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初三英语 英语书面表达英语作文汇编的专项培优练习题(及解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（江阴初级中学中考模拟）你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy，感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。要点如下： （1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。你认为自己学习上还要多花工夫。 （2）. 你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。（举例说明，适当发挥23句） （3）. 老师很乐意帮助你们。他们希望你们实现自己的理想。他们说（适当发挥23句）注意： （1）. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯。 （2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用23句话作适当发挥。 （3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. _How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. Its important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty. How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【解析】【详解】本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+时间+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try ones best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。2（北京中考模拟）“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤” 为主题的征文活动假如你是李华, 请用英文写一篇短文投稿, 讲述你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历, 并谈谈你的感受提示词语: diligence （勤奋）, make progress, effort, proud提示问题: What did you achieve by working hard? What did you do to make it? How did you feel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year. It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the competition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【详解】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历。所提供的材料中列举了“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造。主要从：你努力工作取得了什么成绩？你是怎么做到的？你觉得怎么样？这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料和提示词的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 这对我来说是一个很大的挑战，因为我对自己的英语口语没有那么自信，在公共场合说话也很害羞。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public.是由because引导的原因状语从句。【高分句型二】The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我练习得越多，就越自信。这句话用到了“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构。表示“越，就越”的意思。3（湖南省岳阳开发区长岭中学中考模拟）时光荏苒，转眼间你已经成长为一名即将步入高中的青少年。在你十几年的人生旅途中，一定充满了各种各样的欢乐。请你以“_ makes me happy”为题并根据所给要点提示, 写一篇英语短文给校英语广播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使你快乐的事情及理由。 要点提示:1. 使你快乐的事情是什么；2. 它使你快乐的理由。要求: 1. 请补全标题, 如reading，traveling或helping others等；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 词数80左右，短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。_ makes me happy【答案】One possible version:Reading makes me happy During my spare time, I like reading best. It can always make me happy. Reading can bring many things to me, such as knowledge, ways of doing things, chances to know about different cultures and so on. Reading a good book is like talking with a wise person. When I feel lonely and when I meet troubles, I always find a book to read. When I am lost in the interesting stories, I wont feel unhappy anymore. Reading brings me so much happiness that Ill keep the habit of reading along my life journey.【解析】【分析】这是一篇话题作文，以“_ makes me happy”为题，写一篇英语短文给校英语广播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使我快乐的事情及理由。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I like，Reading can，When I feel，When I am lost in等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了读书让我感到快乐，接下来介绍读书的好处，最后指出我会一生保持读书的习惯。此处like doing sth, such as, know about, talk with, be lost in, bring sb sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4（福建中考模拟）宽容是一种美德，人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊，面对矛盾，多一份包容和谅解，生活 就会多一缕阳光。请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括：你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅了对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。字数80字左右。 注意：不得出现真实的校名和人名。提示词语：forgive原谅提示问题：What happened between you and him/her?Why did you decide to forgive him/her?How did you feel after forgiving him/her?I still remember what happened between .【答案】I still remember what happened between my friend Mike and me. Two months ago, Mike invited me to go to a concert at seven oclock. I got there on time. I waited for a long time, but Mike didnt show up in the end. I called him and asked him what happened. He forgot all about the concert. He was playing computer games at home at that time.I got angry with Mike because he hurt my feelings. Mike also realized his mistake. He called me several times and said sorry to me. He even sent me a present to make me happy. Finally I forgave him. After forgiving him, I felt relaxed and happy.【解析】【详解】这是一篇话题作文，请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括: 你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅了对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。字数80字左右。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，认真阅读提示问题（1.What happened between you and him/her? 2.Why did you decide to forgive him/her? 3.How did you feel after forgiving him/her?4.I still remember what happened between .），提示问题就是本文的提示要点，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示问题和提示词。字数应在80词左右。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：我还记得我朋友迈克和我之间发生的事。两个月前，迈克邀请我七点钟去听音乐会。我准时到达那里。