页,.Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,上一页,写作模式（分析提议）,1),I am,delighted(distressed),to,find,there have been favorable(unfavorable)changes in,(议论主题),since I came here.,2),From my angle of view,these changes,indicate,that what you have done is,in(out of)line with,.,(作者态度,),3),In the long run,they will produce more positive(negative)effect on.,4),Such desirable(undesirable)changes can be found in the aspects as follows.,5),First,Back,第17页,第17页,.Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,上一页,(分析I),6）,Second,.,(,分析II),7）,And best(worst)of all,(,分析III),8),.,(进一步阐述),9),But all the foregoing does not mean that there is little room for further improvement in(that there is little you can do about),10),Instead,to enrich(reverse),a richer variety(a better health)can be added to,(提议I),11),And meanwhile,.,(提议II),12),It should be born in mind that,(结论句),Back,第18页,第18页,就校园生活可喜改变给校长写封信。,分析该改变表现在哪些方面。,提出进一步改进提议。,.Writing,A Letter to the College President,下一页,上一页,Back,第19页,第19页,1),I am delighted to find there have been favorable changes in,our campus life,since I came here,.,2),From my angle of view,these changes indicate what you have done is in line with,the interests of undergraduates,.,3),In the long run,they will produce more positive effect on,our growth.,4),Such desirable changes can be found in the aspects as follows,.,5),First,our dining,.Writing,Reference model:,A Letter to the College President,下一页,上一页,Back,第20页,第20页,conditions have turned for the better,thus ending our everyday worry about where to satisfy our hunger.,6),Second,your faculties have paid as much attention to our emotional world as to our intellectual growth,which in turn lends much warmth of family to our life.,7),And best of all,we find the campus a more pleasant place to live on.,8),As a result of your efforts,we now have more places to go to for recreation,such as cafes,net bars,fitness centers and reading rooms.,.Writing,上一页,下一页,Back,第21页,第21页,9),But all the foregoing does not mean that there is little room for further improvement in,our college life.,10),Instead,to enrich,our life here to the fullest,a richer variety should be added to,our spare time as well as our curriculums.,11),And meanwhile,we should be allowed more access to scientific research,social practice and the frontier of our own,fields.,12),It should be born in mind that,the purpose of our college life is to prepare us for the different needs of tomorrows society.,.Writing,上一页,THE END,第22页,第22页,.Writing,（分析提议类）,写作模式,参考范文,How to Do Something,1.,某一事物现实状况,2.,分析该事物主要性(或危害性社会意义等),3.,如何看待该事物,第23页,第23页,.Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,上一页,写作模式（分析提议类）,1),Much to our distress/delight/surprise,these years have seen,the popularity/worsening/much improvement/a widespread neglect,of,sth,.,(议论主题),in,society,.,2),According to a,recent/official report/survey/opinion poll,.,(佐证陈说),3),If this current is allowed to run its course,things,are bound to turn for the better/worse,.,(Para.1),Back,第24页,第24页,.Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,上一页,4)The,importance/harmfulness/significance of sth.,to sb./sth.else,(however),can be seen from the perspectives as follows.5),In the first place,(,分析I),6),In the second,.,(分析II),7),And above all,(分析III),8),To sum up,.,(归纳总结),(Para.2),Back,第25页,第25页,.Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,上一页,9)So the,most pressing for us/basic problem,now is how to 10)In my opinion,the first step should be focused upon,(提议I),11)Then,greater efforts,must be made to.,(提议II),12),In one word,where there is,there is,(结论句),(Para.3),Back,第26页,第26页,.Writing,How to Conduct Patriotic Education Among the Youth of Today,1.我国爱国主义教育现实状况。,2.分析爱国主义教育主要意义。,3.如何在青少年中开展爱国主义教育？,下一页,上一页,Back,第27页,第27页,1)Much to our distress,these years have seen a widespread neglect of patriotic education in our society.2)According to some official reports,many patriotic education centers have been closed down or kept open to the public for other more profitable purposes while many of our national heroes have given way to todays pop stars in youths minds.3)If this current is allowed to run its course,I am afraid,things are bound to turn for the worse,with less and less sense of patriotism left in the youth.,.Writing,下一页,上一页,Back,第28页,第28页,4),The significance of,patriotic education,to,our society,however,can be seen from the perspectives as follows,.,5),In the first place,the patriotic education can make youth more aware of the glorious history and culture of our nation,thus building up their sense of pride as Chinese.,6),In the second,the patriotic education helps youth value todays hard-earned life so as to hold,.Writing,上一页,下一页,Back,第29页,第29页,dearer their golden chances of enriching themselves with knowledge in peace.,7),And above all,the patriotic education can push youth to draw upon more of their capabilities in order to make tomorrows life better than todays and leave behind themselves more highlights for the nations culture.,8),To sum up,patriotic education is a key ingredient in the all-round development of youth.,.Writing,上一页,下一页,Back,第30页,第30页,9),So the most pressing for us now is how to,effectively inculcate patriotism in the youth of today,.,10),In my opinion,the first step should be focused upon,giving fuller play to the potentials of patriotic education centers instead of running them for the purpose of making money.,11),Then,greater efforts must be made to,integrate the patriotic education into the curriculums throughout youths education.,12),In one word,where there is,an effective patriotic education of youth,there is,a greater enhancement of national cohesiveness.,.Writing,上一页,THE END,Back,第31页,第31页,My Way of Seeing Something,1.