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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。谢谢,(,一）初中生写作,“,现实状况,”,2,初中生写作,“六大病症”：,1),审题不清，抓不住关键点，东拉西扯；,2),单词拼写错误；,frist,belive,ture,buzy,quite&quiet,3),动词缺失；,Eg:I happy I can go to Peking.,第1页,4,）前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等）,Eg:All people have their own dream.,He said he wants to have a good rest.,5,）中式英语（,Chinglish,）,Eg:I very like sports.,6),综合性错误。,包含,单词大小写,、,标点符号,以及,形容词副词,混同、连词缺失误用、句子结构不完整,等。,第2页,中考英语作文评分标准,满分档（,15,分）：长度符合要求（,80-90,字），书写规范，涵盖全部要 点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇丰富，没有任何语法错误。,第五档（,12-14,分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵盖全部关键点，结 构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇比较丰富有少许语法错误。,第四档（,9-11,分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，基本涵盖关键点（有,2,关键点得给,9-10,分），行文比较连贯，词汇不够丰富，有一些语法错误。,第三档,(6-8,分,),：文本长度与要求有显著距离，书写不规范，关键点不完整 （只有,1,个关键点），行文不连贯，词汇量不足，错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。,第二档（,3-5,分）：能用句子表示，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。,第一档（,0-2,分）：有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。,（白卷,0,分）,第3页,中考英语高分作文特点,1,、开头言简意赅，不烦琐，不偏题，快速引入主题。,2,、段与段之间，自然过渡。有适当连接词。,3,、句与句之间，有恰当连接词，使之自然成一体。,4,、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学词汇量不一样寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。,5,、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。,第4页,二、中考英语高分作文特点,6,、书写工整，书面整齐，极少有涂改痕迹。,7,、分段合理。全文分段普通不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很轻易就能找到作文所要求写关键点和主要句子。,8,、关键点齐全。,9,、首尾呼应，自然成一体。,10,、使用了大量高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学功底非不普通，自然就给打高分了。,第5页,Making an invition,英语作文,注意交叉使用长短句,吴轶佳说，在,5,月份长春市模拟考试当中，很多同学都以为大作文不太轻易写好，不轻易得高分。我们轻易忽略一个主要问题是我们面正确是高中老师来批改我们初三学生作文，高中老师要求水准，他们指导高考作文习惯，他们对于作文品位和要求都可能与我们平时思维习惯有所不一样，所以文章可读性就更能成就一篇完美中考作文。,吴轶佳提议，英语作文在整个写作过程中，要适当选择恰当连词来表示文中并列、转折、选择、条件、因果等关系，而且注意句子结构改变，防止重复和单调。,考试中写作是一个控制性写作，在至多,25,分钟时间内要实现审题，列提要，打初稿，修改初稿，打磨语言，并准确，美观地誊写在答题卡上。,在英语写作中，过多地使用长句和短句都不好，正确做法是，依据实际情况，在文章当中交叉使用长短句。综合使用各种所谓“高级”结构。在适合语境当中，在自己十分有把握情况下，使用一句名言警句来增加文章色彩。不过在大型考试考场上，不勉励现场原创语言，还是尽可能使用平时老师给批改过，教材中有，你十分熟悉和有把握语言。这么作文才会在担心情绪影响之下少犯错误,第6页,中考英语写作高分“秘笈”,关键点齐全 过渡自然,首尾相呼 分段提行,连词增色 名句添光,长短得当 高分有望,第7页,怎样,逐步培养和提升,英语写作能力？,第8页,二 写作能力引导,词汇短语,句子,篇章,第9页,词汇是学生用英语表示思想,同时,也是写作基础和源泉。,词汇短语,第10页,1.,词汇,巧妙记忆,。（,child,ren,;be,lie,ve),2.,加强中考,课标词汇、短语,听默写。,3.,勉励学生（尤其是优等生）坚持课外阅读，并用,“积累”本,搜集高频词汇、短语、佳句，加强记忆。,词汇短语“攻关秘笈”,第11页,4.,勉励学生使用“高端”词汇。,=endless/oceans of,Playing too much computer is bad for our study.,=gets in the way of,=have a bad influence on,Eg:,I am very interested in pop music.,I have,lots of homework to do every day.,=show/take great interest in,第12页,词不离句，,完整、准确、,新奇、丰富,句式表示是一篇好文章必备条件。,句子,第13页,1.,帮助学生掌握认清“五大”基本句式。,2.,加强中考相关话题,必备佳句,朗诵,、,听写,、,背诵、仿写,、,句子翻译以及课外佳句积累,。,3.,让学生在“多样”句式变换中不停积攒实战经验。,有效句式教学,第14页,3.“,多样”句式变换,句子,1,）合并为简单句；,Eg:My brother helped me in maths.I made great progress.,I made great progress in maths,with the help of,my brother.,2,）学会使用感叹句；,It is necessary to help others.,How necessary it is,to help others,！,第15页,3),善用复合句；,a.We need to help people.The people are in trouble.,We need to help the people,who are,in trouble.,b.We know that more and more students like pop songs.,As we all know,more and more students like pop songs.,4,）巧妙使用强调句；,We can achieve our dreams by working hard.,Only by working hard,can we,achieve our,dreams.,第16页,5),积累丰富谚语,(,一周两至三句）,英语谚语短小精悍，简练明快，韵律优美，寓意深刻，在写作中适当引用谚语能增强文章说服力和感染力。,As the saying goes,“.”,1),锻炼对学生有好处,As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”,It is good for us students to take exercise.,2),集中注意力于学习,As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”,We should concentrate our mind on our studies.,其它谚语,:,1.Think twice before you do.,2.Practice makes perfect.,3.Where there is a will,there is a way.4.Failure is the mother of success.,5.