我等了很长时间，但迈克最终没有出现。我打电话问他发生了什么事。他把音乐会的一切都忘了。那时他在家里玩电脑游戏。我生迈克的气是因为他伤害了我的感情。迈克也意识到了他的错误。他给我打了好几次电话，向我道歉。他甚至送我一件礼物让我开心。最后我原谅了他。原谅他之后，我感到轻松愉快。【点睛】书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。要学以致用。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。 （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。5（福建中考模拟）书面表达随着阳光体育运动在全国的开展，“每天锻炼一小时，健康工作 50 年，幸福生活一辈子。” 的理念深入人心，校园里出现了可喜的变化。请以“Sports in Our School”为题给校园英文报写 一篇 80 词左右的报道。内容要点提示：Time for sportsKinds of sportsChange of students health and studyChange of school life要求：（1）文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；（3）内容完整，可适当发挥，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范。Sports in Our SchoolSports in our school have changed a lot. 【答案】Sports in Our SchoolSports in our school have changed a lot. Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week, and we have at least one hour to exercise every dayStudents get so excited at these changes. More and more students take an active part in the ball games, running, and jumping on the playground.Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.Whats more, a healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.【解析】【详解】本文属于话题作文，描述学校体育运动的变化。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如more than，at least，more and more,take an active part in, a good way to, whats more，动名词做主语，谓语动词用单数等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。6（河南中考模拟）书面表达生命就像是一种回声，你送出什么它就送回什么，你播种什么就收获什么，你给予什么就得到什么。因此，人们常说“帮助别人就是帮助自己”。请以Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves 为题写一篇短文。要求：1. 思路清晰，观点明确，语法正确，有说服力；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 80词左右。Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves_【答案】Helping Others Is Helping OurselvesNobody is perfect enough to manage to do everything, so help is necessary and important in our life. On the one hand, we should help others often. Giving help can bring us pleasure. Helping an old man cross the road often makes me feel confident and useful. On the other hand, we need others help when we get into trouble. I often get help from my parents, friends, teachers, even some strangers. Thanks to their help, it is easy for me to get out of trouble.All in all, everyone needs help. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.【解析】【详解】本文属于话题作文，主要讲述“帮助别人就是帮助自己”。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如adj+enough，on the one hand，on the other hand，make sb do，get into trouble，thanks to，it is adj for sb to do sth。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。7（北京初三）题目1： 假如你是李华，你们班打算去“希望之家（Hope House）”孤儿院做志愿服务，你打算邀请你们学校的留学生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，你们将在孤儿院做什么，以及他可以做什么准备。提示词语：gate，play，tell stories，gift提示问题：When and where will you meet?What will you do there?What do you advise Peter to prepare for the activity 【答案】例文How is it going?I am writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity at the Hope House. We will meet at the school gate at eight this Sunday morning. We will play games with the children and tell them some interesting stories.We will also give them some gifts. Would you like to tell the children something about your hometown? You can prepare some photos and videos to show.I am sure we will have an unforgettable time at the Hope House.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是一篇邀请信，注意邀请信的格式，开头问候，中间部分说正事，最后询问他的回答。本材料给的提示比较多，学生可以按照提示，进行问题的回答即可。注意把相关内容用连接词连接起来，使文章通顺。【详解】文章为邀请信，开头问候，点明写信内容，写信是为了邀请你和我们一起参加希望之家的志愿活动。我们将会在周日8点在校门口集合，主要活动有和孩子们玩耍，讲故事，赠送礼物等。同时，建议对方做一些事情，可以向孩子们展示一下你的家乡。希望你能和我们一起参加。【点睛】本书面表达：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，文章具有条理性，思维缜密。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。8（北京中考模拟）题目“持之以恒，方得始。”坚持是一种可贵的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事（爱好，习惯），你是怎样做的，以及你的感受。提示词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示问题：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】Its important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and Im very proud of myself.I feel more confident and Im ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根据所给提示写一篇自己在初中生活中坚持做的事；文中写明自己是怎么做的并谈谈自己的感受。【详解】1.本篇要求根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做的一件事，根据提示，描写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写How do you feel?用一般现在时。书写时要紧扣主题，文句通顺。2.本例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自己起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到现在比以前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自己的影响；文章结构清晰，前后呼应。3.本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的短语和重点句型。比如：固定搭配、固定句型Its +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；状语从句sothat ；比较级do much better in 、feel more confident等；短语多彩、文句表达多样。 ”9（黑龙江中考模拟）假如你是 Lin lei，与朋友Mary约好一起去历史博物馆，但因故不能赴约。请给她写封电子邮件，内容包括：（1）表示歉意；（2）说明原因；（3）另约时间。_【答案】Dear Mary,Im very sorry to say that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning. I have to go to see my friend in the hospital that morning. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Sunday morning? If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best I should be available any