英语六级写作模板.doc

Writing Pattern

Writing 1:
What Attitude Should We Take to Sth.
1. 社会上对某事物的错误观念
2. 分析批驳其错误所在
3. 给出如何看待该事物的建议
（批驳分析类）

写作模式
（批驳分析类）
1) With the arrival / birth of …, sth. is becoming more and more … in our life. 2) Hit / Affected with this trend, some / many people come to believe / contend that …(错误观念) 3) But their viewpoint / belief could not arouse any echo in my mind.(作者的立场)
4) It is true that sth. is a key ingredient in one’s …(让步法分析) 5) On any scale of …, in fact, there is almost nothing heavier than sth.. 6) If we see sth. in its true colors, however, it is nothing but… (批驳分析I) 7) ... (进一步阐述) 8) And moreover, laying any undue stress on sth. may lead one to …, as can be easily seen in the cases of …(批驳分析II)
9) Therefore, it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards sth. 10) On the one hand, …
(正确看法I) 11) On the other, ... (正确看法II) 12) In sum, sth. means …but not … to our life. (结论句)

（分析建议类）
Writing 2:

Effects of Sth. On Sb. / Sth. Else
1. 分析某事物的正面效应
2. 分析某事物的负面效应
3. 给出怎样对待该事物的建议

写作模式（分析建议类）
1) As is known to all, sth. does bring a lot of benefits to sb. / sth. else. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen …, thereby changing …for the better.(正面分析I) 3) Besides, it can make /render sb. / sth. else better able to… (正面分析II) 4) And best of all, it can help sb.…(正面分析III)
5）But all the above does not mean / follow that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects sth. brings about. 6） If…, as a succession
of scientific studies reveals / implies / suggests, there are more chances that… (负面分析I) 7) In addition, the more ..., the worse... (负面分析II) 8) And worst of all, … (负面分析III)
9) Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of sth. 10) On the one hand, …(建议I) 11) On the other, ... (建议II) 12) In sum, sth. can do sb. / sth. else good or harm, all depending on … (结论句)

Writing 3:

（分析建议类）
A Letter to the College President
1. 就学校的某些变化给校长写封信
2. 分析变化主要表现在哪些方面
3. 提出（进一步）改进的意见

写作模式（分析建议）
1) I am delighted (distressed) to find there have been favorable(unfavorable) changes in … (议论的主题) since I came here. 2) From my angle of view, these changes indicate that what you have done is in (out of) line with ...(作者的态度) 3) In the long run, they will produce more positive (negative) effect on ...
4) Such desirable (undesirable) changes can be found in the aspects as follows. 5) First, …
(分析I)6）Second, ... (分析II) 7） And best(worst) of all, …(分析III) 8) ... (进一步阐述)
9) But all the foregoing does not mean that there is little room for further improvement in …(that there is little you can do about …)10) Instead, to enrich (reverse)…, a richer variety (a better health) can be added to …(建议I) 11) And meanwhile, ... (建议II) 12) It should be born in mind that … (结论句)

Writing 4:

（分析建议类）：How to Do Something
1. 某一事物的现状
2. 分析该事物的重要性(或危害性／社会意义等)
3. 怎样对待该事物

写作模式（分析建议类）
1) Much to our distress / delight / surprise, these years have seen the popularity / worsening / much improvement / a widespread neglect of sth. (议论的主题) in society. 2) According to a recent / official report / survey / opinion poll, ...(佐证陈述) 3) If this current is allowed to run its course, things are bound to turn for the better / worse. (Para. 1)
4) The importance / harmfulness / significance of sth. to sb. / sth. else, (however), can be seen from the perspectives as follows. 5) In the first place, …(分析I)6) In the second, ... (分析II) 7) And above all, …(分析III) 8) To sum up, ... (归纳总结)
(Para. 2)
9) So the most pressing for us / basic problem now is how to… 10) In my opinion, the first step should be focused upon …(建议I) 11) Then, greater efforts must be made to ... (建议II) 12) In one word, where there is …, there is …(结论句) (Para. 3)

Writing 5:

理由陈述类:
My Way of Seeing Something

1. 人们从不同的角度看待某一事物
2. 我的看法是······(说明理由)

写作模式（理由陈述类）
1) Something may be many things to many people. 2) Some may see it as …while others may view it as …(人们的看法举例) 3) As far as I am concerned, however, I would prefer to value it as … (我的看法) (Para. I)
4) My insight into sth.(My outlook on sth. / My understanding of sth.) is bound up with three major factors. 5) Primarily, sth. is so …that …(理由I) 6) …(进一步阐述) 7) Secondly, sth. is also … (理由II) 8) ... (进一步阐述) 9) And most of all, …(理由III) 10) …(进一步阐述)
(Para. II)
11) I have (not) much freedom / option in this matter, but I have never found any other way of seeing sth. more reasonable and acceptable than mine. 12) Thus, I will leave no stone unturned during the course of … in order to pave the way for ... (Para. III)

