写作节日学案.doc

中考写作指导（traditional festivals）学案
Step1学习范文 the Spring Festival（范文）
The Spring Festival is the biggest and traditional festival in China. It usually comes in January or February.
It’s time to ring out the old year and get new. People usually buy new clothes for children and themselves. We also clean our houses carefully before it comes. At the same time, we put up chunlian on the doors and chuanghua on the windows. It’s time to get together. Everyone goes home to get together, though someone is far away from home. The most important is people must have a big dinner together. It’s interesting and exciting for us to shoot off fireworks to celebrate the new year. Besides, we must visit relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them. What’s more, children often get lucky money from their elders. They feel very happy.
The Spring Festival is time to ring out the old year and get new. It’s time to get together and give the best wishes to our relatives and friends. It’s cheerful time.
Step2 写作技巧
十二字秘诀：结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点+书写
1）结构（见范文）
2）要点（见范文）
3）．正确使用连接词
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and...,
not only…but also...
2.表示选择: or, either…or...
3.表示转折: but, however, though, after all
4.表示因果: because, so
5.表示条件: if,
6.表示列举: for example, for instance, such as, like
7.表示顺序: First,... Second,... Third,...
Firstly,... Secondly,... Thirdly,... First of all,... Then,... Next,... Finally,...
8.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, in fact
9.表示结论: In a word,...
10.个人总结：In my opinion,... I think...
4）语法改错。
1.It usually come in January or February.
2.It’s time to ring out the old year and gets new.
3.we on the doors puted up chunlian.
4.Everyone is go home to get together.
5.we shoot off fireworks is interesting and exciting
6.I best/very like the Spring Festival.
7.They are feel very happy
5）亮点及常用句型：
1.The Spring Festival is the biggest and traditional festival in China.
2.It usually comes in January/ February/ March/ April/ May/ June/ July/ August/ September/ October/ November/ December/ spring/ summer/ autumn/ winter
on May 1st/ the second Sunday in May/ August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar(农历)/ …
3.It’s time to… (ring out the old year and get new).
4.People usually do … We also …
5. It is interesting/exciting/… for us to …
6. Everyone goes home to get together with their family though someone is far away from home.
7. …(activity 1). What’s more/ Besides/ In addition, … (activity 2).
8. It is our duty to respect the traditions and make Chinese culture known to the world.
6）书写工整美观
Step3 写作练习：
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Maria对中国的传统节日中秋节很感兴趣，希望你给她写封信介绍中秋节。信中应包含以下要点：
1. 中秋节是中国重要的传统节日之一；2. 中秋节的时间是每年的农历八月十五（August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar(农历)；
3. 人们在中秋节吃月饼，赏月并把祝福送给亲人和朋友；
4. 自己对中秋节的认识与节日的意义。
注意： 1. 词数：80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Maria,
I’m very happy that you are interested in Chinese culture, especially the festivals. Now
Let me tell you something about the Middle Autumn Festival.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Step 4 展和评
短文通顺完整，能包含所有要点，表达清楚流畅，语言基本无误。
9-10分
短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，
语言有少量错误。
7-8分
能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但表达尚能达意。
5-6分
仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言有较多错误，影响意思表达。
3-4分
仅能写出与文章有关的单词或短语。
0-2分