人们从不同角度对待某一事物,2.我看法是(说明理由),(理由陈说类),.Writing,写作模式,参考范文,第32页,第32页,.Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,写作模式（理由陈说类）,1),Something,may be many things to many people.,2),Some may see it as while others may view it as,(,人们见解举例,),3),As far as I am concerned,however,I would prefer to value it as,(,我见解,),(Para.I),Back,第33页,第33页,.Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,上一页,4),My insight into,sth.,(My outlook on,sth.,/My understanding of,sth.,),is bound up with,three major factors.,5),Primarily,sth.,is so that,(理由I),6),(进一步阐述),7),Secondly,sth.,is also,(理由II),8),.,(进一步阐述),9),And most of all,(,理由III),10),(进一步阐述),(Para.II),Back,第34页,第34页,.Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,上一页,11),I have(not)much,freedom/option,in this matter,but I have never found any other way of seeing,sth.,more reasonable and acceptable,than mine.,12),Thus,I will,leave no stone unturned during the course of,in order to,pave the way for,.,(Para.III),Back,第35页,第35页,.Writing,My Way of Seeing Life,1.人们从不同角度对待人生,2.我所推崇看法是(说明理由),下一页,上一页,Back,第36页,第36页,.Writing,My Way of Seeing Life,下一页,上一页,1),Life may be many things to many people.,2),Some may see it as,building up as much material wealth as possible,while others may view it as,enjoying to the fullest the pleasures each day offers.,3),As far as I am concerned,however,I would prefer to value it as,my sole chance to enrich myself with knowledge first,then to serve the society with all my heart,and finally to leave the world without any regrets.,Back,第37页,第37页,.Writing,上一页,下一页,4),My outlook on,life,is bound up with three major factors.,5),Primarily,life,is so,wondrous,that,I am eager to explore it.,6),Set your heart on a mystery and you can find something new;attach more of your mind to a challenge and you can get a sense of success,all of which,however,depends on how much knowledge you have equipped yourself with first.,7),Secondly,life,is also,short to any,Back,第38页,第38页,.Writing,上一页,下一页,individual like me.,8),The flower you have just kissed for the first time is now fading away while the love from others you have come to cherish more is already on the wane.,9),And most of all,both wondrousness and shortness of life push me to seize every golden minute and every golden chance.,10),Once I idle away the time I am supposed to grasp to study or work for the people,there will be no more hope of making up for it.,Back,第39页,第39页,.Writing,上一页,THE END,11),I have much option in this matter,but I have never found any other way of seeing,life,more reasonable and acceptable than mine.,12),Thus,I will leave no stone unturned during the course of,my college studies,in order to pave the way for,my meaningful and colorful life.,第40页,第40页,.,Writing,（原因分析类）,写作模式,参考范文,The Changes in Something,1.,简述某一事物改变情况,2.,阐明引起改变原因,3.,分析其影响或走向,第41页,第41页,Changes in Great Natural Disasters Worldwide,下一页,.,Writing,Back,第42页,第42页,.,Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,上一页,写作模式（原因分析类）,1),As can be seen from the,graph/table/diagram,there have been,drastic/considerable/unfavorable,changes in,(议论主题),over the past period from _ to _.,2),To be concrete,only in _(year)while/whereas the ratio(s)went up toin _(year,).,(改变概述),3),These changes are most,disturbing,so it is necessary for us to go into the whys and wherefores of them first.,(Para.1),Back,第43页,第43页,.,Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,上一页,4),Some changes,such as,result from,but many others have much to do with,5),In the first place,mans,excessive,exploitation of has,done a lasting damage to,only to,(原因,分析I),6,),(进一步阐明),7),In the second,in order to,man has had to overwork,which in turn,has accelerated,(,原因,分析II),8),In the third,mans blind application of,has,caused permanent changes,in,(,原因,分析III),9),Among these changes,are,.,(,进一步阐明,),(Para.2),Back,第44页,第44页,.,Writing,（划线部分可替换）,下一页,上一页,10),The list of causes could go on,but they are already enough to indicate that,these changes are producing more and more,negative effects on the world,.,11),These changes not only,but also,(分析),12),If,allowed to run its course,I,firmly believe,/I,am afraid,this trend will certainly,bring more,harm,/threats,to,our society,/,life,.,(结论句),(Para.3),Back,第45页,第45页,.,Writing,The Changes in Great Natural Disasters Worldwide,1.简述所给图表中改变。,2.阐明引起改变主要原因。,3.分析这些改变对全球影响。,下一页,上一页,Back,第46页,第46页,1),As can be seen from the graph,there have been rapid changes in the great natural disast