南京二模作文改错.doc

南京二模作文改错
1. I think those that the eagle becomes a chick finally.

2. The environment the eagle lived depend the problem.
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3. The article makes an example that the eagle listens to other chicken to told us that we should not listen to others and do ourselves.

4. Only be confident can we have access to success.

5. The passage mainly talks about an eagle was hatched in the nest of a hen, so he thought he was a chicken until he died.

6. For his lack of confidence, he failed to fly on the sky. The chickens’ words also the reason for his failure.

7. The two reasons make he lose the confidence that become a real eagle which can fly on the sky and is the king of all birds.

8. If we listen to others that we couldn’t do something, we will ignore our potential.

9. The article mainly tells about an eagle hatched in the nest of a hen and never believed himself.

10. The eagle who grown up in the nest of hen want to be an eagle.

11. It is important for us to have a great dream, though the difficulty we faced, we should try our best to realize it.

12. The main reason of an eagle becomes a chicken is the eagle lacks confidence.

13. On top of this, we also listen someone’s words like chickens’ carefully. We make correct decisions.

14. At last, they only to be common people.

15. This is the main factory that he becomes a chicken forever.

16. Only we have confidence can we have courage to continue to do the thing we want to do.

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1. Moreover, the eagle isn’t equipped with the ambition that he can fly in the sky. Finally, he was reduced to a chicken and died.
2. As we all know, confidence plays a more and more important role in our daily lives. Confidence is the important access to success.
3. Therefore, we should attach much more importance to confidence. It is evident that we should possess confidence.
4. There are many reasons contributing to the fact the eagle eventually become a chicken.
5. The passage talks about an eagle who lives with chickens and dies with a thought that he is a chicken.
6. And if people have no confidence, there is possibility that people can achieve anything when faced with difficulty.