Writing 6:

原因分析类 （图表）： The Changes in Something
1. 简述某一事物的变化情况
2. 说明引起变化的原因
3. 分析其影响或走向
Changes in Great Natural Disasters Worldwide （图表略）
写作模式（原因分析类）
1) As can be seen from the graph / table / diagram, there have been drastic / considerable / unfavorable changes in …(议论的主题)over the past period from __ to __. 2) To be concrete, …only… in __(year) while / whereas the ratio(s) went up to…in __ (year).(变化概述) 3) These changes are most disturbing, so it is necessary for us to go into the whys and wherefores of them first. (Para. 1)
4) Some changes, such as …, result from …, but many others have much to do with … 5) In the first place, man’s excessive exploitation of … has done a lasting damage to …, only to … (原因分析I)6) … (进一步说明) 7) In the second, in order to …, man has had to overwork …, which in turn has accelerated … (原因分析II) 8) In the third, man’s blind application of … has caused permanent changes in …(原因分析III) 9) Among these changes are ... (进一步说明)(Para. 2)
10) The list of causes could go on, but they are already enough to indicate that these changes are producing more and more negative effects on the world. 11) These changes not only …, but also…(分析) 12) If allowed to run its course, I firmly believe / I am afraid, this trend will certainly bring more harm / threats to our society / life.(结论句) (Para. 3)

Writing 7:
原因分析类：What Causes Something New
1. 近几年在社会上出现了······
2. 导致该现象的原因
3. 分析该现象的社会影响
写作模式（原因分析类）
1) Believe it or not/Like it or not, these years have witnessed a boom in…/a popularity (resurgence/worsening/crisis/ decline/growth/revival/spread ) of…in our society/on the Chinese campus. 2) According to…, people, especially college students, are showing more and more interest in … 3) To get a better sense of it, it is necessary for us to find out its causes
4) A closer analysis/study/ observation of the phenomenon can find that three main factors are well worth our concern/should call for more of our concern. 5) In the first place, it is the product of…, for which…(原因I) 6) In the second, it is seen, among…, as an ideal way of…, since… (原因II) 7) And above all, it is an inevitable result of…(原因III) 8) While…, in fact,…
9) The effects of this change on our social/college life are positive/ negative/a mixed one. 10) On the one hand,...(分析I) 11) On the other,...(分析II) 12) With more and more…added / attached to the trend, I am fully convinced / I am deeply worried, it will certainly … / is bound to…in the time to come.

Writing 8:
各抒己见类：Views on Something
1． 有人认为该事物······
理由是······
2. 也有人认为该事物······
3. 我的看法

写作模式（各抒己见类）
1) Almost everyone would agree that the birth / appearance / arrival / development of sth.… 2) But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to…(议论的主题) (Para. I)
3) Many / Some people contend / believe / argue that… (一方观点) 4) They base their contention / belief / argument on the grounds that… (理由I) 5）Besides, as they often point out, ... (理由II) 6）Yet others react to the issue / matter the other way around and hold / assert that the opposite is just reasonable / more acceptable. (另一方观点) 7) From their angle of view, … (理由I) 8) And even worse, as they claim, … (理由II) (Para. II)
9) I am of / adhere to / stick to the opinion / view / truth that anything new, including…, can bring human society fortunes / merits / advantages or misfortunes / demerits / disadvantages, all depending on ... (我的看法) 10) On the one hand, … (理由I) 11) But on the other, ... (理由II) 12) In short, the key / solution to the problem is always controlled in … (结论句)

Views on Cloning
1. 有人认为克隆技术的应用利大于弊，
理由是······
2. 也有人认为弊大于利，······
3. 我的看法。
Writing 9:

对比分析类：
My Choice Between Sth. and Sth. Else
1. 在两个事物之间作出你的选择
2. 对比说明你的选择理由

写作模式（对比分析类）
1) With a gradual/sharp growth (decline/worsening/progress/arrival) of/in sth., people become more and more concerned about how to… 2) To make it, some prefer to…while others choose to… 3) If I were asked to make a choice between the two, however, I would like to attach more weight to the latter/former than to the former/latter.
4) It is true that ____ does ensure/ bring a lot of …for one, such as…, but, compared with ____, it seems less attractive to me. 5) To begin with, …, thereby …(理由I) 6) By contrast, …, thus … 7) Besides, …, in which context … (理由II) 8) In contrast to that, …, in which case … 9) And the most striking difference between both lies in … (理由III) 10) … while/whereas …(对比说明)
11) From the comparisons and contrasts above, anyone can conclude that my insight into …/ my way of … is more reasonable and acceptable. 12) Therefore, I will …from today on so as to …

