高一英语短文改错专练(1).doc

高一英语短文改错专练(1)
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Last Saturday, Mom and I went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. When we got to the big store, we saw down jackets of various colors and styles. Under the help of the shop assistant, we selected a black thick jacket for Grandpa. Immediately, we returned back home to show it to my grandpa. Seeing it, he was very happy but couldn’t wait to put on. But we were annoying to find something is wrong with the zipper. Hurriedly, I took it back to the store and explained to the shop assistant the problems. To my satisfaction, she was very kind and helped me choose another one patient. When my grandpa smiled contently in the new coat in front of the mirror, what delighted I was!
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Dr. Einstein was inviting to give lectures all over the United States as soon as he becomes famous. So he got familiar with his driver. One day, her driver asked Dr. Einstein let him give the lecture instead of Dr. Einstein. Dr. Einstein agreed because nobody there had never seen him before. When the driver appeared on the platform, he accepted a warm welcome. The driver performed wonderful. But when the driver was about to leave, the young man asked him a very difficult question. The driver was very clever. He smiled at Dr. Einstein or said it was such easy that his driver could answer it.
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It was Monday. Li Ming was the first come to the classroom. When he came into his seat, therefore, he found his bench（长凳）was broken. Seen there was nobody around, he decided to change it for Wang Gang’s, and so he did. After a while, Wang Gang came. When he saw a broken bench, he carried it out of the classroom. Li Ming didn’t know how he was going to do. So Li Ming came out of and found that Wang Gang has begun to repair the broken bench. Li Ming’s face turned red. He said with Wang Gang, “Let’s repair them together.
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Dear Worried,
I have accepted your letter and I’m glad to give you some advices. First in all, don’t be disappointed. Many students find it difficulty to write well. In my opinion, if you want to improve your writing, and you can do several things. First, do some study with phrases and sentence structures. Second, read as much as possible. There are many things can’t be learnt. You must see it in books many times. Then you’ll be able to use them correct yourself.So,in order to write well, you must learn to read much. Finally, you’d better to recite some good passages. Good luck for you in your writing.
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I often dream of be a teacher. I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and I give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach good. Besides, you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him.
Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true.
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Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found
a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and she can’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother came. That made me feel very happily. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with each other, the world will become more beautiful.
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I'm a middle school student name Li Ming．I'm writing to tell you something． Recently I have noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school．I went there too in the other day．I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat．Some students are even talking about love affairs online．On my opinion, the cyber cafe should be a place which we can find much useful informations．The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games．The Internet is good if we make good use of them．Otherwise, it will do us great harm．So the local government should take measures to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively．
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Now I’d like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we are all held together for our 18-years-old birthday. At the first we promised that like grown-ups we should be responsible for our society. Then we expressed thank to our parents who experienced hardships to bring us up and our teachers who educated us heart or soul. And our teachers also gave to us cards expressing our good congratulations and wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderfully performances.
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In the country now, there are many children do not attend the school. I think one of the reasons is that their families are very poor to send them to school. They had to stay at home to make money to support their families. Other reason is that many parents think it useless of the girls to study and they do not like them to go to school. A third reason is what some children are not interesting in their lessons. In my opinion, all children, included girls, have the chance to receive education. Everybody should pay attention for the education of the children.
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It is known to us, a severe tusnami occurred in the Indian Ocean in December 26, 2004. It’s reported that more than 10 countries were suffered from the disaster. But it caused more than 200,000 deaths and left million of people homeless. Countless houses and schools have destroyed. Just imagine how the students here need help. Schools should be rebuilt so that they could return to classes soon. Here the Student Union calls for everyone to do something for them. We’ll have a voluntary contribution this week. Let’s give away our pocket’s money.
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Thank you for your letter and check. That was really kind of you to send me such much money. I was so glad to receive it. I spend one week at an ecology summer camp on the countryside. We did see a snake. Five of the boys drove them away. I was excited to see it. Thank you for your good wish about my knee. That afternoon, after I returned to school, I fell over on the stairs. It wasn’t serious and it is getting more better. Since I was very interested in nature, I’ve decided to cost the money you sent me on a telescope. I can use it observe natural things. Will that be all right? I’m waiting for your reply.