中考英语作文专题复习指导省名师优质课赛课获奖课件市赛课一等奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢,Writing,中考作文指导,第1页,作文中,应防止,几个常见,语言错误,：,时态错误（扣分多，一个时态错误扣分在,1,分左右）。,中国式英语（不正确英文表示会让,整句不得分,）。,单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定要,过关,）。,介词,代词，非谓语动词或形容词副词不正确使用（对单词,词性,要,熟悉,）。,名词单复数（,细心,就能够防止错）。,第2页,另外作文中书写不规范，卷面不整齐也是要失分（,中考中有,12,分卷面整齐分，这两分不能丢！,）。,处理方法：,平时认真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽可能降低涂改。,第3页,一审：审题抓点，确定人称、时态与体裁,How,can we,write,a,good,composition?,详细做法：,用笔勾画,第4页,假如你是王林。你所在学校“爱心俱乐部,(Helping Hands Club)”,将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部，请依据下面表格和图片内容，用英语写一封自荐信。,姓名,王林,性别,男,本人特点,身体健康；学习刻苦；乐于助人；与同学友好相处,“,爱心”表现,（见图片）,加入原因,1交到更多朋友 2.帮到更多人,人称：,_;,时态：,_;,体裁：,_,I,书信,普通现在时,am/is/are/V,原,Writing,齐头式，都靠左；缩进式，空格，靠右。,第5页,要求：,1.,表示清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；,2.,关键点须包含表格和四幅图片中信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等；,3.,词数：,70,左右。,第6页,Para 1,：,1.,自我介绍,姓名,_,性别,_,健康,_,乐于助人,be happy to help others,和,相处好,_,2.,引入话题（中心句）我想加入爱心俱乐部。,_,Para 2:,关键点,:,1.,爱心表现,1,：,_,2.,爱心表现,2,：,_,3.,爱心表现,3,：,_,4.,加入原因,1,：,_,5.,加入原因,2,：,_,Para 3,：总结提升,_,二列：三段式；关键点、关键词句,Writing,Wang Lin,boy,healthy,be good with.,I want to join.,help.with,give seats to others,help clean up the park,help more people,make more friends,I hope you,will agree with me.,第7页,Dear Sir or Madam,_,Yours,Wang Lin,三连：连词成句，连句成篇,Writing,准确性是第一位；,没有中式英语；,用熟悉句型结构。,第8页,“,爱心”表现,(examples),Picture 1,help,with,我,I,often,help classmates with lessons.,第9页,Picture 2,help,cross,“,爱心”表现,(examples),I,help old people cross the road,on my way home,.,第10页,Picture 3,“,爱心”表现,(examples),give my seat to,I usually,give my seat to people in need,on a bus,.,第11页,“,爱心”表现,(examples),Picture 4,clean up the park,I sometimes,help clean up the park.,第12页,“,爱心”表现,(examples),1.I,often help classmates with lessons.,2.I help old people cross the road on my way home.,3.I usually give my seat to people in need on a bus.,4.I sometimes help clean up the park.,第13页,四改：一看关键点是否齐全，字数是否达标，,二看单词拼写、动词形式、名词单复、介词与,be,动词,Writing,1315,分：包含内容关键点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表示清 楚，书写整齐。,1012,分：基本包含关键点，遗漏少许次关键点；语言有少许错误；行文基本连贯，表示基本清楚。,69,分：包含部分关键点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。,35,分：关键点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表示，或只誊录单词。,02,分：白卷或文不对题。,第14页,Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from class1 Grade 9.Id like,be a member of the Helping Hands Club.,I am healthy.I work hardly at my lessons.I like helping others.,and often help classmates with their lesson .On my way home,I often help old people cross the road.On a bus,I always gave my seat to people in need.Sometimes,I help to clean up the park.,If I join the club,I will be able to make more friends.Besides,he can do more for others.,Ill glad if I can join the club.I hope you will agree with me.,Yours,Wang Lin,C,to,lesson,s,g,i,ve,I,be,1,分,其它六处错扣,2,分,只好,12,分,第15页,五誊：书写美观规范，不作任何修改,规范誊写在作文本上。,Homework,第16页,Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9.Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club.,I am healthy.I work hard at my lessons.I like helping others,I get on well with my classmates.If I join the club,I will be able to make more friends.Besides,I can do more for others.,Yours,Wang Lin,Ill be glad if I can join the club.I hope you will agree with me.,and often help classmates with their lessons.On my way home,I often help old people cross the road.On a bus,I always give my seat to people in need.Sometimes,I help to clean up the park.,第17页,Let,s practice!,第18页,Review:,第一步就是要,认真审题,，明确写作体裁、要求和提醒关键点,第二步就是要,列出写作提要,，,依据段落整理写作关键点，写出开头语和结语（点题）,。,写作前：,确定人称、时态,写作后：,检验,第19页,抄,组,集,连,抓,审,作文,组段成篇，,加主题句,审清题意，,构建框架,连词成句，变换句式,抓住关键点，,列关键词,Summary,集句成段，添连接词,誊录规范，,防止错误,第20页,Homework,如今越来越多中学生拥有了自己智能手机。请依据以下提醒，写一篇,7,0词左右英语短文，谈谈中学生使用智能手机利与弊，并提出你自己看法。（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）,提醒：,利：1.方便与朋友或家人保持联络；,2.很轻易获取信息。,弊：,1.太多时间花费在手机上，没有时间与朋友或家人面对面交流；,2.过分使用智能手机对健康有害。,第21页,开头,;,Nowadays,a,number of middle school students have,their own Smartphones,.,Smartphones are really good for students.They make students keep in touch with their friends or family conveniently.And they help students get information more easily.However,students spend too much time on smartphones,they dont have time to communicate with their friends or family.,And,using smartphones too much may cause health problems.,结尾：In my opinion,students should,nt,use smartphones.,Because,its,bad for their health,.,第22页,