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English composition writing
襄州一中高三英语组 王红伟
Lead in: Compare two essays.（见背面）
Which one do you like better? why?
Writing skills:
Practice one ：同义词多样化，利用短语取代单词
1. use
2. like
3. should
Practice two: 掌握连接词的使用，理清句子逻辑关系。
根据句子的意思，使用正确的连接词填空
1. You’d better put on your sweater, it’
2、s rather cold outside.
2. I must work harder, I can’t catch up with the other classmates.
3. Try it another time you’ll succeed.
4. He was hungry, he would not eat.
正确使用有关连接词：
时间先后：
转折关系：
因果关系：
让步关系：
条件关系：
表总结：
Practice three: 丰富的句式（利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采）
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3、 The boy came to school late again. This made the teacher very angry.
2. As I felt hungry, I decided to walk to the shop and buy some food.
3. I saw an old granny. She lay on the ground .I went over to help her.
Practice four: 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇?
1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so
4、many things.（使用名词性从句）
2. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.（使用强调句式）
3. I passed the physics exam because of your help.（虚拟语气）
4. I won’t believe what he says.（no matter what 状语从句）
5. We all think he is a great man.（think highly of）
6. When he
5、 spoke, he felt more and more excited. （the more…the more…）
7. As a result the plan was a failure.（turn out）
Discussion :找出这篇作文的错误并改正
People often say, “A smile can make you ten years younger.’’Not only smile can help us forget the unhappy things,but also it can help us keep good mood
6、Once I failed in my history exam.I are very sad.Later, I tell my grandma this thing say I hard—working history every day ,but history still not good.I didn’t know what I could do. Finally,I passed the exam because of her smile and encouragement. “You don’t give up because failure is the mother of s
7、uccess’’.my grandma said.I know the kindness smile is likes the sun,can warmed our heart.
Summary:
考场作文Tips:
（1） 取悦评卷人
有清晰的整体目标
有自然地段落衔接
经典的用词用句
有整齐美观的书写
（2） 润色文章原则
用词准确
用句经典：倒装、强调、虚拟、名人名言
实战演练：
请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
注意：①无需写标题
②内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例。
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