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.,6.All roads lead to Rome.,7.Every coin has two sides.,第17页,1.,水,(,节水方法,),To make the limited water last long,1)wed better turn off the taps or showers while we are washing hair or brushing teeth.,2),its good to,save water by reusing the used water to,flush,the toilet,冲,厕所,.,2.,交通方式,(,自己、告诉他人,),In order to reduce the air pollution,1)we should,either,walk,or,take the bus to school.,2)We are supposed to tell our parents to ride bikes or take the subway,as much as possible,.,第18页,3.,电,(,节电方法,),Dont forget to,turn off lights and TVs when we leave the room,so that,we can save the energy,目标,4.,纸,In order to make full use of paper,1),its necessary for us to,collect used paper and books and recycle them.,2).we need to use both sides of it,第19页,5.,购物袋,To reduce the white pollution,we are supposed to take our own bags,instead of,plastic bags when we go shopping.,6.,植树造林,Wed better plant trees,as many as possible,instead of cutting them down.,In this way,，,we can make the world greener and the air fresher.,第20页,词不离句，句不离篇。,能够灵活自如地利用所学词汇、短语、句型、语法,谋篇布局写出精彩文段是训练学生写作最终目标。,篇章,第21页,怎样利用已经有,“,遣词造句,”,能力在写作实践中学会,“,谋篇布局,”,“战无不胜”,呢？,第22页,1,）表,并列补充,关系：,What is more,，,Besides,，,2),表示转折关系过渡词：,but,yet,however,3),表示时间关系过渡词：,first,second,third,and then,finally,after,before,after a few days,at last,at that time,later,in the past,immediately,in the meanwhile,when,while,then,after that,4),表示空间关系过渡词：,near(to),far(from),in the front of,beside,behind,beyond,above,below,to the right,to the left,on one side,on the other side of,outside,第23页,5),表示比较关系过渡词：,in the same way,just like,just as,6),表示对照关系过渡词：,but,still,yet,however,on the other hand,in spite of,even though,7),表示递进关系过渡词：,also,and,then,too,in addition,moreover,again,8),表示因果关系过渡词：,because,since,then,thus,so,therefore,as a result,9),表示解释说明过渡词：,for example,in fact,in this case,for,actually,She came in spite of her cold.Force a laugh in spite of pain.,We met some friends and other people in addition.,I can help you.Moreover,you should rely on yourself.,第24页,10)表示强调过渡词：in fact,indeed,necessarily,certainly,without any doubt,truly,most important,11)表示目标过渡词：for this reason,for this purpose,so that,in order that,so as to,in order to,12)表示列举过渡词：for example,such as,13)表示总结性过渡词：in conclusion,finally,at last,in brief,in a word,in general,all,in all,in a word,generally speaking,He has his faults,but,all in all,he is a good helper.,第25页,英语写作中用好“四心”,1.,精心,审题，从容写稿,2.,耐心,修改，提炼句子,3.,细心,检验,毁灭错误,4.,虚心,誊录，一丝不苟。,第26页,议论文写作技巧,议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论,表明自己观点、立场、态度、看法和主张一个文体。议论文有三要素,即论点、论据和论证。论点基本要求是,:,观点正确,认真概括,有实际意义,;,论据基本要求是,:,真实可靠,充分经典,;,论证基本要求是,:,推理必须符合逻辑。,英语议论文结构普通较为固定,通常包含以下三部分,:,1.,在导语部分提出需要议论议题,;,2.,在正文部分对所提出问题进行议论,;,3.,在结论部分对以上讨论进行总结和归纳。,第27页,lets see some examples,Shall we send children to study abroad?,With more and more people becoming rich in recent years,it is a new tendency for them to,send their children to study abroad.But I dont think it is a good idea.,First of all,children are too young to look after themselves.,Second,the language barrier is a serious problem.Many children are not proficient in the foreign language before going abroad.As a result,they have difficulty in understanding what the native speakers are talking about.,Third,they may get into trouble when dealing with various situations for lack of knowledge of the customs in the strange land.,Furthermore,the cost of living is much higher than that in our country,which might cause a heavy burden to the family.,In conclusion,there are more disadvantages in sending children to study abroad.So,wed better not do it.,第28页,Learn To Respect Our Parents,Nowadays,more and more families have only one child.As most of the students today are the only child in the family,they often regard themselves as the center of the family and become,selfish,without caring too much about their parents.,第29页,So