Englishcompositionwriting.doc

English composition writing

襄州一中高三英语组 王红伟

Lead in: Compare two essays.（见背面）
Which one do you like better? why?

Writing skills:
Practice one ：同义词多样化，利用短语取代单词
1. use
2. like
3. should

Practice two: 掌握连接词的使用，理清句子逻辑关系。
根据句子的意思，使用正确的连接词填空
1. You’d better put on your sweater, it’s rather cold outside.
2. I must work harder, I can’t catch up with the other classmates.
3. Try it another time you’ll succeed.
4. He was hungry, he would not eat.
正确使用有关连接词：
时间先后：

转折关系：

因果关系：

让步关系：

条件关系：

表总结：

Practice three: 丰富的句式（利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采）
1. The boy came to school late again. This made the teacher very angry.

2. As I felt hungry, I decided to walk to the shop and buy some food.

3. I saw an old granny. She lay on the ground .I went over to help her.

Practice four: 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇?
1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）

2. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.（使用强调句式）

3. I passed the physics exam because of your help.（虚拟语气）

4. I won’t believe what he says.（no matter what 状语从句）

5. We all think he is a great man.（think highly of）

6. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. （the more…the more…）

7. As a result the plan was a failure.（turn out）

Discussion :找出这篇作文的错误并改正

People often say, “A smile can make you ten years younger.’’Not only smile can help us forget the unhappy things,but also it can help us keep good mood.Once I failed in my history exam.I are very sad.Later, I tell my grandma this thing say I hard—working history every day ,but history still not good.I didn’t know what I could do. Finally,I passed the exam because of her smile and encouragement. “You don’t give up because failure is the mother of success’’.my grandma said.I know the kindness smile is likes the sun,can warmed our heart.

Summary:
考场作文Tips:
（1） 取悦评卷人
有清晰的整体目标
有自然地段落衔接
经典的用词用句
有整齐美观的书写
（2） 润色文章原则
用词准确
用句经典：倒装、强调、虚拟、名人名言

实战演练：
请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
注意：①无需写标题
②内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例。