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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢,To continue a story,续写 之 怎样构思,第1页,What is a STORY/Why do we make STORIES?,A story is to entertian,to amuse,to educate,to enlighten.,Basically,a story is to deliver a piece of mind to us.,So,how to deliver it well?,第2页,What makes a story?,Simply put:,Who,Where,What,When,How,Why,Literarily put:,Characters(Main&Minor),Plot(Beginning,Rising Action,Climax,Falling Action&Resolution),第3页,Think,For a good story,which is more important,the character,or the plot?,第4页,1.CaoRui is,easy-going,and he is,never seen getting angry,but _.,2.ShenMengyan is a,lady-like girl,when she_,but,when _ she will_.,3.LiJinying is very,gentle,to her deskmate and she _.,he was a little annoyed when his food was taken by ChengSihan,is in the classroom,in the dorm,be totally a crazy one,always speaks softly to him,Characterization Practice(Writing),第5页,4.WangChen hao is a,quiet,boy,he _.,5.ZhaoHanbin,considers himself THE most handsome in the world,and he _.,6.After discovering ZhangKaiheng is after the same girl he likes,the,fearless,ZhaoYonghao _.,can sit silently for a day without a word to his deskmate.,looks down upon all the other boys in the class who he thinks ugly.,felt he must do something,第6页,Make it a one-sentence story!,1.Framton wanted to clam his nerves in Mrs Samptons house,only to _.,2.Matilda put on the necklace and looked foward to the coming of the party.Her dream was _.,3.Although Laurie wanted to win very much,when she found Jinnys tape,_.,be made lose his nerves by a little mischievous girl,to become the queen of the party of the upper class,didnt let the desire to win get the better of her and returned it to Jinny,第7页,4.Larry angrily opened the car door,trying to rush away from his terrible boss,but to find_,5.Tim was a good student in the teachers eyes,yet he _.,6.It was very late,and Helen was very anxious for her husband to return,when the doorbell rang,she _.,a Christmas gift from the boss,never likes any teachers class,第8页,Lets read and pay attention to the red part.,One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way,an unpleasant subject,came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was,so angry that she said to,Tom,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.,With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snowcapped mountain top.,She suddenly realized that she was lost,.,第9页,What would she,do,or,experience,next?,cried for help?,regretted what she had done?,tried to go back on her own?,waited for her husband?,came across some bad or good guy?,.,第10页,No reply.,If only she had not,left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.,Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the,more confused,she became.,As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.,Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.,She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.,Began to regret,Things got worse,miss her husband and family,第11页,Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.,She drank and ate a few berries.,Never in her life had she tasted anything better,.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.,1.Its lucky she had someting to drink and eat,but would the luck continue?,2.Why were the berries most delicious to her?,第12页,As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane,heard a helicopter.,Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.,Helicopter stands for?,第13页,Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark.,_,_,_,ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.,_,_,_,第14页,