Writing 10:
分析建议类:
What Enlightenment Can Be Gained from Something Challenging
1. 人类社会面临着······的挑战
2. 分析该挑战给我们的启迪
3. 怎样对待之

写作模式（分析建议类）
1) While we watch man’s ability to do sth. increase with each passing day, he is often at a loss what to do in the face of such challenges/ puzzles/problems as … (议论的主题) 2) The mystery of …, for example, has cast much doubt on what we have long been proud of or firmly convinced of . 3) With a constant emergence of … in the future, in fact, man will have to be faced with more and more of such challenges/problems.
4) If taken seriously/objectively, however, these challenges can shed new light on ... 5) For one thing, they can help …, as it is the nature of man to...(分析I) 6）For another, they can remind man of …, thus … (分析II) 7) And best of all, they can prove man to be ...(分析III) 8) In this light, man has every reason to ... (进一步阐述)
9) So most important for man now is how to respond to the challenges with positive/ effective action. 10) On the one hand, in my opinion, man must give full play to...(建议I) 11) But on the other, man must prevent them from … (建议II) 12) As long as man sees/ treats them in perspective, therefore, they will serve as an ever-increasing force behind his …(结论句)

Reference model 1:
What Attitude Should We Take to Money
1) With the arrival of market-based economy, money is becoming more and more important in our life. 2) Hit with this trend, many people come to believe that money is above everything else in their life. 3) But their belief could not arouse any echo in my mind.
4) It is true that money is a key ingredient in one’s struggle towards happiness, without
which, for example, there would be no way to go to college or form a family. 5) On any scale of one’s daily worry, in fact, there is almost nothing heavier than money. 6) If we see it in its true colors, however, money is nothing but a means to an end. 7) Money can buy us food, but not appetite; medicine, but not health; diplomas, but not knowledge; and days of joy, but not the whole life of happiness. 8) And moreover, laying any undue stress on money may lead one to stop at nothing in making it, as can be easily seen in the cases of most corrupt officials.
9) Therefore, it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards money. 10) On the one hand, money is vital to our daily life, in which case, it is wise of you to spend not where you may save. 11) On the other, money is something to be plowed into something more important, so it is better to spare not where you must spend. 12) In sum, money means something but not everything to our life.
Reference model 2:
The Effects of Exercise on Our Health
1) As is known to all, exercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen our hearts, lungs, bones and muscles, thereby changing our whole health for the better. 3) Besides, it can make our brains better able to react to what is going on around us. 4) And best of all, it can help us breed optimism about our tough life.
5) But all the above does not mean that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects exercise brings about. 6) If you are normally inactive and then, contrary to your usual habit, start a program of undue exercise, as a succession of scientific studies reveals, there are more chances that you have yourself injured. 7) In addition, the more exercise those on a fat-reducing diet take, the more loss of iron they will suffer and the worse their health will get. 8) And worst of all, continual as well as excessive exercise can result in sudden death.
9) Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of exercise. 10) On the one hand, our physical exercise must be based on both progressiveness and regularity. 11) On the other, we must go in for physical exercise according to local as well as health conditions of our own. 12) In sum, exercise can do us good or harm, all depending on how we make use of it.

Reference model 3:
A Letter to the College President
1) I am delighted to find there have been favorable changes in our campus life since I came here. 2) From my angle of view, these changes indicate what you have done is in line with the interests of undergraduates. 3) In the long run, they will produce more positive effect on our growth.
4) Such desirable changes can be found in the aspects as follows. 5) First, our dining
conditions have turned for the better, thus ending our everyday worry about where to satisfy our hunger. 6) Second, your faculties have paid as much attention to our emotional world as to our intellectual growth, which in turn lends much warmth of family to our life. 7) And best of all, we find the campus a more pleasant place to live on. 8) As a result of your efforts, we now have more places to go to for recreation, such as cafes, net bars, fitness centers and reading rooms.

Reference model 4:
How to Conduct Patriotic Education Among the Youth of Today
1. 我国爱国主义教育的现状。
2. 分析爱国主义教育的重要意义。
3. 如何在青少年中开展爱国主义教育？
1) Much to our distress, these years have seen a widespread neglect of patriotic education in our society. 2) According to some official reports, many patriotic education centers have been closed down or kept open to the public for other more profitable purposes while many of our national heroes have given way to today’s pop stars in youths’ minds. 3) If this current is allowed to run its course, I am afraid, things are bound to turn for the worse, with less and less sense of patriotism left in the youth.
4) The significance of patriotic education to o