压轴题07-读后续写(人和动物和谐相处类)(原卷版)(江苏专用).docx

压轴题07 读后续写

新高考最突出的特点是增加了读后续写题型，读后续写是对考生阅读和写作的综合能力考查形式，是整个考卷中最难的题，它每年堪称是压轴题。读后续写总是以友爱互助、人和动物之间的和谐相处为主题。2023年高考对于读后续写的考查，友爱互助、人和动物之间的和谐相处仍将是主要话题。2023年1月的浙江高考英语试题及2023年四省联考试题都能闻到这个味道。

二人和动物和谐相处类
1.基本规律：读后续写中给出的故事本身难度不大，其核心是考查学生的续写能力，如果考生连给出的故事都看不懂，就无法展现考生的写作水平，这样的试题是失败的命题。读后续写和前面的故事构成一个完整的闭环的故事，这样才能较好的考查考生的水平。
2．实用解题方法：

押题速练1.
【2023年1月·浙江卷】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty?
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.
Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
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I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
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押题速练2.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover their world.
While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.
We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait—and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother—we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.
Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order. More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean (断奶) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own.
Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds.
To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would chatter (吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasn’t long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild.
His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass some and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels.
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One night, Squirt didn’t come back to our house and it rained hard.
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押题速练3
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Dog Who Saved Our Family
We met Max at the pickup area of Alaska Airlines five years ago. He was a standard poodle(狮子狗)born on Valentine’s Day in 2017， and came to us in a small blue box. We had adopted him from an out-of-state raiser who posted the news on the social network. Our only request was that he have a calm behavior, able to bear the pushing and hugging of our eight-year-old daughter and six-year-old son.
We were a sweet little family:me,my husband, and our children, Sophie and Jake. But for years I’d felt as if we wouldn’t really be complete until we had a dog. Also, my husband worked in a business company and had to travel some 200 days a year for his job, and I knew I’d feel safer with a large animal sleeping by the door.
When we opened the box, the last piece of our puzzle fell into place. With his black hair and intelligent eyes,Max was beautiful. He was so small that he fit into the palm of my hand, his big paws lapping over the sides. He was also a little bit scared. As I pulled him close,I felt his heart pound and wondered if we’d done the right thing, taking him from his mother. But it was too late. Sophie and Jake were already fighting over who would hold him next and who should have the right to take a bath for him.
Over the following months, we spent endless hours watching Max play with his Kong toy or roll around the living room floor. Like most poodles, he was smart. He mastered house-training quickly and never chewed on our furniture or shoes. He considered himself one of us.
注意
1. 续写词数应为150左右
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One night we were sleeping in the bedroom when I heard some strange noise.
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At that time,Max ran towards me.
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押题速练4
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time, in a village, a little boy named Bob lived with his mother in their attractive little cottage. They didn’t have much but were content with the little they had. Every day after he came home from school, Bob would accompany his mother to the forest to collect firewood.
One day, when Bob was in the forest collecting wood, he came across a puppy which seemed to be all alone. Bob looked here and there for its owner but in vain. So he picked it up, put it under his shirt and carried it home. Reaching home, he said to her mother, “Mom, I found a little puppy alone in the forest! Can we keep him, please?“ Feeling Bob’s happiness, his mother was in two minds about whether to keep the puppy or not. She told him, ”Oh Bob, that’s the cutest puppy I’ve ever seen! But we don’t have much. What will we do about his food and sleeping arrangement?“ Bob replied, “It’s OK. I’ll give him half of my meals and let him sleep with me in my bed.” Hearing this, Bob’s mother just nodded. Bob’s happiness knew no bounds, and he named the puppy Milo.
From that day onwards, Bob and Milo became the best friends. Milo followed Bob wherever he went. When Bob went to school, Milo would diligently wait outside the classroom till the classes ended. At night, Milo slept next to Bob on his tiny bed and dreamed sweet dreams.
On one particular day, Milo was sick, unable to follow Bob, so he stayed at home. That day it rained heavily, and the roads everywhere turned slippery. On his way home, Bob was trying to reach home as soon as possible as he dreamed of Milo waiting for him and keeping him warm. Unfortunately, Bob missed seeing a hole at the side of the road and fell down the hole!
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He cried for help, hoping to be heard by passers-by.
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Milo’s behavior drew the search party’s attention, and they ran towards the hole.
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押题速练5
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Christmas was almost here. The snow was fresh and deep on the remote mountain path. Arriving home, Ben said, “I saw two horses trapped by the heavy snow.” Father looked at Jack, the older son. “Well, go take a look. Take the rifle and some hay. If they look as if they can survive, give them the hay. If not...”
The next morning, Ben and Jack set off in the cold, crisp snow. The snowmobile sank a bit in the deep snow, but they kept going. At last they reached the clearing where the horses stood.
“They’re starving!” said Ben. One of the horses had lost a lot of hair, and their tails were almost gone. Their eyes were lifeless and tired. Jack walked around the horses. “Well,” said Jack, sighing, picking up the rifle. “There’s no way to get them down through the snow. And they look pretty bad.”
“No! No!” cried Ben. “We should try,” he pleaded. “How do we know how bad they really are? Dad can get the vet!”
“Well, I don’t know,“ said Jack slowly. He walked around the horses again. He patted the big brown one on the neck. It made a sad, small groaning sound. “Maybe you’re right.”
Ben quickly got the hay and spread it around. The horses ate hungrily, and Ben poured water into a pail for them.
Back at home the family had a hurried meeting.
“What if we put them on a big sled?” Jack said.
“I don’t know how we could get a sled that big up there," Dad sighed. “I think the kindest thing to do is to put them out of their misery.”
“No!” said Ben. “Well just have to shovel(铲)a path or tunnel then.”
His parents raised their eyebrows.
“That’s a long way, and a lot of snow. I don’t know if it can be done,” Dad said, “unless we have an awful lot of people shoveling.” Ben could see he was warming to the idea.
“We’ll find some!” said Ben. He grabbed his coat and boots. “Come on, Jack, let’s go!”
注意：1．续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The two brothers went from door to door asking everyone to come and help.
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Suddenly, a group of snowmobilers arrived with shovels and hot chocolate,
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押题速练6
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Two little birds were happily sitting on the rock, just having finished their lunch. Their parents had allowed them, for the first time, to go and hunt for their lunch by themselves. And they had enjoyed every bit of the freedom.
Suddenly, a net came and fell on both. They struggled to pass through it but in vain. Two boys jumped down from the branch above them. They quickly gathered the net. One of the boys, Eric, shouted to his little brother Max. “We have finally succeeded after ten days of waiting.”
“Yes, what luck! They look much more beautiful than ordinary birds. Let’s go home and put them in our cage,” Eric said joyfully. They ran home with the birds.
The two little birds were terribly frightened. They thought of their mother who must be anxiously waiting for them.
When the two boys got to the hous