雅思大作文积累.doc

很多人不知道什么是逻辑。盲目用书。就像小姨的十天，我一开始也用这本，很容易上手。但是按照这本写了就是个6的水平，除了词汇好了可能有个6.5，想7是不太可能。7和6的根本差别在于你的逻辑框架是不是让考官一目了然。大框架整齐了还不够，论证段落内部逻辑结构也要严谨。比如：我一开始主要写“折中式”，除去开头结尾还有两个主体段，一正一反，一重一轻，这是最保险也是最直观的。你支持的观点就多些两个支持句，不支持那个就少写点，从段落长短上一目了然。然而重点来了！是不是三个支持句随便写？不是！三个毫无关联的支持句，即使它都体现论点的优点，语言再好也是个6分！因为你没有所谓的内在逻辑。相对的，7分作文主体段内部逻辑是递进的，记住，是递进！就是每个论点之间都有联系，而且联系是一层扣一层。举个最简单的例子:养花好不好？6分是“养花好。主体段：1、花很香 2、花很美 3、花可以陶冶情操”虽然都是优点，但毫无关联，只是简单罗列。7分是“1、花很美 2、花可以赏心悦目 2、花可以陶冶情操”美-赏心悦目-陶冶情操是层层深入的，这就是所谓的逻辑。还有一点，差点忘了说，我觉得论证段每个最好有个承上启下的句子，就像总分结构中的“总”，这一句最好用简单句，复杂句要用在后面深入论证中。这样结构就更加清晰了。7分的要求是：每句都有高级词（136或288词）+每句有句型+句子间关系（递进、假设等）。论证的逻辑正是通过句子间关系实现的。所以可以找找以往真题，设定闹钟5分钟-10分钟，思考素材，把你背得的句子单词语法都糅合在一句。句子间要有衔接。开头段1. There is no getting around the fact that XXX, which have/has been presented to us for long.2. One of todays major problems is that XXX3. it is highly evident by the fact that XXX4. XXX has become the epidemic in our society5. XXX has become a focus of attention in many countries很多国家关注的焦点6. XXX sparks controversy 引起争论反对题目观点：1. XXX can hardly tackle the problem(s), (thoroughly).2. It is too assertive(武断) to define XXX3. For over a decade, XXX has been a major public concern.4. adj. as it may seem尽管看起来那么论证段1. It is undeniable that XXX2. the most direct way to do this is XXX3. the dark side of XXX4. the reason for XXX lies in来源于 XXX5. （反驳段）the staggering advancement of XXX is accompanied by XXX6. as a matter of fact7. many people believe that8. however, it is also true that9. one particularly salient显著地，主要的 example is10. it is of paramount importance that11. One example will suffice to illustrate this point is that12. according to a substantial body of scientific evidence 充分的科学证据表明13. be on the increase 呈上升趋势结尾段1. Nobody can shirk his or her responsibility for XXX2. What people should do is XXX3. In summary, my view is that XXX4. I will come to the conclusion that XXX解决段1. In terms of XXX (问题) in regard to2. To tackle the problem of XXX3. in the longer term 从长远的角度看4. raise XXX awareness of XXX5. some step must be taken to reverse扭转 this trend6. not just for the sake of XXX, but for XXX as well7. to achieve this goal8. strike a wise balance between找完美平衡点9. XXX should be determined on a case-by-case basis环境类1. fulfill Xs environmental obligation(s)2. dust storms 沙尘暴3. slow down industrial production4. lower peoples comfort5. Antarctic ozone hole 南极臭氧空洞6. plastic bag7. packaging 产品外包装8. use up valuable resources and energy9. difficult to dispose of 难处理10. environmental degradation环境退化11. heavily polluted解决垃圾问题12. putting taxes on packaging 13. provide recycling services14. fine households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste解决能源问题15. the fuel consumption of cars should be made more efficient16. make use of public transport17. find alternative sources of power18. expand nuclear power19. develop solar, wind and hydro-electric power20. harness cleaner energy power 开发清洁能源科技1. technological innovations2. on assembly lines 在流水线3. short-term financial potential4. XXX the main driving force behind productivity5. modern technology has revolutionized our lives6. XXX is beyond the reach of most people 7. speed of modern technology forces us to speed up our pace of life8. the development of technology is expanding the gap between the haves and the have-nots9. the gulf between the rich and the poor has been widening at a quickening pace10. narrow the rich-poor gap媒体广告1. advertisements update consumers information about the advertised products2. widen consumers range of options3. promote manufacturers sales帮助厂商促销国际媒体1. a broader range of information2. different perspectives3. more efficient coverage of international events4. conflicts with the local values5. pose a potential threat to the social order对社会的稳定构成威胁1. ratings收视率2. circulation发行量3. implement moderate censorship执行适度的审查制度文化1. Foster greater understanding and tolerance between people of different cultures2. a potent symbol of western cultural domination 3. moral decadence4. cultural globalization is one of the major challenges文化全球一体化5. a museum should be a place where everyone is welcome and where people can come to be inspired and energized free of charge.属于每个人，免费为人们提供灵感和活力