we should learn to respect our parents.Firstly,we are supposed to remember our parents birthday and express our best wishes to them.Secondly,we should say hello to our parents when we see them returning home.Thirdly,we are supposed to tell our parents where we go when we leave home.,第30页,In a word,respecting parents is our,Chinas traditional values,.No matter how old we are,its necessary for us to respect our parents.,第31页,On the one hand,computer has many advantages.It can help people finish work quickly.And it also can help people to do more and more work.Its not noly a good way for students to receive education but also its very convenient for people to communicate with others by using computers.,第32页,On the other hand,it has some disadvantages.Computer can work out difficult math problems that students cant.But it may make them be lacking in thinking.And if you often work with computer,maybe you will get sick.Some people surf the Internet all day,they waste much time and have no time to care for the real people.,第33页,So we should have a right way to deal with the greatest invention computer.,第34页,常见例文,第35页,My Favorite Places,Many people have favorite places they like to go to when they are,feeling sad or bored.I also have favorite places that I go to as often as I,can.,Here are the three places that I like most.,First of all,I like the zoo.The,animals are amazing because some are so cute and some are so ugly!I,like to pet(宠)them,feed them and watch them perform.Museums are,cool places,too.They have good exhibits(陈列品)and fascinating,displays(吸引人展品).I like the works of art(艺术品)there.Some,museums teach me a lot about history and science.From dinosaurs to,robots,I love them all.,Finally,theme parks are my favourite place.I,think the roller coasters are the best.,Its fun to scream and get,s,care,d.,These places always,cheer me up(快活）,.I try to go to each of my favorite,places once a year.I am going to find more favorite places to go to,when I grow up.,第36页,作文走向预测及参考范文,1.,最近，老师布置了一道作业，就,“,Can parents be friends?,”,这一问题在同学中间开展一次调查，下表是调查结果：,45%,同学可能父母太忙，没有时间关心他们。,55%,同学可能在家里，父母经常和他们谈心，像朋友一样。你观点,?,请依据以上调查数据，写一份,80,词左右调查汇报。汇报开头已给出。,I recently surveyed(,调查,)my classmates about their views(,观点,)on whether parents can be friends.,According to the survey,45%of the students in our class think it impossible to make friends with their parents as theyre always too busy to show their concern.On the other hand,55%of the students believe they can make friends with their parents because their parents often talk with them like friends at home.In my opinion,its just natural for parents and children to be friends so long as they trust each other,the parents often talk with their children and know how to share.,第37页,2.,爱是心中太阳，融化你我身边冰雪。假设你是李明，你们学校“,English Garden”,正在举行主题为“付出即是收获”征文活动，请你联络自己平时爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。,要求：,1.,文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。,2.80100,词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。,Giving is Receiving,My name is Li Ming.I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy.I often help my classmates with their schoolwork.Sometimes I help clean up my house.I go to the old peoples home and do some cleaning for them once a month.I often visit the Childrens Hospital to cheer the sick kids up.I read stories and sing songs for them.I also help people in trouble.I think giving is receiving.Helping others is helping ourselves.Do you agree with me?,第38页,3.,假如你叫李华，参加学校开展“有困难向谁求援”（,Whom do you turn to when in trouble?,）调查活动，调查结果以下。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信反应相关内容。,求援对象：同学、朋友，,58%,，年纪相仿，轻易了解交流。老师家长，,30%,，有爱心、有经验、能够 信任。无，,12%,，不愿与人交流，难以与人沟通。,注意：,1,内容关键点全方面，并表示出你观点。为了使文章连 贯，可适当增加内容。,2,词数：,90,词左右。,Dear editor,Im a student.We have made a survey,“,Who do you turn to when in trouble?”Here are the results.Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble as theyre almost of the same age,so they have a lot in common and understand each other easily.Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask them for help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much.They can be trusted by these students.Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves.They hate to talk with others and cant get on well with others.They have few friends.,In my opinion,when in trouble wed better ask our teachers,parent,friends or classmates for help.,Yours,Li Hua,第39页,4,、台湾自古以来是中国领土不可分割一部分，尽早处理台湾问题，实现祖国完全统一，是中华儿女共同期盼。假定你们正举行“我心中台湾”主题班会，请你依据提醒写篇短文。,1,：台湾是中国一部分,2,：我所知道台湾（地理位置、人口或其它资讯）,3,：台湾与祖国大陆民间交往（走亲访友、商业往来、兴办工厂等）,4,：愿望。,词语准备：,Taiwan Island,Taiwanese,the mainland,many kinds of,beautiful,relative,shop,factory,lie.Visit,build,run.,There is but one China and Taiwan is part of China.Taiwan,the biggest island,lies to the southeast of Fujian Province.The weather there is warm and wet.So many plants grow very well.The fruit there are really delicious,like bananas,oranges and so on.It has a popolation of 23.000.000.Taiwan produces many kinds of products,especially seafood.It is a very beautiful island.Riyuetan Pool AND Mount Ali are very famous places of interest,Now many Taiwanese come to the mainland,they visit their relatives and friends,and some of them build factores and run shops,I love Taiwan very much and I hope I can visit Taiwan some day.China is getting stronger and stronger.All the people hope Taiwan can come back quickly.Im sure Taiwan will come back in the future.,第40页,5.,阳光运开工程,(Sunshine sports program)Dear Jane,Thank you for your last letter asking about our sunshine sports program.,Now I tell you some sports in our school.Many students doing sports one hour everyday.Different students have different interests.Some boys like playing football,because they love it.Most girls like shopping,because they think it relaxing.But most boys like playing Chinese Kongfu,because they believe it can help they keep healthy.And some girls like dancing,because they want to keep fit.,I think the sunshine sports program is very important for us.Because the study of students very hard.Sports can also let brains have a good rest so that our study will be more effective.And it can help you relax.,第41页,7.,许多学习生活中烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更加好地发觉及处理同学们中存在心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以,Less Pressure,Better Life,为主题英语演讲比赛,请你准备讲话稿,谈谈你一些缓解压力好方法,与同学分享,内容包含：,同学们中普遍存在压力是什么；,我压力是什么；,我是怎样成功缓解我压力。,参考范文,:,Less Pressure,Better Life,Hello,boys and girls!,Pressure is a serious problem in todays world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Some students cant get on well with their classmates,while others may worry about their exams.,Im always under pressure,too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.,Last Monday evening,I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.,Thats all.Thank you!,第42页,Less Pressure,Better Life,Hello,boys and girls!,Pressure is a serious problem in todays world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Some students cant get on well with their classmates,while others may worry about their exams.,Im always under pressure,too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.,Last Monday evening,I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.,Thats all.Thank you!,第43页,8.,幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造温馨家，幸福是老师望向你赞许目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来一杯奶茶，幸福是,请以,My happiness,为话题，写一件曾经发生过令你感到幸福事情。,要求：条理清楚，语言流畅，用词准确,字迹工整，,80,90,词。,Happiness is important in our life.In fact,happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.,I will never forget one thing.Once,I had a bad mark at a math test.I
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